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Reviews for Heart of the Ocean

By : Lechan
  • From ANON - YAY-i on January 09, 2006
    I loved this story and it gets better every time I read again. LOL. Can't wait to see the others stories!
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  • From ANON - dip on January 08, 2006
    oh my goood... *rubs eyes* wow... that took me a whole week to read (not that I’m complainin’' =3) and well... wow. I’ve read a few mer stories with these two but nothing like that lol! I think the whole idea on how the merpeople in this story mate, whether it was your idea or not, is so neat! And I just love how you emphasize Yugi’s strength. Something that can get lost in a lot of fics.

    One thing I have to comment on is how well you write action. It's like I can picture perfectly what's going on, their reactions, the atmosphere and surroundings like a movie =3 Not to mention that the yaoi scenes are HOT as always lol >3

    Oh yea! lol I died laughing at the 'fuck like a dolphin' statement and did EXACTLY what yami did and didn't realize it till I kept reading. The actions are so realistic! "This happens, naturally, you'd act like that" Nothing is 'out of place' totally in sync with what's going on, tis awesome >3

    this story is defiantly my fav. Next to 'memories of shadow and light' which you refuse to continue for us starving drug addicts X_- lol! Honestly, take as long as you like, but just don't stop writing because some of us tend to get desperate ={

    My vote: ROMANCE DAMMIT! *cough* erm… yea =3

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  • From ANON - j.s. on January 06, 2006
    wow...3 days later and ive finally managed 2 finish reading
    a very addictive story dat kept me up...im sooo exhausted
    great story!+
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 06, 2006
    OMG!!!! This story was so AWESOME!!!!!!! I started reading around noon and just got done with it at 9:08pm! You did one top notch great story.... And now my bum hurts from sitting and reading for so long. To tell you the truth, I thought it might not be good since it didn't go along with the original story line but how very wrong I was! You should totally make up some other stories to go along with it cause it would be cool to see the things that Yami and Yugi do now! And I'd also love to see some romance between Seto and Joey. Keep up the amazing work... I'll be waiting!!!! :)
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  • From ANON - Sansi on January 05, 2006
    *faints* Don't tell me you really mean this is a ONE-SHOT. It took me about 15 minutes to save it on my laptop. I didn't think he would make. To much information for him at one and for my poor brain. But I gladly took the risk and after a few hours I can say I beat the "monster" you call one shot. I have to say it's one of the best works I have read and you can be really proud. Both Yami and Yugi played their characters well (how do you train them ^^) and the plot was great! *pokes her* and now back to your unfinished fics!
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  • From ANON - inuyasha nut on January 04, 2006
    i adore dis story, its soooo cool!!!!!!!!!!
    is dere gonna b some sort of squeal?
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  • From ANON - Arainaina on January 04, 2006
    Awsome chapter I really liked it
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  • From ANON - Havoc Tellenoi on January 04, 2006
    WOOT!!! that was an amazing story. and so beautifully rendered and written and just..well beautiful. it had meaning and joy and plot twists up the bum (no pun intended). really it was a piece of art. thanks for the lovley tidbit!
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  • From ANON - EcchoKat on January 04, 2006
    That was truely a beautif and moving story i cried. You brought out the charaters so well. Good job
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  • From ANON - catti-dono on January 03, 2006
    Man that was one hell of a long, long, long, long, etc one-shot....It was frick'n fantastic...your writing style is greatly improving as is your angst...it was very sad in a couple of places...I would be very intrigued on how you would write a Jou/Seto story....that you be tasty....but then I would also like tio see how you would finish "Memories of Shadow and Light", cant tell this is your stalker, huh...laughs evilly....catti
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  • From ANON - Dara on January 03, 2006
    Och yes. I love that story. Please send me thise songs. I want to know that Atemu can back to his human form and make love to Yugi. Please. Hugs Lechan. I promise I will be good girl when you will post yours story... please.
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  • From ANON - Ayeshagirl on January 03, 2006
    Holy fuck that was long! Took me hours to read... brilliant though... had an actual plot... plus now i finally have an idea of how merpeople reproduce... thankyou for the wonderful story... i'll look out for the one-shots...
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  • From ANON - AberrationSquall on January 03, 2006
    Damn...that was long *blinks* Am I blind now? Good story, though, very nice and...interesting read ^^ Keep it up.
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  • From ANON - Yami Yuugi on January 03, 2006
    Good Lord of Re, took me four hours to finish but was so worth it. I have been looking foward to your story for a long time, after hearing about it in your past updates on your other two yugioh stories. I thoroughly enjoyed this LONG one-shot. I love merboy/merman Y/YY fics, and you did great in detail. I would like a copy of the song if it isn't too much trouble. I can email you if wish instead though. Anyways, I hope to read more of your wonderful stories in the future, and hopefully the second chapter of the "The key of Ra."
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  • From ANON - Feli Lupan Draco on January 03, 2006
    One can only type OMFG. This is abosolutely amazing. I couldn't stop reading it once I started. I wouldn't mind reading a Ryou/Bakura fic. I can't help but fall in love with that couple. You have such a talent I wouldn't want to stop on their story either. I hope you keep this up. I may just have to be a constant reviewer. Ok, I'm sorry but I'm so hyped up on this story. I can't help that I'm a romantic. This just makes it all the worse. I wish I had your talent but alas, I only can draw moderately. Can't draw people very well though. That's the only big downfall. Way off subject..... Anyway.... Thank you for the wonderful story! Feel free to email me anytime!

    F.L.Draco
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