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Reviews for Give It Up First

By : Kugatsu
  • From kittyblue on May 28, 2006
    Please Update this!! Please PLease PLEase PLEAse PLEASe PLEASE!!!!!!!
    I love the first chapter!! So yummy!!! =)
    Now I want to read the lemon!, of course.., and see what exactly is going to happen with Ryou and Jou!!
    I hope you update soon!
    =^p^=
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  • From ANON - Halloween on January 02, 2006
    I love it! Please update it! I hpe ryou and Jou fuck
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  • From ANON - Cata on December 08, 2005
    Yes please. Continue.
    I just love your stories and the unusual pairings you come up with. I was kind of tired of the Yami/hikari pairings and Seto/Jou, you know. It's not that they are bad, but a little variety is always refreshing.
    Besides the situations you create are always interesting and fun, and your writting skills are good.
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  • From ANON - Aino Hikaru on December 08, 2005
    W00t!!!!! I love it! The story was far more in depth than I expected! Yay! Jou/Ryou shiny-ness! (I'm so hopped up on candy right now though, I bet you can tell...) I like the whole, 'normal world' AU too, it really fit the story. I have to admit though, the entire change POV's confused the hell outta me at times, and then when you switched to 3rd person omniscient, I kept thinking it was either Jou or Ryou POV. Course.... now I feel a little stupid...

    The Jou and Valon relationship was very believable (and good for those who don't appreciate Jou and Ryou like I do), I could totally see it coming back if Ryou and Jou were to have problems in the future. I also like the Bakura and Yugi! So cute, poor bakura though, I think he would be forced to behave. lol! Behold the awesome power of the whiny, bratty, nerdy Yugi!! Bow before his unintentional (?) *chuckle* blackmail sk1llz!!!!! mmm *drool* Bakura on top of Yugi.....

    And good on you for making Atemu the prissy little drama queen he is!! He's such a self assured, arrogant, son of a bitch!! I mean really!!! Yugi totally told him NOT to use the seal of oricalchaos, and what's he do? He uses the damn card. And who pays for his arrogance???!!! Certainately NOT the almighty pharoah who could NEVER make a mistake. Nope, Yugi does!!! Personally, I think Yugi pushed the pharoah out of the way so he could make him face his mistake instead of taking the easy way out. Kinda hard to see how you actions effect others when you're just another picture on a stone wall. Nope, Yugi made Yami face the others and tell them what he did. Good Yugi!! *pats head*

    *ahem* Sorry, still haven't forgiven him....

    Eh, anyway, I could totally see this one morphing in to a huge ass story, you've got all the makings for this complex, tangled, love triangle world....(hint, hint)...

    Love ya Chica!!
    Hikaru!

    Thank you so much!!!
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  • From ANON - Velvetina on December 08, 2005
    I did review before but I thought I should review again since the nasty glitch wiped all of the reviews. I love it but how dare Atemu be mean to Ryou. Our poor swet ickle angel lol. Jou deserves him far more. I do believe that a second installment would be very welcome tough *puppy eyes*

    Velvetina x
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  • From Wicabeth on December 08, 2005
    I'll have to admit that I'm interested in seeing this develop if you decide to continue.

    *pants..* And the mental image of Varon riding Jou like that.. *pauses to wipe the drool*

    And I think the thought of Bakura/Yugi is cute XD
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