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By : mmm
  • From ANON - Yuta on August 03, 2006
    Awesome story so far. Please update, I don't think I can wait. I do have a question, I havn't watched Yugioh in so long I have forgotten the characters. So, is Jono Yugi or Yami or some other character. Also, is Seth Seto Kabia or what. I am confused. I suppose the millenium rod is a give away. Because in the series Kabia is supposed to have it. I don't know I am kinda confused. Anyways, great work so far. Happy to be able to read this, very well written. Please update soon, I can't wait!
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  • From ANON - amey on August 02, 2006
    awwwwwwwwwwww! it was so good!! i loved it!! i wish i could mind a seto and mokuba fanfic or a mokuba and joey fanfic
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  • From ANON - rabidsqurl on July 31, 2006
    Rowr. ;) Very nice.
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  • From ANON - anon on July 30, 2006
    aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaw, how sweet of seth :D

    please update!
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  • From ANON - loverskeeper on July 29, 2006
    I love this chapter and what happen to those two. Showed them what happens when they mess with Jono. Please update soon. Again loved this chapter.
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  • From ANON - Velvetina on July 28, 2006
    Don't worry about writing a lot, I do it all the time and I tend to be fascinated by what people have to say anyway...I'm very nosey lol.

    Ergh mega sympathy for the doctor thing! I really, really hate it. They tend to try to talk over my head and not really tell me whats going on.

    Oooh, yay Seth arrived in time! Jono was saved....that is so romantic. Urgh, and I am so glad that Usi and Asim got what was coming to them...creepy sods. **shudder** Lol for poor Atem though, dealing with a crazed Seth cannot be fun.

    Hehe, yeah I can imagine it isn't as glam living there as everyone reckons it would be. Like you said theres tourists everywhere and up themselves stars. But still its a coversation topic...'where do you live?' 'Hollywood'...actually then you'd probably get asked irritating questions about which stars you'd seen...hmmm *Thinks*

    Ergh yeah its hot here too, probably not as hot as there but far to hot for me.

    Velvetina xx
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  • From ANON - shanghanjin on July 28, 2006
    You made me happy. My jou pup is safe and unharmed. I hope you update soon, I wnat to see what happens next. Good chapter.
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  • From ANON - Nini on July 28, 2006
    I had every intention of reading and not reviewing, since for the past few months I've been out of reviewer-mode, but I simply must comment on the statement you made at the end of chapter 10: "I suck at writing lemons."

    I completely disagree :) I think your lemons are lovely. They're not scalding hot or exactly perfect, but they're still very good. They're tender and well-written, and I enjoyed them very much :) Just some positive feedback for ya. Keep writing!
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  • From ANON - yunasgrace on July 28, 2006
    ive nticed that in your story you hate to have bad things happen unless it is really necessary. im glad that jono wasnt raped, he finally got seth to show that he loved him and i think that it would have been awful if he was rpaed. i love the story so far... in sry but ive been lurkin for a while and i felt it was time to make my presence known ^^

    great story
    yunasgrace
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  • From ANON - jess on July 28, 2006
    Yay for Seth!!! He gets laid within seconds of finding Jono*lucky*. Keep updating.
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  • From ANON - anon on July 28, 2006
    ah, will there be details regarding the scene whereby jono is forcibly taken? will he be raped in the first place?


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  • From ANON - Millie Ishtar Motou on July 28, 2006
    Me: NOOOOOOOOOOO!!! SETH USE THE ROD TO SAVE HIM RA DAMN IT!!!

    Seth: Shut up Ishtar Motou...who are you anyway...

    Me: A good friend of The Thief King anyway, Find him!!

    Seth: Atemu should arrest you you know....

    Me: Well Sorrryyy for trying to help you find your boyfriend...*disappers* Update soon...Poor Jono

    Seth: What the hell? Jono...where are you? *is worried*

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  • From ANON - Velvetina on July 28, 2006
    Yay update!! Sorry I didn't respond to the note but I had some hospital things. But it was very cute and made me smile! You live in Hollywood? Is that as cool as everyone imagines or not? Lol.

    Eeek, poor Jou, poor Seth. This situation is just going to go bang I know it. Will Seth find Jono in time? It looks unlikely but we can always hope..right?! *Laugh* Oh dear I wonder how miserable Seth will make everyone whilst searching for Jono...how the pharoah will react...theres a whole lotta questions going through my mind. Anyway, great chapter!

    Velvetina
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  • From ANON - shanghanjin on July 27, 2006
    Oh please write that Seth will be able to finds Jono. Those bad man are starting to hurt my Jou pup. Keep up the good work and please update soon, i want to know what happens next.
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  • From ANON - Hikari Raine on July 27, 2006
    I know I know 10 reivews but that doesn't mean that I can't hope that the next chapter will come out soon. Love this story. I think it's great and I hope Seth finds our lovely Jono soon

    Ja
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