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Reviews for TIME AFTER TIME (AKA SLEEPLESS I)

By : nixwilliams
  • From nixwilliams on February 13, 2006
    hey guys, thanks for reviewing! i really appreciate that you took the time.

    yang, no need to be sorry for thinking the story is insane - i tried to have the form follow the content, and it obviously worked somewhat. given that the first-person narrator is a bit loopy (either through lack of sleep or some genuine sort of mental disorder - or both!), the story necessarily remains foggy in parts. i imagined the location to be in some sort of institution, but mokuba has never mentally left the kaiba home, so that creates a sort of palimpsest (sp?) in his head, where one location merges with another. as to whether anything has ever happened between the two of them, and whether it ever will, that's left up to you to decide...

    however, it's not my favourite piece, and there are probably things that i could improve on if i could be bothered. but as i noted in the introduction, i have posted this only because people kept asking me where and what it was!
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  • From ANON - Yang of the Eastern Temple on February 13, 2006
    I did not get that? Where was he exactly? Asylum? Special room at the Kaiba mansion? Had anything ever happen between the two? If Mokuba was really insane it showed through this story. I'm sorry, the story itself is insane
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  • From ANON - ds on February 06, 2006
    whoa.

    that was phenomenal. mixed up, cold edge o'sanity, wickedly perilous undercurrents. and touching.

    well, words fail me right now.
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