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Reviews for Make Me New

By : Kugatsu

From ANON - sirithiliel on June 24, 2006
heehee....go bakura
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From ANON - sirithiliel on June 22, 2006
yay! i've been watching this for months and months and months! yay for more stories now! :does a happy dance: oh no....depressed bakura...
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From ANON - Zoe on June 15, 2006
T___T So angsty! *cuddles all the YGO charas* I feel so bad for Ryou-kun...Dartz is an ass! *throws her old shoe at him*

But hot damn, your stories are still so freaking awesome...^___^ I love all the twists and plot changes and stuff!! *does a dance* I'm confused though...what did Yuugi do that angered Ryou and upset everyone else? ...Anywhos, I can't wait for part 8 and once again kudos to j00 for such a wonderful fic! ^^
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From ANON - BlacKat on June 03, 2006
OMG!!! It's been such a long time since I've seen this story being UPdated T_T YAY!!! Well anyways lovely 2 new chapters but it's so heartbreaking to see Ryou and Bakura's condition >.> stupid Kaiba and Dartz! Hopefully it gets better somehow later XP
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From ANON - Mana-sama on May 20, 2006
O__O Omg... you haven't updated this in like.... forever... O__O Dun make us wait any longer! Especially with a cliffhanger like that~ O.O
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From ANON - Millie Ishtar Motou on February 09, 2006
Well Bakura? Screaming? thats not right! BAD CLIFFEHANGER!! good work mate!
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From Wicabeth on February 06, 2006
*WAILS!!!!!* How can you end it there?!?!?! And now we have to wait for a month to know what happens??!!!?! *SOBS*
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From ANON - BlacKat on February 05, 2006
Ha! Knew it...ewww though of Kaiba an dDartz-.-...T_T sad for Bakura and Ryou. Wahhh Ryou's gone insane!!!! if Dartz lives through this then he'll get a beating of his life TT_TT I'm just really sad right now that's what really sums it up right now for me on this chappie. Hopefulyy Ryou can get through this too...
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From ANON - sirithiliel on February 05, 2006
o.0.................:shrieks: update update update!! no! bad seto! bad dartz! RyoU!!! save him bakura save him!!!!

lol...i really like. great job! very enjoyable...but...i dont' want ryou to die! :wails:
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From ANON - Velvetina on February 05, 2006
...No you didn't!! NO NONONONONONONONONONONO...I think I'm in denial! Please god tell me you didn't...darn it you actually made me cry. Seriously I cannot believe you wrote that. I mean I loved it I always love your work but I do feel as though my heart is about to burst open and shatter into thousands of pieces? Why those couples? *cries* they were perfect together, darn you! Lol Ok maybe I'm being very dramatic but I guess we saw this coming. However you didn't not leave me with this cliffhanger to hand over my head for goodness knows how long...LOVE IT!

Velvetina
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From ANON - Red Dragon Of Egypt on February 05, 2006
Wow what a comback OMFG did you not read what black ice tried to say to you or are you just that much of an idiot you can't even tell a point when its smacking you in the god dam face its not about grammer or spelling or what not or people comming onto this site who are not old enough for it the fact is BI is angry at your own childish behavior flaming Schwars because of something that has been made crystal clear since the start of this series its not going to be a bunch of fucking roses at the end of her stories you idiot I mean really look at the god dam pairings and then tell me its going to be a lovely little fluf story seto and bakura malik and otogi Yugi and marik do you get the picture yet moron or do i need to spell it out for you even more these kind of pairings clearly don't suggest that these stories are going to be all happy go lucky every time I mean we all kinda knew this was going to happen to Ryou look what happened when Yami said he didn't love ryou or what Yugi said he didn't want to be his friend anymore its been well established that ryous majorly fucked up in the head combine that with the shocking heartbreak of hearing the person you love betrayed is always going to have very nasty consequences but if your not "grown up" enough to deal with it then stop reading you bakayarou yes this story is angst city hell the entire series itself is angsty funny at times but still angsty its how schwarz writes the story a twisted humore regular humor sadistic humor strong lemons and bushels of angst sorry if this story isn't exactly your kettle of fish OMFG no one is forcing you to read this story you know if you don't llike it the piss the fuck off and leave schwarz alone. I myself don't care either way its still a good series despite all of the fucked up messes that keep spewing forth not to mention its beyond hilarious for the most part but again thats just me if you can't cope with how Schwars puts the angst into this story then don't read it you big wuss like I said before no ones forcing you to read this story and frankly I'd rather you took a hike and left Schwarz alone rather then bader him/her and annoy the crud out of the rest of us because you can't handle the angst in a measly story(meaning no offense to you schwars cause I think your story kicks ass)
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From ANON - Red Dragon Of Egypt on February 05, 2006
O_Ooh for the love of all that is holy and sacred in this world this is fucked up this is just beyond not right huh of all things of ALL things WHY THE FUCKING HELL DID THOSE TWO GOD DAM SON OF BITCHES DO THIS TO THEM. Ryou and Bakura already have an EXTREAMLY unstabble life as it is jeeze nitwits the lot of them I really cannot see why these two are so busy GRIPING over somehint so GOD DAM FUCKING STUPID I mean Seto and Dartz together simply because of their god dam fucking pieces of shit ass companies jeeze those two really are fucking married to their companies well I hope to god they loved what they did to them this is beyond wrong just beYOND wrong and Amelda to why THE FUCKING HELL did he choose Honda of all people did the fact that he can't get over Otogi mean anything to him jeeze idiots god dam fucking sorry for exuses of human idiots huh sorry Schwars incase ya hadn't noticed I'm pissed and shocked all at once and me being pissed and shcoked is not a good thing but not to worry its not you i'm suprised or shocked at its them those @#$*# nimrods that have the nerve to call themselve buisnesmen PAH idiots is more like god dam screwed up in the fucking head idiots they are bothe a bunch of BAKAYOAROUS ok I'm cool well Schwarz keep up the great work and update soon now excuse me I've got a pair of bastards to kills*She drags Dartz and Seto to her chambers and slams them into a wall and grabs her scimitars and skins them alive keeping them fool consious through it all then she summons to children of the black magic who drain them of all blood but still they are very much so alive then leaves the room and has the strongest acid pour into the room then removes it sanatizes the room restores them then evelopes them in shadows to finishe the job of endless torture were it slowly piece by piece breaks every bone puncutres their lungs with crushed ribs dislocates each vertabre then their arms and finally rips out their beating hearts and forces them to eat it then for her final bit calls up their favorite creatures BEWD and Leviathan restores them and leaves them to be destroyed utterly by the two beasts* huh well I'm done for now but I hope that fucking bastard darts rots in hell but I'm confused here Schwars I thought they couldn't use their shadow magic anymore if they did then why the hell did they use it before to make anzu and the other slut soldiers of Yami's slut army pay if they could great now I'm even more confused huh well keep up the great work schars and thanks for the new victims I was running out of reasons to kill someone gtg now JA NE
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From ANON - Aino Hikaru on February 05, 2006
You are a cruel and evil tease!!! And you love it! Btw, I love it too but, AHHH! You go and lead us into a false sense of security, and then let lose a hell cat! Hey, how did you get access to my evil little white kitty? And just how did you get her to coopperate? Tell me your secret!!!

Absolutely fabulous as always! You totally had me on the edge of my seat and totally in the action! Loved the sugar high hikaris! Poor Bakura, at least he got to case the jewlery stores, even if Marik was being a complete pain in the ass. Maybe Bakura likes Marik better when drunk, because he's drunk too! I find it hilarious that Bakura has a sweet tooth! I don't expect it of him. Reminds me of Rikuo in Legal Drug. Okay, I'm cold and gonna go pll money out of the atm now and go hunt for worthy manga to buy.

Love your work
-Hikaru
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From ANON - OMFG on February 05, 2006
To BlackIce - *I'm* going to fail English? You can't even spell "come." And maybe I'm old enough not to be in school anymore, unlike some fantwits who aren't even old enough to be on this site.
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From ANON - Halloween on February 04, 2006
NOOOOOOOOO, RYOU! DON'T DIE! SETO YOU FUCKING ASS AND YOU TOO DARZ!

Don't let ryou die! please let them get back, Ryou and darz it so cute!
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