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Reviews for Fire and Ice

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  • From dragonlady222 on May 24, 2008
    Such a sweet story. I hope you did a sequel.
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  • From dragonlady222 on May 24, 2008
    Nice chapter. Jou is entirely too understanding and wonderful about protecting his friends.
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  • From dragonlady222 on May 24, 2008
    I think the heat is melting them both. I wonder how long they will last as 'friends'.
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  • From dragonlady222 on May 24, 2008
    I really like this. I hope the fire is enough to heat the ice.
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  • From ANON - ChibiRinni on October 03, 2006
    Continue? Uh, YES! How could you think not to!? Please continue! It would mean so much to us readers! Till next time, byee!

    ~ChibiRinni ^.~
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  • From ANON - catti-dono on September 03, 2006
    I probably should have reviewed chapter per chapter but just sat down and ate it up....I see a big difference in your writing style...it has greatly improved but there is still a touch of POV as well...had a strange mental image of Yami screaming "Married"!....laughs....(Yuugi and Yami can shut down their mind link so that either cannot see or read the others mind...so no excuse...laughs...but I do see that you pretty much write J&S stories) catti
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  • From ANON - dragon on August 12, 2006
    hehe oh well so ti was short ti was still good i do hope you continue with it even if its the end cause i like the story thus far so do get reviews adn continue
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  • From ANON - bywthedragon on August 12, 2006
    I really like this story. Please finish!
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  • From ANON - DragonKiana on August 12, 2006
    OOOOHHHH you must continue please...Jou and Seto are my fav pair in the whooole world...and I love your story..^^
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  • From ANON - Kero on August 09, 2006
    Wonderful, simple wonderful. A few minor errors but as they say no one is perfect. I simply love the concept of “Fire and Ice” Very creative and responsive. I especially like it at the beginning of each chapter that little blurb of information. Quit entrancing if I do say so myself. I can’t wait until you update, I think it is very adorable.

    How ever, the only thing I think you should fix; you have to space out your sentences like when they talk have a separate line for them. It does make it a lot easier to read, plus it is a cheating way to make the chapters longer *snickers* I do that all the time.

    It makes the chapter more neat and tidy and shows a bit more that you know what you’re doing. But, I can honestly say that you do know what you’re doing. As far as the reviews go. I know what it is like to be a first time writer. I used to be one and I really did suck at writing. Until I had gotten better; it just takes time.

    You just have to grin and bear it. :) Just hope for the best and give it your all

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  • From ANON - dragon on August 09, 2006
    i like your fic a lot so do continue with it i want to know what the surprise seto has for jou is as well as how this will end adn the side story too you got me interested in that as well so do continue with your story please
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  • From ANON - lexen on August 06, 2006
    Nice story I don't know what else to say I like the way things are going and well it would be nice if Anzu was there for someone to hurt her that would be the greatest ending , sorry for all Anzu lovers, if there are any , but she is annoying and besides I hate her anyway great story I would like to read the next chapter soon ^_^


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  • From ANON - Millie Ishtar Motou on August 03, 2006
    awwww! I really hope Otigi and Handa can sort out there relentionship and Honda better friggin make up with Jounouce because I'll be very peeved *yells at screen* HONDA JOU GET IT TOGETHER!!! Ok I'm done XD!!
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  • From ANON - Millie Ishtar Motou on August 01, 2006
    YAY!!! another fantastic chapter!! I love following this story it's got a great plot and everything!! ^_^
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  • From ANON - adracona on July 31, 2006
    AAAAAHHH cliffie!!! It bet it was Seto..or wait NO Mokie!! Nah probally jou..it be really sweet if it was seto coming to make amends for his lovely puppy..aawww that would be so cute!! More please pwetty please!!
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