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By : Kitteh
  • From ANON - Kachan on January 20, 2006
    Homg, another review.
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  • From ANON - Mina on January 20, 2006
    ROLFAO! Poor Bakura indeed! I thought Bakura was the one with the vampire teeth not Malik. Oh well. Its a really great fic and i hope u update soon. I love the way its going and think that u have a knack for writting. Even if u don't get a lot of reviews (Which u should) i hope u update soon. I am looking forward to reading the rest. Great plot by the way.!
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  • From ANON - YamiRynEnjeru on January 17, 2006
    My darling, that was... spazztastically pretty X3

    Bwuah, let me leave a proper review XD;;

    -The writing style is quite nice in terms of letting the piece transition quickly, the story rolls along smoothly even when the inclination of one view switches.
    -You paint a very nice picture with the sprinkling of details you put in. It doesn't take away from what is occuring, but adds to the scene very well.
    -The characterizations you've set up are amusing, yet don't take away from the characters as you've made it believable and well-crafted.

    -I'm highly amused that Yami/Atemu was called a brat =3 Because it's true, silly little bugger that he is.
    -I'm even more amused that Malik bit Yami/Atemu XD Although I feel bad for Bakura that he was slightly paranoid by Malik's teeth, it's still fun =3

    Hurrah *hearts* You are a great writer, love. You make me jealous... but I love you and simply am in awe instead =D
    I'm gonna have to squeeze this fic on my list of stalkees o.o Bwuah.

    *much love & adoration*
    ~YRE
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  • From ANON - The King of Thieves on January 17, 2006
    I love the little witty comments..."It's a sob story"..."Then make me cry"...I love it, please more, Hikari, Yami needs more

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  • From ANON - Paranoid on January 15, 2006
    luffs! I really love your fic! so keep writting! >_>;; I will give you! cookies and stuff....I just love Malik X Tousoku-ou! though not as much as Marik X Tousoku-ou! but STILL! I love the way you writing! ish really good!
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  • From ANON - ladywolfTerri on January 15, 2006
    Great story so far!!!...^^... poor Kura!..*LOL*.. can't wait to see what Malik pulls next!
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  • From ANON - Pysche on January 15, 2006
    Oh I love this! Bakura's so funny and Malik's just adorable. I love the way you describe them, too... yum. Looking forward to more!
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  • From ANON - sglily on January 15, 2006
    Very nice story! I really like these two characters and how you have portrayed them thus far. Malik... an exotic, somewhat arrogant, spoiled brat who seems to be unaware that he is "pretty". I love Bakura and how he teased Malik upon first meeting him. Very well described over all. I liked the little dream sequence of Bakura's where he is all smug, sitting pretty on his throne, waiting to be pleasured in front of his enemy and then Malik's teeth taking care of that wanton interlude! Very funny. Loved the story and look forward to more!
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  • From ANON - The King of Thieves on December 26, 2005
    I absolutely love the beginning, and you, you are wonderful and awesome and I'm going to love reading the rest of the story

    ^_~
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  • From ANON - Mel on December 22, 2005
    UPDATE!!!!!!!! It is much good!
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  • From ANON - Kachan on December 22, 2005
    So...uhm...write more? o_o It's intruiging and well written already. ^^
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  • From ANON - ayachan on December 21, 2005
    *drool* bakura.... *drool* lol, great beginning!
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  • From ANON - z10 on December 21, 2005
    heheheh.
    kool
    nice detail and writing style
    can't wait for more
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