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Reviews for To Keep A Katsu

By : MizumiBlu

From ANON - Velvetina on August 30, 2006
Yay you updated *Dance* I'm so glad that you updated today, I was so worried I'd miss it. I've gotta go have an operation so please update Sunday to make the day I come home again perfect. Pwease!!! *Puppy eyes*

Heh, I'm glad that you smile too. Everyone should have a smile on their face *Chibi-Grin* And it sucks that life is being mean to you. I wish there was something I could do for you. *Smooch back* I love ya too.

Lol, Yes definatly. Jou sticks to being seme and Seto is the intelligent one. Its a perfect plan...LOL. Hmmm, I do agree that it may be time for Seto to really kick some ass and have a proper payback moment. *Snug* I'm confident that you'll come up with the perfect plan.

Ah well, luckily we don't see too much of Shizuka...we'll just have to ignore her. Though the idea of Honda and Otogi fighting over her now amuses me endlessly.

Still...yay Kaiba had a hissy fit!! *Grins* I know under the circumstances I shouldn't be happy about it but I do love the way Seto looks when he loses his temper. *Giggle* I'm weird. Also how cocky is Jou? He goes to tell his lover that he's leaving him and still expects Seto to sleep with him peacefully...I mean it was very hot and Seto did put up a good fight but still...*Shakes head* That got me kinda angry with Jou.

I knew it had to be from her movie. It just had to be. Conniving little witch. Gah, I hope she does end up dead. *Growls*...like I said she's really bugged me!

Until next time!
xx

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From ANON - hell_lot23 on August 30, 2006
Heh heh heh.....So, she's finally going to feel the wrath of Kaiba eh?...heh heh heh....

Kaiba, my dear, kill her with all your might.
Kaiba: It would be my plesure...
Good....Jericho, make sure she updates.

Jericho: *nods* *points cattle prod at you* Master hell_lot loves your story, so if you don't update he will be oh so sad. So I would suggest that it happens. *evil smirk* We wouldn't want anything bad to happen, would we?

Kaiba: Stop threating her and help me destroy Shizuka!
Jericho: Pfft. Fine.

See ya later. I love it lots!
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From ANON - Millie Ishtar Motou on August 30, 2006
*kisses Mr. Sharp and Pionty* Yes my pweetty knife...*turrns to author* Me Psycho?...Of course I'm a freakin Psycho! Would a normal person do this? *turns to Marik* Hey Marik you're an idiot and a brainless half-wit with no life *grins*

Marik:........You're an idiot Ishtar Motou...I swear if we wearn't friends I would've killed you by now!

Me: I know!! *to author* Yes I love you too...no matter how many times I threaten to kill you...you write briilaint even with your hands chained XDD *cough* anyway...you know the drill...update or die!
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From ANON - anessa on August 30, 2006
the end was hilarious but what a TWIST OMG! he still gets the girl...ahem *cough cough* I mean boy...but still gets to go back to NYC that officially SUCKS in big bold black and white letters, but I really liked this fanfic a lot, it has so much emotions, without really having to say it, it's funny I mean jesus fucking christ! I stayed up until 1:52am reading this really great awesomely awesome fanfic, update soon! and the chapter title is a poem on it's own! I've never seen anyone do that before as I said and 'm saying it again update soon :)[anessavanella@aim.com]
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From ANON - girlo on August 28, 2006
Full of rage and hate towards horrible sister. Maddening. Need sugar to calm down. plot twists rule and suck at the same time. GRRR
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From ANON - Drachenaugen on August 28, 2006
What?! What?! WHAT?! That is so unfair!!! It�s a simple equation: Jou stays with Seto = Love and happiness; Jou goes with Shizuka = blood shed. I�m sorry dear, a reader has to do what a reader has to do. On a brighter note, I�m so glad you passed 100 reviews! Yay! Hugs and chocolates for you!!! I love reading this, so you won�t be loosing this reviewer any time soon. By the way, have you ever though of writing a J/S stalker fic? A famous CEO could certainly have a nut or two interested in him, and seeing how you�ve more than demonstrated you can write about crazy people... of course with a certain jealous puppy there to help thing would probably be more than amusing. In any case, it�s just and idea, take it or leave it as you please. I just think that stalkers are interesting to read in fiction (not to deal with in real life though
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From ANON - Samantha Kaiba on August 28, 2006
OMG....You cant make Joey leave Seto....that just wouldnt be fair...you have to update soon...I have to find out what Kaiba is going to do and Serenity....I would so love to smack her in the mouth...Joey cant go to New York, or have Kaiba stop him or something?

Seto Kaiba and Joey Wheeler forever!!!!!!

Samantha Kaiba
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From ANON - Anon on August 28, 2006
YAY! I feel lurved!

seto- you know...i'm going to kill you right jou?
jou- yeah
seto- and you're not going to tell me are you?
jou- ......no
seto- you suck
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From ANON - O.O on August 27, 2006
So the bitch really is crazy! I knew it! they said i was mad, they said i was crazy..but i was right in the end!

And she FAKED an attemp at suicide! ARGH! i can't stand tose kind of people!

i had a friend that alwayz talking about killing herself, and everytime she said it, i felt like punching that bizz-natch in the face! too bad i wasn't able to though..my friend would alwayz drag me away when my hand started twitching.

Anywayz, i like stories like this...when lovers are seperated and alot of drama happens. its just the greatest..i guess i like to see them suffer..alittle...i know that bad, and i have been called a sadist before...and to those to have i say "thank you"

Oh had have i mentioned that i love the way you title the chapters, its very creative and unique.

ok, thats enough. i think i've talked too much, hehe please update soon!!
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From ANON - hell_lot23 on August 27, 2006
Oooo, that bitch is gooing to die, trust me. I'll make sure of it. Medpeo or no, she-is-going-down!

Oh, and this chapter was well done. Continue please.
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From ANON - Velvetina on August 27, 2006
First thing is first. *Glomp* Congrats one the 100 reviews honey, you deserve every single one of them! This is an amazing story. Awww, you're making me blush with your compliments. I have a lot of love for you too, every time theres a new chappie I don't only get a wonderful piece of entertainment but also a cute little message to top my day off.

Ooh, and yes. Torture is a lot more fun than death! ^__^

Okay, its time for super wail....JOU NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!! How could you think this is the right step? Just because your sister is a cracked up, psycho, weirdo, freak doesn't mean you should leave. I mean surely they could just throw her in a nut house right? One of those nice white padded cells would suit her down to the groud. Sod. I cannot picture Seto reacting well to this news. In fact he will more than likely throw one of his famous Kaiba hissy fits before dragging the blonde back.

*Sigh* So traumatic...and bloody Shizuka. Why fake a suicide attempt why not just do it you crazy mofo....*cough* Yes I really don't like her. Lol

Update soon hunni!

xx
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From ANON - Green-Eggs on August 27, 2006
Update soon! You can't do that to Seto! That's just mean...not to mention vindictive on Shizuka's part...She needs serious help.

Update Soon!
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From ANON - shanghanjin on August 27, 2006
Very impressive, Jou was always the one noble to the very end, but still that leaves the question about what Seto will do to keep Jou there, also if Jou dose go with his mom what will Serenity do to him? Please update soon. I hope that the climax will be good. Keep up the good work, his decision was to my expectatons.
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From ANON - lokivsanubis on August 27, 2006
Long time no read. But i'm happy to be back. I've missed so much and yet nothing has changed. Joey is going back to New York, but that would mean leaving Seto all because of that Phyco bitch. This is getting sad. (Rummages in pockets pulls out Yugi) Now were did you put those Truck keys and lighter and gasoline jug? (Yugi looks around nervously.) Tell me now. This bitch must die!!! Update soon!! Can't wait to read more!!
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From ANON - Millie Ishtar Motou on August 27, 2006
Hey Marik...make sure she DOESN'T fall asleep...yes...thanks...Now then be a good little Author and allow Seto to know what's going on...or Mr. Sharp and Pointy may want a little slice of you on a silver platter...I'm so nice aren't I!?
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