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Reviews for I Dream of Ryou

By : hatochiisai
  • From ANON - Devilsheart on May 18, 2006
    Yay you updated the guys are all crazy exept for yami, hope to see an update soon
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  • From ANON - Naria on May 12, 2006
    CUUUUUUUUTE!! ^_^ Oh my God!! Sorry for not reviewing earlier, but I just kinda copied and pasted the story on my laptop for perusal and I FELL IN LOVE!! It is amazingly original and CUTE!! I just can't get over the fluffy Marik!! And Ryou's a doll!! Can I have one? I promise I'll set him free...with Marik...yeah...And they can rut like rabbits!! WHOO HOO!! I look forward to more!! ^_^
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  • From ANON - sglily on May 12, 2006
    Wow. Malik and Bakura are rather IN YOUR FACE, aren't they? Poor Marik! Ryou is adorable as ever - innocent (sort of!) and naive... again, sort of... I think. ; ) And, for the love of God... don't abuse the Ryou genie! I beg of you! ; ) Now you girls have me do-doo, do-do-do-do-do-doo-do'ing the damn "I Love Jeanie" theme song!
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  • From ANON - AL on May 09, 2006
    Well, I must say, your writing style has certainly developed a lot more than before AFF.net's hiatus! Great improvement! ^^ Although I know this fic is AU, Marik acting decent sort of humors me. XD But I really liked the ending; you are getting a lot better at describing things and keeping things somwehat realistic. And I liked the ending very much; wow do you cut straight to the point. Knowing Marik and Ryou though, they'll probably find some excuse not do it, and do it later... XD

    Great story so far!! You're style is improving much more and that's wonderful!! Good job!

    -AL
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  • From ANON - Fallon on May 06, 2006
    Oh this story is just to cute! It's great! Five stars 4 U!!!!!!!!!! Ryou's just so cute when he doesn't have a clue. Update soon so we can all find out what happens with Ryou and Marik. And when is Malik and Bakura gonna find out about Marik's little genie? Chow!
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 06, 2006
    OMFG Ryou no! Don't say that you don't wantt o get fucked, hold on what am I saying fuck him. Lol nice update _devilsheart
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  • From ANON - sglily on May 05, 2006
    Oh, my God! You girls certainly know how to lead us readers along and KAZAM! "What does fuck mean?" Good Lord! Too funny! Actually, I laughed harder at Marik's reply - "What I'd like to do to you..." Good one! And whew, Ryou is a persistent little shit, isn't he? Come on, Marik! "Rise" to the occasion, Big Boy! Show ole' Ryou what fucking is all about! You teases! You aren't going to actually have them "do it" either, are you? ; ) Nice chapter!
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  • From on April 30, 2006
    Lol thaqt was hilarous. you got the characters perfectly and the storyline so far is wonderful. I would greatly appreciate an update.
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  • From Tenshi on April 30, 2006
    That was really cute. I heart it *hearts*
    Can't wait to see what's going to happen with it!
    Luffles the story!
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  • From ANON - sglily on April 29, 2006
    Ryou is so cute! I'm glad that Marik is being so kind to him... I liked Marik's reaction to Ryou bursting out of the bottle... I could actually see him diving across the bed and hiding on the other side of the mattress! Too funny! Already these two seem like the perfect pair. Can't wait to see what you have in store for them/us next!
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  • From Tenshi on April 26, 2006
    Oh I am loving this! One of the things I hated about adultfanfiction.net being down was I couldn't read any of your stories. *hearts story and hato* I am definitly looking forward to the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - sglily on April 25, 2006
    Ah... Ryou and Marik... Very nice. Liked this chapter. I liked how you described Ryou's little genie outfit... I was waiting for the little hat, veil, and ponytail... ; ) Can't wait to see Marik's reaction as well as Ryou's...
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  • From ANON - Niu TheDarkOne on April 23, 2006
    That was so sad. Oh poor Ryou. Yami is being such a dick.
    Nice opening chapter though. Can’t wait for the next.

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  • From ANON - Zoe on April 20, 2006
    Awwwwww. Poor poor Ryou.

    I'm really wanting to know what happens next. I hope you're able to update soon.
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  • From ANON - IceAngel\'s Hikari on April 20, 2006
    I love your storys so much are you going to repost and finish burning sae!? I hope you do I lve it so much it is my #1 favorite story!!!! so please keep going and update very soon!!!!
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