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Reviews for House Of Motou

By : DarkNecrofear
  • From Glisssunseeker on February 12, 2012
    One serious flaw in your story is chapter 7 where Ryou becomes his Egyptian self and can't remember what year it is. He says the year is 4200 BC. BC means Before Christ. If he really was from (what we call) 4200 BC, he would know it by Egyptian years and not as 4200 years before the birth of Christ.

    In fact, since you never really came back to this idea of multiple Ryou timelines, I don't really see a point for that section at all.
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  • From ANON - Sarah Costa on January 22, 2006
    Awwww...I love it. I can't wait for the sequel. Please update soon. JA
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  • From ANON - December Jewel on January 22, 2006
    Uh, there isn't a chapter 16. When you typed the chapter numbers, there is a 15 and then it skips down to 17.... Just thought I would let you know because I have no idea what they're talking about with the moutian...
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  • From ANON - Nekosune on January 22, 2006
    I LOVED IT!!!! That was great! Yamyams, cookies, and pocky for you! I really can't wait for the sequal! If you post it soon, I'll give you more yamyams, but for now, here's a can of Black Cherry Vanilla Coke to keep you up and help you write! (I'm actually drinking one right now, they're so GREAT!!!) I really can't wait! ^_^
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  • From ANON - ladywolfTerri on January 21, 2006
    It was a very good job...^^...congrats on finishing it!!
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  • From ANON - ladywolfTerri on January 21, 2006
    GAH!!! NO!!!!! Ryou can't be a vamp!! He is supposed to be with Kura, Marik and Malik!!
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  • From ANON - Nekosune on January 20, 2006
    I loved it! EXTRA yamyams, cookies, and pocky for you! (glad you enjoy them so much!) I can't wait for your next update! More yamyams if you update soon!
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  • From ANON - Millie Ishtar Motou on January 20, 2006
    Seto: NO JOEY!!!

    Yugi: HELP!!!

    Ryou: AGGHHHHH!!

    Yami: NO YUGI!!!

    Bakura: RYOU!

    Marik: MALIK!

    Shadi: calm down everyone; we'll get through this, I hope...

    Shit...
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  • From ANON - Nekosune on January 19, 2006
    I loved it! Yamyams, cookies, and pocky for you! ^_^ I love Jou for a laugh, too, but he's also my favorite angst character! ^_^ More yamyams if you update soon!
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  • From ANON - ladywolfTerri on January 19, 2006
    NNNOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!! They can't have changed Ryou!!! That is awful!!! and poor Jou!!!!

    Please update soon!!!
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  • From ANON - Nekosune on January 18, 2006
    Oh! I just love it so much! Wonderful! I can't wait for there to be more! Yamyams, cookies, and pocky for you! ^_^ Update soon for yamyams!
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  • From ANON - Sarah Costa on January 18, 2006
    Damn it!!! I hate cliffs!!! What happen next? I hope the yamis kill the bitch and rescue their lovers. Please update as soon as you can. Ja
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  • From ANON - Flames Angel on January 17, 2006
    i love it! bravo, bravo! (lol) anyway i am really looking forward to the next chapter.
    check up on this fic later!
    JA NE!
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  • From ANON - Sarah Costa on January 17, 2006
    Great lemon!! I hope Yugi accepts to be a demon and Yami's mate. Please update as soon as you can. Ja
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  • From ANON - Millie Ishtar Motou on January 17, 2006
    Yami: my Yugi's a screamer!

    Yugi: *blush* so are you!

    Bakura: *laughing so much sides hurt* HAHAHAHAHAAHAA the Lord is a screamer!

    Marik: love you Kura!

    Ryou: I love Kura more! so there!

    ok, Update soon why do people inspire me to these? I dunno...
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