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Reviews for Fall from Eden

By : Djeserit
  • From on June 18, 2006
    My reaction after the chapter4(the last chapter) I was like "what the hell? where's the rest of the chapter..." but please do review soon/update soon
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  • From ANON - KrystalChronicals on May 21, 2006
    great story :).
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  • From ANON - Drachenaugen on May 17, 2006
    Hope you feel more relax soon, and don't worry about updating. Sure, readers like to see more chapters but patience is a virtue and I think that in the end writing is for your enjoyment. I for one don't mind waiting for fics (though I do hope that you decide to finish this one even if it’s in the long run), so I'll wait patiently for this one, no pressure.
    Great job, keep the good stuff coming please!

    (sorry, I added this as a seperate review cause Aff ate it the fisrt time around :P)
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  • From ANON - Drachenaugen on May 17, 2006
    Lot's of Dragon baby! Yay!! Love that nickname, I just love it. Poor Seto almost got raped in this chapter T_T but at least the scene that followed that one was really cute; I found it adorable how Jou consoled him.
    Btw, I want to apologize, it was my bad for asking without thinking. Some days after I left my review I went back and reread previous chapters and found the answer to my own question (the drunk business) so keep on hinting dear, hint's instead of raw fact is what make's the difference between writers (in my opinion), it's just that readers aren't always as attentive as the should be
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  • From ANON - Djeserit on May 07, 2006
    Thanks for all the wonderful and constructive reviews everyone. I just wanted to say that it maybe a little longer until I get the next chapter up as I have been working these last view days really nonstop and have had very little sleep. As a result of this my plotting ability is at a painful low. I shall do my best and perhaps the 3rd chapter will be out tonight. No later that Monday or Tuesday for certain.

    You vicious internet-hood Djeserit
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  • From ANON - ayachan on May 06, 2006
    just a few grammar problems here and there, but other than that.. i loved it X3 yay!~ can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Drachenaugen on May 06, 2006
    Yay! Yay! Chapter 2 was up really soon! I’m so glad you updated quickly, thank you so much for your effort :3 I must say, what I loved most in this chapter were *Katsuya’s* nicknames for Seto. 'Baby dragon' was sooooo cute XD One question though, we know Seto is promiscuous but... why did Joey go for a “one night stand” if he himself thinks it’s dangerous? O.o Was he that drunk? Anyhow, great job and keep the good stuff coming please!!!!
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  • From ANON - paranoidcharlotte on May 06, 2006
    YAY! I love a uke Seto and I love it even more when he's paired with Jou. But you need to have longer chapters! Also I don't know Japanese so I don't know what their saying could you put in translations please? Update real soon please.
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  • From ANON - ayachan on May 05, 2006
    oh.. love it, love it, love it! can't wait for more XD!!!! keep up w/ the good work and good luck ^_^
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  • From ANON - Rroselavy on May 05, 2006
    Good start! Looking forward to reading more.
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  • From ANON - Drachenaugen on May 05, 2006
    Wow! I just LOVE this fic, I can't wait to see the next chapter. This is very well written and I like the plot too, it's even plausible that Seto would have one or two psychological problems (poor guy, after all he's gone through), plus having the CEO as the Uke is always the best option for me. Keep the good stuff coming please!
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