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By : WhosJeebus

From Raykushi on July 08, 2010
Well now, that's not fair to abandon such a good fic when the rest of them got finished! Yes I read all your aff.net fics in one day. XD I'm obsessive like that.

Could you at least drop us a short summary of how you planned to finish the fic, since it has been four years and I doubt you'll be writing the rest? I would certainly like to see if Ryou does end up being Mokuba's mystery boyfriend.

(To be honest, I completely hated the Shovel fic, but your writing is just so detailed and interesting that I spent three hours reading all 10 chapters of a fic I hated. :P Squick like that just isn't my thing. However, I do love your writing and the companion fic was pretty fricken hilarious so you've been redeemed in my eyes lol)
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From Leeana69 on December 30, 2008
Why do I have the feeling that Mokuba is dating Ryou?? Should be an interesting Christmas dinner for sure. ^-^
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From ANON - Cirquegirl999 on February 10, 2006
Where's the new chapter? : (
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From ANON - Maddie on February 09, 2006
So far, it's really really cute. Can't wait for an update!!!
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From ANON - seth kaishi on February 07, 2006
OMG! love the story and its coming out just great, i cant wait till the next chapter comes on. let me know when that happens? mind to email me and let me know when that is? i would love to read it. thank you and great job and work on it!
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From ANON - Jelise on February 03, 2006
ohh...you should have had Mokuba walk in right at the moment were Jou unbottons his pants. That would have played for an interesting...finish. Anyways, I meant to review the last five times i've stumbled upon this amazing fic, but I had always had another fic to turn to right after this. I had found that you had updated this, and as it was the only thing i had up at the time (now having up my own story for you had inspired me with a part in this) I decided to message. I really love this story, and how you seem to incorporate Jou into the love lives of those around him. It's interesting to watch it unfold.

If you really didn't want people to think Ryou and Mokuba were together, you shouldn't have made their stories so simular to one another, or are you trying to make us think it's him, and it's actually not? Oh hell now I've gone and confused myself.

Keep up the amazingly well written and stunningly original story!!!!!!!
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From ANON - Cirquegirl999 on February 03, 2006
OMG! Loved the new chapter (like I always do!) That was too funny with having Marik stuck out of a window, I always thought that would be something Bakura would do but if you don't get out often I guess you need a little thrill. Here's the funny thing about people not reviewing so much, my answer is that they're too busy fantasizing about Seto & Joey doing the dirty in ancient Egypt,lol. It almost makes me want to review more than once but I'd rather you curse those lazy readers out for not reviewing (pssst...don't tell but I check how many reviews you get all the time so I have an idea of when the next chappie is out) Are you writing Dragon's Lair just on your computer or are you posting it? As for the suprise guest for dinner...hmmm...I think it's...(drumroll) Seto! I mean it would be horrible for him to miss Joey's Christmas dinner, so he has to come! (P.S. This means I do want you to email the answer) Loved the idea that you stop the chapter right before the good stuff, I'm sure someone was pissed,lol. Anyway this is getting long and I want you toanswer my question so keep the chapters coming and I can't wait to find out what happens next!
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From ANON - dark_Angel on February 03, 2006
=O i didnt notice u updated last chapter! >
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From ANON - DevilInTraining on February 02, 2006
Well its nice to read from your talented imangination again. Finally a chapter full of Marik goodness! I could defiently see this happening in the story line. If someone did things like that to me I would probeally distance myself away from them too. (Even though it techneally wasent his fault)Poor Marik having to have so much angest in their lives. I have no problem with angest its just that none of the boys in Yu-Gi-Oh have exactly had the most pleasent of backrounds. Seto with the adoption syco stepfather dead parents thing, Joey with the parents devoricing and nearly blind sister and abusive father thing, Yugi and getting his ass kicked by bullies at school thing, Mokuba with having to deal with Seto's angest Tristin and having to deal with Joey's angest, Peguses and the whole dead wife thing, Otogi and the (from what I read in the manga) deranged father felt all alone thing, Ryou and the dead mother father never home dead sister that he write letters to thing, Bakura and the village burned to the ground lost all family and friends thing, Yami and the dad killed having to save the world twice thing. And thoes are just the main people in the fandom! I lke angest its just with so much of it alredy in the fandom I just like see the boys of Yu-Gi-Oh being happy for once. (But dont let that stop you from writing wonderful angest stories in the feature!) OK comments on this chapter. Superb as usueal! Two of my favorite blondes rolling around in the snow.*drools*Well I think my little bioargrphy of your wonderful story is done for now. Update please I need this sory to get through the school week. ^__^ See Ya!
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From ANON - LilyChan on February 02, 2006
I know I'm talking to yah on MSN but I want to review this fanfic just because I can! >_>!

Jealous Seto is fun to play with. XD (Then again I need to update my own fanfics...) But Denial Seto is just as fun. -hugs the Seto as well, but gets beat with a newspaper- XD;

XD;; Oh dear. You're making me want to form bunnies with the cyber sex idea ALONE. Although I doubt Jou has a computer in his shit-for-apartment unless he uses Yugi and Yugi deems it okay for Jou to do that... XDDD UGH. NO IDEAS. >>;

Heh, I write when I'm hyper. XDD;;; I don't know if that's a good idea or no.
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From ANON - LilyChan on January 29, 2006
Ah. ^_^ I see! I'm going to go read that as soon as I finish reviewing. In any case, awww Seto got jealous. XD; Would they ever get into phone sex? O_o; Somehow I can see that happening. XD;; Anyway I hope you feel better ^____^ -hugs- And update soon. ;3
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From ANON - Kiawna on January 27, 2006
Ph33r me! I'm your stalker! XD! *giggles*

Aww, poor Joey. Seto doesn't trust him. XP Course, Joey overreacted too. XD;

*giggles* Joey acting as Mr. Fix-it. Awesome. *pouts* Seto better be home before christmas. I don't like seeing Joey sad. T_T

Update soon~ Now I have 3 places to stalk. XD

Ki~
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From ANON - Cirquegirl999 on January 27, 2006
You rotten jerk!lol I can't believe you didn't answer the Ryou/Mokuba question, but I completely understand. Anyway, as for the whole perfect relationship between Joey&Seto, never thought fics work out correclty if they DIDN'T have a few bumps in the road, they'r just too different to not cause friction. I wonder with all this advice Joey is giving what's he doing in as a bookstore employee? I think he'd made a fortune of he became one of those love doctors that fixes relationships. Loved the new chapter, you've done it once again and I love the whole " Bakura said I was your sex slave" bit, I wonder what ancient Seth thought about that relationship or did he get a piece to? Hmmm, I wonder, who's the suprise guest for dinner?
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From ANON - DevilInTraining on January 26, 2006
Yay your back with a vengence! *does the happy dance* Great chapter as usueal. I never thought that Yami would feel that way about himself but now that I think about it, it really does make perfect sense. I never jumped onto the whole Yami/Tea bandwagon it's just too overdone. Isis drunk now that trueally made my day right thear. Such a classy dignified lady tottaly drunk. It makes me happy. Joey should start charging for his "sessions". It reminds me of my group of friends. I think once you become a senior all your friends sundually think your the advice master and run to you with all their problems. Well Ill drop my 2 cents in the pot and say it's Ryou for Mokuba's boyfriend but who knows.I was glad to see this was a long chapter when I read the fallout scean between Seto and Joey. I dident want to be left hanging on the whole will they make up before the chapter is done thing. At least they are happy again and all is right with the world. The Gods can kiss my ass. Such wonderful usage of the Egytpian language. *snickers* Hmm Yugi/Rebecca. Yeah I could probeally see that if Yugi could get over her childnessess. I know this isant spelled right but it is just a review. Actually this is turning into an essay so I guess I should end it. Umm great chapter wonderful chatherization and overall storyline/plot. Keep up the great work and please update soon. Se Ya! ^___^
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From ANON - KeiEn on January 26, 2006
Seto's clumsy and jealous as always, ne ^_^!
I really loved the little lover's quarrel; and what about kids?
Can't wait to see who comes next to cheer Joey up, and I hope Mokuba's boyfriend will be Ryou!
Jaa ne!
KeiEn

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