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Reviews for For the Love of a Pharaoh

By : puzzlefreak213
  • From tavia454 on February 04, 2007
    Good start. If you still need a beta, let me know. Please keep going!
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  • From ANON - AngeloflightPd on December 16, 2005
    I do like chapter 3; I hope that you write more and soon, but let us what for the lemon for a compele more chapters. Its geat so far just don't stop in the middle of your story ok. I want to read this story all the way to the end.
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  • From ANON - AngeloflightPd on December 14, 2005
    I like the way you started your story. telling about the Mallenum Items and what they can do. its a good start I hope you do up date and soon.
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  • From ANON - RacFelthown on December 13, 2005
    Pretty good start!!!!
    I'd like to read more of this story; and it'd be very nice if you continued it.
    One suggestion, though: try putting spaces between paragraphs. It'll look better
    that way, and it will be easier to read ;)

    Ja Ne!

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