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Reviews for Small Two of Pieces *Revised*

By : Sky
  • From ANON - ayachan on December 20, 2005
    ohhh, i love it! i'm glad that you decided to redo this story!!! damn jou for forgetting about yugi ;_; lol.. slave slang huh? very creative ^^ can't wait until the next chapter
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  • From ANON - Lyndsay-Marie on December 20, 2005
    Yay! This is still the great story I remember it being! **loves on you** You're doing a great job (as usual!!) I'm glad that things are slightly better for you now and I can tell by the way you write! You are truly a talented writer :)

    ~Lyndsat-Marie
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  • From ANON - SydneyKate on December 15, 2005
    Hey! I finally found you again. I remember this story up at ff.net, it was all completed and some asshole reported you for no reason whatso ever so you lost the whole story and had no back ups... at least, that was one of them. I have been looking for your account on here for the longest time. I remember reading your ff's all the time!!! Yay!!! So you are going on my bookmark, and you will be updating this soon, right?
    As for how you write and stuff, tell them if they don't like your style, to go and write their own! You rock!!!
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  • From ANON - angle of sex on December 14, 2005
    UPDATE SOON PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - pyro_pixie_13 on December 10, 2005
    OMG!!! seriously very happy to see this story once again...i think that my might have actually squeeled when I saw the title. Anyway I would like to take the time to compliment you on your enhanced i.e. matured writing abilities and to say that I look forward to reading the rest of the revised story. Also my sympathies towards all of the nonsense that you were put through.

    regards,

    pixie
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  • From ANON - Whitney on December 08, 2005
    OMFG!!!!!!!!!! OMFG!!!!! I REMEMBER THIS STORY FROM FF.NET!! It was my all-time favorite. I reviewed for every chapter, I loved it!! You know? A couple months ago, I spent hours on FF.NET to find this story. I remembered the name and everything! I could never find it....Now I know why: it was deleted! Heheh!

    I can't believe you are bringing it back! Gaw!! I'm so happy! *jumps for joy* SToP was my frist lemon story I ever read. Now....This was like three or four years ago, and back then....I skipped like every single lemon part. I'm almost seventeen, and lemon stories don't scare me anymore! LOL!

    I can hardly breathe. I'm not kidding. This is my all-time favorite story, (with so many reviews, you would never remember me....) I'm a major loyal person to you! I worship your stories!

    I just want to thank you! *glomps you* I remember a lot of the scenes.... I want to say the scenes, but I don't want to give away the story. (I remember the little potion scheme for Yami and Yugi. That's all I'm gonna say!!)

    Maybe I can talk to you through e-mail, or AIM..... (if I'm sounding stalker-ish, or freak-ish, just say so in the next chapter and I'll stop it!) ^^

    I can't wait for the next chappie. Wonderful. Even though I know what is gonna happen, I can't wait to read it!!

    Whitney
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  • From ANON - Lyndsay-Marie on December 08, 2005
    I'm so glad that I found this story again! I waas worried that it was lost! Also I read your author's notes and I am glad that you added them to the story, it just makes the story all that much more personal and meaningful. I am very glad that you are feeling better :) I absolutely love the revisions you've made to the story thus far! It's great, and don't worry, that same thing happened to my stories on FF.net, and even when they didn't have any lemon or anything in them it happened. It was quite frustrating actually. I also hadn't realised that you were the same age as me...cool^^ Anyways, thanks for making my day a little (actually, a lot happier) by putting this story up for my massive enjoyment. Lovies!!

    ~Lyndsay-Marie
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  • From ANON - Smiffle o' Godde on December 07, 2005
    Yay! It's good! I read your other version too, and I can't decide which one I like better. This one seems to have more depth. Anyway, update soon, it's awsome!!! ^_^
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  • From ANON - Kat_Tales on December 07, 2005
    I am ever so glad to see this story again. I was going to leave a review yesterday, but the site decided that quit working and when I came back later it was gone. Anyway, I was looking for something to read and putting off doing my homework. Couldn't really find anything and kept thinking just one more and I'll do the paper. Half way down the page I saw the work "SToP" and frozen. I knew that name, really knew that name. Next I saw the title "Small Two of Pieces" and found I couldn't breathe! Lastly, I saw your name "SSJ Sky." I jumped for joy and did a happy dance. I just couldn't believe that you were back. I mean, you were the best. Everything I have ever read was compared to your wrote. The details, the plot, the pairing *winkwink*, everything was just perfect and very few could compare. Yeah, four odd years past since I had read your work and so it was a bit idealized in my head, but still. But this revision is very good as well. It has a more mature feeling to it. To those of us who have read this before can agree, this revision just makes it better. I am not sure if you remember me. I reviewed some what at FF.net when this was there. BluJay or Kat_Tales would have been my name. But just know, I will be reading this again and will be waiting for more.
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