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Reviews for Slave of Destruction

By : hatochiisai
  • From NemoChan320 on September 03, 2007
    wow.........i just read ur story all the way thro.....none stop......it. was. so. good....! have slight headache due to it tho, lol. i feel so bad for bakura tho......it feels almost as if ryou was betraying him at first......o, i hope that he is rescued in the end and it is BakuraXRyou forever! ^_^
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 17, 2007
    you should make this story a mpreg!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PS. i love your storys!
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  • From ANON - Eres on August 04, 2007
    I've been waiting for you to update this fic...argh!!! UPDATE please don't just leave it hanging!!!!!!!!
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  • From sweetciel on May 12, 2007
    Please please please continue this story!!!!!!!!!! *begs desperately* I love it. Well....i love everything you write. This is no exception. S0o0o0o0o0 Go0o0o0o0o0od! Please continue *kowtows*
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  • From ANON - McKenzie on April 24, 2007
    Hey there!

    I used to be a major YGO fan back around 4 or so years ago. I tend to jump from fandom to fandom, and I oftentimes visit my old fandoms again. When I feel like reading some YGO fics again, I always check out yours because you have some of the best ones. I totally adore your stories and several of my favorites are written by you. It's wonderful to see you are still writing these great stories after all these years. I look forward to reading more. Please update this fic soon! I have been enjoying it immensely. :)
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  • From ANON - Jeda on April 17, 2007
    omg. u must update and u must update soon. i've been waiting for u 2 update this story 4 like ever. Set is such an asshole. i really don't like him. i hope ryou is really under some spell or somthing cuz i'm really starting to believe that he's never gonna leave set. i feel really sorry 4 bakura. anyway, UPDATE!!! this chappie was great.
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  • From ANON - Chibigeemu on April 17, 2007
    Oh yeah, read all these chapters in one day and I love it. Hope that writer's block doesn't get you again. D:
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  • From FlightOfTheShadow on April 17, 2007
    Oooh, finally updated this story! ^_^

    I would have to say that -in my opinion- it's the best story that you have still in progress, it was agonising to go so long without seeing a new chapter. Hopefully getting one chapter out will mean that you have less trouble with the next one. I find that writers block comes in chapter sized blocks unless the story is well and truely dead...hopefully the story's NOT dead. ç_ç

    Anyway, even MORE emotional conflict than the last chapter and a good deal of violence too- the fight scene are always hard to pull off but I believed you managed to pull it off very well- despite the outcome being very one-sided.

    Strangely enough I feel sympathy for Set... as well as intolerance (odd combination I know)- he just doesn't understand Ryou, nor does he really love him, he only believes he does. I think that's a little sad, personally, to be so self-absorbed that you can hurt the friends of the one you 'love' and still believe you are on the side of right.

    My intolerance for him stems from the fact that he evidently refuses to acknowledge Ryou and Bakura's bond- or the time that Ryou has spent with both his yami and his friends. The fact that Set thinks he can just waltz in and snatch Ryou away from his family (friends more than blood family) without any emotional repercussions makes me want to slap the guy, god of destruction or not.

    I love how you brought in Throth, the scribe god with the head of the wading bird, the one that eats snails from the river Nile? At least I'm pretty sure that's the one (damn, I need to brush up on my Egyptian mythology), if that's the one I'm thinking of then I'm glad that you are making him a major influence in this story as the voice of reason. Apart from Khepri and Anubis, that guy was always one of my favourites.

    Anyway, hope this helps you get over your mental block.

    Best regards,



    *Shadow In Flight*
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  • From ANON - lokivsanubis on April 16, 2007
    me like but symboles issue it was hard to make out words.
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  • From ANON - K.C on April 16, 2007
    I HATE SET!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I want to kill him!!!!!!!! Pkz write more soon I love this story!!
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  • From Itavita on March 28, 2007
    D: D: D: *hugs Bakura* Poor, evil doom-baby. :( All he wants is his hikari back. ;____;

    I honestly can't guess how this will end. Set won't just give Ryou away, Ryou is torn between Set and Bakura, and Bakura's not giving Ryou up without a fight. :o *suspense*

    Hope to see the rest, too. ^^
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 28, 2006
    Pif stupid.
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 28, 2006
    Crap. Thpse girls a whores and useless puppets.
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  • From ANON - BJRose on December 28, 2006
    I'd kill that father selffish.
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 21, 2006
    please!!!!!!!!!!!!! add a new chapter! i have been waiting over 2 months and still you havent updated.
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