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Reviews for The second life

By : Murail
  • From ANON - Sekre on September 19, 2006
    Love it ^^
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  • From ANON - Millie Ishtar Motou on February 11, 2006
    Three chapters the same? with the same name! CONFUSED!! guess what? NOW I'M CONFUSED!!!
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  • From ANON - Eien no Ai on February 05, 2006
    Nice chapter, lots of suspense! Seems like Ryou has some kind of trauma from his past, even though he almost doesn't remember it... It must be pretty scary to be able to recall only unsure things like pain caused by some unknown force. Well, poor Ryou...it was going so nice for him and 'Kura before he freaked out from just one sencence (though I'm not blaming him, not at all)!
    And it's really interesting how considerate Bakura is, stopping exactly when Ryou tells him to ^_^ Yeah, they're still falling for each other! And the kisses were SWEET! Ryou is already feeling safe with Bakura, which is great ^_~ Really, I feel so sorry for him now...
    The part with Amane visiting England was original as well, and there were some hints referring to Ryou's past... Yet, there are many questions ^_^ And I can't forget to mention father Charles, who is probably the only uncowardly priest I've seen in quite some time (and I hope he won't become one of the hypocrites)! Amane is quite cruel to herself if she thinks it was wrong of her to save her beloved brother, there had to be someone to tell her otherwise!
    Well, keep going! Looking forward to the next update ^_^

    PS: I don't think your grammar is bad, you don't make too many mistakes and your writing style is so good that it makes up for them eventually, so don't worry!! But if anything bothers you in this department, I can help ^_~
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  • From ANON - sglily on February 03, 2006
    Ah... the intrigue continues! Bakura is being a bit more aggressive in his pursuit of Ryou. Looks like maybe Ryou has had a bad experience with someone previously? Maybe rape? Regardless... it was sweet that Bakura was understanding of Ryou's reservations about going any further than kissing and backed off when Ryou freaked. You raised more questions than gave us answers for, you big tease! Interesting bit with Armane at the church... I'll be looking back for updates to see what happens next! And, don't worry about your English, dear... you are doing well! Quite honestly, there are way too many people who claim English is their native tongue who mangle it beyond words! (Both spoken as well as written - not only grammar but also spelling...) You are doing just fine... : )
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 25, 2006
    cool but I want to see more please continue
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  • From ANON - sglily on January 23, 2006
    I really like this story! It is fresh and original... I am really intrigued as to what happened to Ryou to have caused his death and how his sister was able to bring him back. The story flows well and is well described - the colorful commentary is delightful! Bakura is his typical gruff self but seems to already have a major soft spot for 'his' Ryou... Ryou obviously is already feeling an attraction - it is cute how he blushes and gets all embarrassed when Bakura shows him affection. Nice job and please continue! It would be a shame if you didn't...
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  • From EienNoAi on January 23, 2006
    Interesting!! I hope you'll continue with this (I was already afraid that you wouldn't)! Really, I can't wait to see what happens next...
    Anyway, the idea of this story is very original - that Amane is alive and Ryou has some painful past and doesn't remember almost anything...I think he needs Bakura to show him what real love is. And it was cute how Bakura was all shocked when he saw Ryou for the first time ^_^
    Please, keep up the good work, it's worth it!
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  • From ANON - Edogawa Conan on January 22, 2006
    Very very very well written (English is your second language, isn't it?) and I can't wait for you to continue!

    I'm a bit confused about that last part and how England (sp?) came into the story. Ryou does have any ties to Europe. He's 100% Japanese.
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  • From ANON - angle on January 22, 2006
    I really love your story. please continue with it. update soon

    thanks :)



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  • From ANON - darkaddictions on January 22, 2006
    this is a great start for a fic, i cant wait to see what happens next! i felt that the beginning was a bit rushed, but its well written and it left me wanting more. update soon!
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