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By : hatochiisai

From ANON - Lazulai on November 17, 2006
I usually make it a point not to review people's work for some reason, but seeing as you've been one of my favorite authors for *quite* some time now, I suppose I can make an exception just for you. ^_~

They way you manage to take characters *completely* AU and still make the story work to the point of me being able to easily imagine the scenery and such in my mind is definitely praise-worthy. I love the way you wrote Seto in this story. asshole!Seto is teh sex. ^^

And you know, I've never really like Ryou. Or Malik. Or Marik, for that matter. (Bakura though. DAMN. He's too badass and sexy NOT to love him.) But despite it all, I keep coming back for more of them in your work. YOu write them in a way that makes them...dare I say it? *LOVEABLE* Your work on this story, along with The Jungle and Twilight Menagerie (With Mally-chan, I believe?) And the characterizations of Ryou and the gang is wonderful.

I hope to see much more of your work in the future, and who knows? Maybe I'll break and give you some more reviews. I think Vengeance of Sethos deserves some praise...
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From ANON - demonchilde4 on November 17, 2006
awww poor ryou. poor poor thing. cant wait till next chappie! so excited! yay!
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From ANON - Anonymous on November 16, 2006
I like your stories and love to read them, especially part two of "I Dream of Ryou." But, I would greatly appreciate it if you would explain something in the story. Maybe before or after a chapter you could explain how Ryou is mortal and a genie. I honestly thought that genies are immortal or mortals can't be genies. Also I'd like to point out that Anubis made him mortal so the bottle shouldn't be tied to him. Please, please, explain this strange occurrence to me in your next chapter, please.
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From WishHeWasMine on November 16, 2006
*waves sheepishly* I'm not very good at reviewing so I don't often do it. XD And I suck ass to only be doing it after you've BEGGED, but I am! I really love a lot of your stories and the joint ones, like this one. Though honestly, I had trouble getting into the first part of this one, then one day, while I was reading through, I found myself hooked! XD Funny how that happens.

I will be keeping up with this story! I promise! Along with Twighlight Menagrie, which I'll try to remember to leave a review on as well. So, even if I don't review every chapter, I'm still here! I'll make sure to review when something sticks out at me from now on. XD I know how awesome it is to get reviews, no matter how small they are. lol I posted a new very short OS last night and I was refreshing every hour to see if I had a review or if the count went up on it. XD I'm so sad... lmao

Any...ways! Keep up the good writing! ^_^
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From ANON - Jeda on November 16, 2006
AWWWW COME ON!!! it doesn't hurt 2 let marik and bakura loose in the south bronx! they'll practically mix right in. nothing in new york will change enyway. u and me both know that the south bronx can't get any worse than it already is. and as 4 scaring my teacher and class...sweety i accomplished scaring the crap outta them a long ass tyme ago.lmfao.OOOOOKAY now about the fic. i can see that you PROBABLY stopped torturing ryou 4 a while but now the torture has hit Marik cuz if he finds out that ryou got his memmories back and probably won't wanna b wit him cuz of his recent stupid behavior ( which i really don't blame him 4 cuz if i where him, i'd b pissed at marik 2) marik will definetly shot him self or something and i bet thats where ur aiming at which makes me laugh for some reason but then again mayb thats not where ur aiming at and ur still torturing ryou cuz u know that if marik dies ryou will be upset and depressed 4 tha rest of his life *takes a breath* aaaand u'll b laughing in the background cuz ryou's been all around fucked over since the beginning of the story and u knew that and he didn't. *takes breath*. wow. anyway, i luv that "asscrack of dawn" comment that yami made. lol. he's funny in the morning. yeah i look like something out of the thriller video in the morning. i even sound like something out of the thriller video in the morning. neway i must go study biologia. can't wait till the next chapter!

Much Luv From NYC~.~.~.~.~.~
lil mIss drAMa QUEEN
O!! and what do mean that the wolf cub and the lion cub won't show up *YET*?!?!?! i miss my babies. and this might be random but i have 2 say it.... WATCH BORAT AND NOT SO MUCH SAW 3 it was boring in the middle.
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From MenacingK on November 16, 2006
Like I said in Twilight Menagerie, I'm sorry for not reviewing. I love this so much. I promise to try to do better.
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From Andyouthinkimcrazy on November 16, 2006
Ouch, Ryou sure is bitter... at least Marik wasn't there to hear that.
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From ANON - Roxria on November 16, 2006
Ray: "I LOVE THIS STORY!! Amazing!! Poor Ryou, he's so sad about the way his lover has been acting!!"

Roxria: *Bashes Marik over the head with baseball bat* "Stop being so stupid, Marik!! Damn, just TRY and be patient for once."

Ray: *Sweat drop* "Love the story!! I'll keep reviewing if you keep posting!!!"
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From ANON - A: on November 16, 2006
Nuuuuu....I thought Ryou would forgive Marik for all that he did...I mean, I know that Marik didn't keep his promises, but still...imagien being the one having his loved one torn away from him for the THIRD time in forever!

Poor Ryou; I know he must be disheartened that Marik slept with Bakura, but Marik didn't mean it...I mean, Marik's done so many more things to prove that he's in love with Ryou and would do anythign for Ryou. Isn't htat more than enough to tide over for one mistake? And plus, both of them have alreayd said that they don't love each other...and Marik's hurt himself hundreds of times for Ryou's sake...and he freed Ryou too...

T-T I know Ryou's sensitive, but I'm hoping that he'll come and approach Marik first..in teh state that Marik's in right now, he seems so weak and so easy to shatter. I hope Ryou will go to Marik soon.

Update again!
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From ANON - Shadow Mistress on November 11, 2006
Oh man, I only hope that Ryou is back to his old self with his memory of Mariku, so that the two of them can finally live in peace together. heh heh, which knowing your guys' writing style, it won't last very long and that is if it happens in the next ch. XD

Anyways, poor guy, Mariku was really hitting it hard, sunk to the very bottom of a dark hole. And yeah, Ryou had a quite an attitude, but then again you can't blame him, Mariku's physical and mental state plus the supernatural occurings would not make anyone in Ryou's circumstance believe him.

And of course, seeing Ahmose squirm under Yami's commentary is, as always, quite entertaining. Well, I definitely look forward to the next installment, till then, hopefully. ^_~
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From ANON - Jeda (Sarah) on November 06, 2006
wow. HIV? i didn't think that marik hit rock bottom like that. well at least ryou's coming back...i hope. i have this feeling that ryou's either never gonna wake up or anubis won't let him or that ryou would wake up and still not have his memories. i have this feeling because you're *SO* good with torturing the characters and your readers. not that we mind really. *lol in a really tired manner.* 4 some reason i really wanted ahmose to lik scare ryou into remembering or cooperating with them. i really wanted him 2 get in this 'hey i'm from the south bronx and imma kill u and yo whole damn family bitch and i don't giv a flying shit wat u think.' attitude with ryou in the alley and THEN zap some magic on him. it's a little 2 bakura and marik (cuz bakura and marik would be thrilled 2 live in the south bronx. they'll practically call it paradise.) but i think it would have been so cool. or mayb you're just rubbing off on me and i now have the urge to c ryou tortured whenever i can. as a matter of fact u R rubbing off on me. my teacher wanted us to stage different ways in which 2 torch prometheus in 'Prometheus Bound' and my imagination ran wild. he thought i was evil and amusing. so did the rest of the class. neway i felt that this chapter was another calming before the storm because I KNOW and i actually spelled 'know' right cuz I KNOW something big is gonna happen. and it better be the return of the lion cub and the wolf cub cuz i miss the hell outta them. *sighs* o i'm tired skools killing me so i'll sleep...which is wierd cuz it's like 9:10 at nite, i have no skoll tomorrow and i never go to bed early when there's no skool the next day. or when there's skool anyway. but imma sleep any ways. nitey nite.

Much Luv From NYC~.~.~.~.~.~
lil mIss drAMa QUEEN
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From ANON - A: on November 05, 2006
I was really really really hoping that Ryou would just sit down with Marik and talk...but I guess it's really hard to do when Marik's in this state of mind...poor guy. Ryou needs to give him a hug. If it was the other way around, I bet Ryou would really take care of Marik, rather than just let Marik be. Homg. You should get Ryou get his memoires back and make Marik forget his. OUCH BURN. THEN Ryou will feel bad, won't he?

Great chapter. Poor Ryou and Marik...
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From ANON - A: on November 05, 2006
HOMG poor Marik. T_T The poor guy's just dying there...I can't help but feel slightly disappointed in Ryou for giving up on him so quickly...or at least being so stubborn. -hits Ryou- Bad Ryou! Geez...oh well, I hope that when he gets his memory back, things will get better. Marik still loves him so much, the big lug...

I'm amazed how quickly Marik can just jump into drugs...it's only been 3 months and he's like...doing everything on the face of this planet..I'm surprised he hasn't actually died yet. -sniffles- But poor Marik..you'd think if he saw somsone like Ryou he'd try to be the old Marik to win Ryou back...poor Marik.

...Bad Ryou!

Hope to see more fics from you soon!

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From ANON - jeda on November 01, 2006
OMG!!! the long awaited update has arrived!! on halloween night 2! i couldn't update yesterday cuz i went trick o treating with my little brother ( 2 me u'r never 2 old 2 trick o treat....as long as u don't do it when ur 30. u'll probably be supected of trick o treating for kids and not candy). 4give me. i just had 2 flaunt the pirate outfit i has wearing. neway... i REALLY lik this chapter although u seemed 2 have put marik through MORE torture than before. first ryou then marik? make up your mind!! ryou seemed a little bit like an asshole in this chapter even when he found out y marik was stalking him but then again it's still reasonable cuz any other person would react that way 2. except 4 me. i'll let marik in with open arms. with his sexy self. hehehe. i just hope that ryou remembers and he and marik get back 2gether cuz the anticipation is just 2 much 4 me. as i was reading the chapter, i felt so much anticipation that my gut almost busted and mind you i was eating candy (i regretted that like an hour ago when i got the worst stomach ache known 2 man). the funniest part of the chapter was when ishizu starts beating up on marik. it's also funny that he ends up in the slammers twice 4 wat seem to be less than 1 or 2 days. neway im gonna go read this article i found on wikipedia about bakura. i heart wikipedia. a lot. UPDATE!!!! I CAN'T TAKE THE ANTICIPATION ANY MORE!! IT'S SQUISHING MY PANCREAS!!!

Much Luv From NYC~.~.~.~.~.~
lil mIss drAMa QUEEN
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From ANON - MewMew2 on November 01, 2006
thanks for updating both this and Twilight Mingrine. I enjoy virtualy all your stories, and I'm sure that I will continue to enjoy them. Right now thought I've got a pile of work wating for me to complete it before the deadline of *looks at clock* um, 8:10 this morning. Untill next time.
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