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By : Kugatsu

From ANON - Black Ice on February 04, 2006
*very coldly* Hello, I am back again because I just read a review that pissed me off so very much. It would apear that some literacherly (yeah, I KNOW I spelled that wrong) inept fool flamed your chapter because they believe that every good story ends all happy and shiny, with no dramatic points at all. Well I have news for them, DID YOU NOT SEE THIS COMING!? UH, HELLO, RYOU WAS ALREADY PHYCO, WE ALL KNEW THAT! A TRUE FAN DOESN'T SUDDENLY CALL A STORY TRASH JUST BECAUSE IT TAKES A TURN YOU DON'T LIKE VERY MUCH! AND YOU ARE SO OBVIOUSLY GOING TO FAIL ENGLISH BECAUSE YOU DON'T KNOW WHAT MAKES A GOOD STORY AND CAN'T COOME UPO WITH A MORE CREATIVE NAME THAN 'OMFG'!

*straightens self out* Sorry to use your review thing like this, but that just got me so pissed. Oh, yeah, UPDATE!
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From ANON - OMFG on February 04, 2006
That was... the stupidest fucking thing I've ever read. Did you actually think people would like a story where you had the characters all cheating on each other, MURDERING each other, and basically treating each other like garbage when you've spent an entire series building them up as something completely different? Oh, I get it. You just decided you wanted "angst" so everyone suddenly goes crazy and completely changes their entire character. I see. *rolls eyes* I think I'm just going to pretend this story never happened and Kimi Ga Iru ended a few angsty oneshots ago.
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From ANON - Black Ice on February 04, 2006
BI: I SO called that entire chapter! *poses* I KNEW that was going to happen! Even after the whole Honda/Amelda thing I was still worried about Seto and Dartz cheating. I knew that the entire thing with Ryou was going to happen reguardless because there was a very small chance of Dartz and him staying together. Seto, you SO can't leave Bakura like this! I mean, DUH, he didn't do anything to you...he LOVES you! If they don't end up back together in the end, I'm sueing!

As for the update, DO IT QUICK OR YOU SHALL BE THE NEXT TO BE STABBED WITH A CARVING KNIFE!!!!!!! Or at the very least, I shall cybernetically stalk you.
Muse: TT And she'll do it too...
BI: UPDATE!!!
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From ANON - Nadine on February 04, 2006
*gawks* ... 24 hours later *blinks & still gawking*

You did NOT just do that...OMG...OMFG... I don't know whether I want to laugh, cry or kill you.... *gawks some more* I TOTALLY was NOT expecting that. Holy shit... I hope he isn't dead for real... OMG...Poor Bakura... His hikari... *bursts into tears*

UPDATE SOON PLEASE!!!!!
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From Wicabeth on January 31, 2006
Aww.. Bakura is going to go cheer up Ryou.

Mmm.. And lemony Yugi/Marik *purrrrrrrs*

Yami needs sex and Wica needs sleep...
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From ANON - Millie Ishtar Motou on January 30, 2006
Hey its good to see your back and kickin ass...again! Man thats good shit, i hope to see the next chapter soon, keep me updated

MiM
xXx
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From ANON - Black Ice on January 29, 2006
Oh no! What's going to happen to Yami, Ryou, and Bakura!? There's just something so very wrong with Yugi and Marik fucking while Yami is in the other room crying... T_T

Marik's sleeping alone tonight, HE'S the sucker. ^-^ But more importantly...AN ALRAM CLOCK ENCASED IN RUBBER!? Where's the fun in that!? Oh well, I'm sure Yugi will find some way to smash it. *evil smile*

Black Ice is feeling lazy too.
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From ANON - sirithiliel on January 29, 2006
:dances: gotta love the hyper ryou! Glad he has a yami liek bakura who cares-but-pretends-he-doesn't-care!! i want the two to get together! seto's "busy" and dartz...yeah...anyways, great job, i love it and eagerly await more!
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From ANON - Velvetina on January 29, 2006
Lol you are not gonna guess how blonde I acted when I first read this...nahuh...I actually got confused and thought this was the neko fic where Amelda and Yami were still together and I got all confused about when they broke up....and then I remembered I was kinda in the wrong 'verse. duh me

Tee hee Ryou is so darn cute. I hope that Seto and Dartz get off their asses soon and don't screw up these relationships. Seriously they need ta get a clue, yes work is important but so is living you morons. *smiles cutely* I always love Bakura's reaction to things that Ryou does...for example the '...eh' think was amazing. He's really a great guy

Go Grandpa Motou. The alarm clocks will be destroyed somehow I have faith in Yugi. If nothing else he'll get a big hammer an smash them before throwing the pieces around lol. Love it

Velvetina
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From ANON - Halloween on January 29, 2006
OMG Seto you whore! Give that man sex! he runs off sex! you tramp you!

Anyway I love it! I feel bad for Ryou! and Yami! it seems everyone is falling down but Yugi,malik, Marlik, and Duke!

Oh Ps: I love your other shory that idn't have thses pairs pleas e up date them.
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From ANON - Red Dragon Of Egypt on January 29, 2006
Things are certainly doing a 360 on peeps Honda going for alister never saw that one comming Honda actually stole his best friends bf nice one bastard and Darts seems to be no better either sheesh the guy dosn't even call Ryou by his nickname anymore whats with this babe crap huh so much for the upper class mannerism he and Ryou seem to share and here I thought Seto was better then that seems I was wrong well maybe just maybe Ryou and Bakura oughta (I can't believe I"m saying this) take a leaf out of Maliks book and work with Seto and Darts that way they won't be so lonely for each other all the time I'm sure Seto would love someone at his job whoes a millions times more compatible for working with him then those dimwits he calls employess sure Bakura is a thief but that dosn't mean he was born stupid anymore then Ryou was I'm sure he would do very well working with Darts that way the god dam fucktard would start paying attention to Ryou neglect and abuse is no way to treat a sweet little fucked up usagi like him (did I say that right I can't remember if thats how you say rabbit in jap or not) huh oh well at least Yugi's relationship is still kick ass WOOT WOOT go yugi go yugi and at least it seems Yami's no longer drooling after Yugi but we'll see how long that lasts I mean this is Yami were talking about last I checked he is not one to let something he wants just slip through his fingers that easily well keep u the great work and update soon gtg Schwarz JA NE oh and please let me know when Darts or someone starts acting up again I need someone to punish its been way to long since the dragon/angel of vengence has tortured/slew someone but then again Honda has been delt with for the most part and Anzu is deffinitly old news but we'll see what fate has to offer me in ways of victimes
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From ANON - Aino Hikaru on January 26, 2006
You tease! I thought for sure Kaiba and Dartz were going at it!!! I though that back in the last two one shots actually! Glad you're doing more Kimi Ga Iru, though i think the neko fic wil always be my fav. It was the first one i read, you see, then I fell in love with it and read the Kimi ga Iru. Yes, yes, I ignore warnings and all that, But I don't bitch about the warnings I ignored when I get lost or offended (either rarely happens), SO IT'S OK!!!!

Love Akefia! Always protecting Ryou from everyone else, it's so sweet!

Sorry I don't have much to say other than, "I look forward to more", so, I look forward to more! Bring it on!!! Crack kills!! lol
-Hikaru
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From ANON - Black Ice on January 26, 2006
P.S. Sudden thought: are Ryou and Atemu going to end up together? I mean, Ryou was in love with Atemu for awhile and they both are in bad spots with their lovers rigth now (Ryou and Dartz is going down the toilet.) Whatever happens, Yugi/Marik, Jou/Varon, Otogi/Malik, Mokuba/Noa, and Seto/Bakura better not be destroyed! TT.TT
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From ANON - Black Ice on January 26, 2006
OO Woah...Shocker! Sort of. I was kind of expecting Yami and Atemu to break up. But I'm glad Seto and Bakura are still safe. What's going to happen to Ryou? Damn it, Dartz! *whacks* And I SO called the Honda/Espa coupling!

*laughs* Akefia fell in the dishwasher! He is all that and a bag of chips. Man, I'm so happy Kimi ga Iru started up again!
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From ANON - Lady Laran on January 26, 2006
Okay, I want to run a sword through Dartz and Amelda right now. Honda just needs to be castarated and be done with it. Grrr....poor Yami and Ryou!!! *pouts* You'd better make good for them! *mock glares* please???
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