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Reviews for How did it…come to this

By : LunaAngel18
  • From ANON - Anonymous on September 05, 2006
    Your plot is interesting, but you need to work on your writing. I hope you don't mind some constructive criticism, but your story seems rushed and you don't have enough descriptions. Try to slow down and mention specific things. For example, what does the room look like, what are the characters feeling, what are they wearing etc. I don't want you to quit writing, especially if this is what you want to do. But, I do want to help a little. It's up to you whether or not you want to use my advice.
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  • From ANON - Millie Ishtar Motou on August 24, 2006
    awwwww!! that is so cute!!
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  • From ANON - LadyVirgo91656 on August 24, 2006
    I'm glad that Jou's okay. Please don't let him get hurt anymore. Update soon.
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  • From ANON - Amheket on June 25, 2006
    I can't wait to find out what happened!!! I can't wait for the next chapter, update as soon as you can!!!!!
    ~Amheket
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  • From ANON - LadyVirgo91656 on June 24, 2006
    I'm glad Seto found him. Idea have Seto confront and do somnething to the person who did this too his puppy. Update soon.
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  • From ANON - Amhake on June 23, 2006
    It's a good start, and be proud, you got me to review ^_~!!! Details on what happened would be nice, he could be explaining to the stranger with the blue eyes... Ahh, my overactive imagination is spinning. UPDATE SOON!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - LadyVirgo91656 on June 22, 2006
    Who beat up Jou and was that Seto who found him. Please update soon great start.
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  • From ANON - moonflower on January 27, 2006
    that was really good but udate soon is it kieba i hope so they make such a hot and cute couple anyways write more bye

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  • From ANON - Karma_Fate_Destiny on January 27, 2006
    Good start, I really liked it.... For ideas how about Seto takes Joey to the hospital, gets his injuries taken care of and then
    He's taken to Seto's home for recovery? All the while Joey's depressed so he's not really into any of his favorite things and Seto has to get him interested again
    I'll have more ideas for you if you want and if you continue this story. It's good so you should!
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  • From ANON - Sue on January 24, 2006
    i love the story
    um ideas:
    1.go back to teh past , how did this all started? why was jou crying?
    2. no more ideas -.-
    i'll try and help from time to time ^-^
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  • From ANON - natty on January 23, 2006
    great start, it has the makings of a good story, keep it up. What happened to Jou I wanna a know
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