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Reviews for My Blue Eyed Dragon In White Armor

By : tash1021
  • From ANON - LaTasha Person on October 02, 2006
    Wow! this story is getting interesting. Isnt his father supposed to be awaiting trial for the child prosituting charges though?
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  • From ANON - Millie Ishtar Motou on October 01, 2006
    *grins manically*

    Hey Marik, Bakura, this author has turned 'Kura into the Phroah's best Friend and Oh yea...he's a lawyer how do you feel Bakura baby?

    Marik: Three letters: W. T. F!!??

    Bakura: the only time i'd ever become Pharoah's best friend would be when he's six feet under pushing up daisy's!!

    *laughs* THAT'S MEAN!! Funny nonetheless, yet mean...

    Bakura: *bows* Love you too xx

    OoooOOoo that's creepy Don't ever do that again...

    Bakura: *laughs*

    Marik: ..........

    .........

    Bakura: .........
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  • From ANON - ChibiRinni on October 01, 2006
    Bakura better rip Jou's Dad a new one or so help me!!! **internal scream of rage** ^.^;; ok, well.... please update soon! ^_^ It's getting really good so, hope to see a new chappy soon. Till then, byee!!

    ~ChibiRinni ^.^
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  • From ANON - dragon on September 30, 2006
    gah so good and so awosme i love that bakura a lawyer..oh my if that ever really happen the world would really end as we know it oh well bakura so awsome so who cares i love it just keeps getting better and better do continue
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  • From ANON - bunni on September 30, 2006
    wheres the rest!?!?!?!
    i like this story, its good
    keep updating, plz.
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  • From ANON - LadyVirgo91656 on September 30, 2006
    A perfect job for a thief. A shark. HaaHaaHaa. Oh this is too good. Where's Seto. I'm hoping he's trying to help his puppy. Update soon.
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  • From ANON - Alydhe on September 22, 2006
    Okay, you have a pretty good plot idea here, but you seem to have a little trouble with spelling and grammar. Using net speak like 'u' instead of 'you' will make readers hit the back button. Also, try running your chapters through a spell check. I spotted some errors, like using 'faze' instead of 'phase', that a spell check would have picked up easily. Also, read through your chapters several times out loud, often times this will help you spot any grammar mistakes or akward wording. All in all you have a lot of potential, you just need to put a little more work into it. ^___^ Good Luck!
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  • From ANON - kallipso on September 07, 2006
    Great story keep it coming. Dragon to the resuce. Seto has a machine pop out gut and skin Jou's dad then disappears, leaving no evidence besides a dead fuck. Keep it coming I can't wait for more.
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  • From smalvina on September 02, 2006
    That was great chapter, but I want Seto back!
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  • From ANON - Mei Zamiel on September 01, 2006
    Great story! I love it! It makes Mei warm and fuzzy feeling when Seto taking care of Jou. I cried for him. And wanted to kick the shit out of his Pa.
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  • From ANON - Ragdoll on August 30, 2006
    Please update again soon! I love the way you're taking the characters and can't wait to find out what happens next.
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  • From ANON - Fallenangel on August 29, 2006
    DAMN!!!!! Oh sorry I just relized that I was at the end of the last chapter! ~.^ Please update soon this story is GREAT!!! I love it!
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  • From ANON - Yujina on August 29, 2006
    what going to happen to jou, isn't kaiba already took care of jou father? i want to know more! it getting good by the way.
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 28, 2006
    o.o omg, update
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  • From ANON - Dee Dee on August 28, 2006
    Man i thought for sure that you have forgotten all about your starved readers and was never going to update. I'm glad to see that i was just my obsessive and whiny self, Hee hee...Great story though
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