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By : hatochiisai

From ANON - ChibiRinni on November 01, 2006
Wow, Aniras and I have been out of co-mish for a bit. ^.^;; Glad to come back to this story though! I was in near tears! Please help Marik! PLEASE! I just want everything to be ok in the end! ^__^ Please???

~ChibiRinni ^.~
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From ANON - Shadow Mistress on October 28, 2006
Ooh wow, I'm teary eyed w/ sympathy and from laughter. XD I love this story, so dramatic and funny even in the mist of angst. Poor Mariku, poor guy. And poor Ryou too, what a hard life. *huggles* Yay for the reincarnation of Ryou! Heh, Ryou's getting chased by a naked psycho who claims to love him, priceless.

Seto and Pegasus got turned into genies for their greed! Whoot! And yay for Ahmose kicking ass! *snickers* Showers and sex in a public place; even the gods are teasing him. XD Gotta love that. ^_^ Anubis is a pretty well portrayed character; funny and sympathetic. And of course, dear Yami and his remarks are as humorous as ever.

Sort of hard to summarize a review for for like I dunno 5-7 ch in such a limited time, but I really apologize for not reviewing since Sept. I'm horribly behind. I've been busy like crazy. @_@ I'm really glad to finally get a chance to catch up on this story. It's very nicely written and very intriguing. I'm definitely enjoying the story and I'm looking forward to see what's going to happen to Mariku and Ryou now. Can't wait til the next ch, but I have no idea when I'll be reading/reviewing it, but hopefully soon. See ya. ^_~
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From ANON - Velvetina on October 25, 2006
Okay, I spent this chapter either laughing my ass off or trying not to cry. Hands down my favorite moment was the Ahmose and Anubis interaction. Anubis may be the God of Death but he's a really ~cool~ God. Especially when he's getting told what to do by his mother ROTFL, seriously classic moment. Eh, you know my spazzes well enough now to know that basically any Ahmose time is good for me, especially if he's getting pounced on by a pervy Yami or teased by his God (Still laughing!!!)

However, there is the rest of the chapter to contend with. Oh my lord, I had this overwhelming urge to dive into the fic and hit Marik really really hard (then hide behind Ahmose, I haven't got magic to stop myself from dying!) for what he's doing. Ryou would ~not~ have wanted him to do that and most certainly would have been pissed about it. But on that note you just had to throw us another curveball, Ryou's back but doesn't remember a thing? Dang this is gonna be trouble!

Velvetina
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From ANON - jeda on October 23, 2006
Lines like this... "He'd lashed Ahmose for his misdeeds, and embarrassed the hell out of him at the same time. It was a good night." and this..."It's fuckin 10 am...� Bakura growled. "Who the fuck has the BALLS to call me before NOON?!� and this..."I feel like my dick should be wearing a tie...� got me cracking up 4 the longest tyme. lmfao! it was soooo funny. i loved it. wow i never thought that marik would stoop that low because of ryou. and even worse, when ryou was reincarnated... HE COULDN'T REMEMBER MARIK!! way 2 add to that torture hato. good job. i was expecting that. a little. i actually though u were gonna make way 4 a small happy ending. Then again, i remember u saying before by "accident" that marik would get arrested but i didn't think it would be like this. good. fucking. job.... brillient. u r SUCH a little meanie. again i imagine u laughin like no man's business because of the way u torture this poor heart broken man. it kinda makes me laf 2 actually. hehehehe. HAHAHAH!!! it was actually funny that marik ran after ryou...NAKED. i would defiently want 2 see that!! u kno that crowd was there only because marik was naked and they loved staring at his sexy body. anyway... i do hope that ryou remembers marik soon or else *sighs* i'm just gonna have ta help em. *glances at baseball bat in the corner*. i've been meaning 2 use that anyway. well now i'm gonna go and make my halloween custom. i'm gonna be a pirate. argh baby. lol.

Much Love From NYC~.~.~.~.~.~
lil mIss drAMa QUEEN

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From ANON - jess on October 23, 2006
oh sure bring ryou back without his memories. i have a feeling that u enjoy complicating ur stories. oh well...update soon.
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From ANON - MewMew2 on October 23, 2006
Kudos for the ...... ug.... creative ending. I really didn't expect that. For doing the unexpected I gift you with the award of most original plot in yaoi fanfiction that didn't meet the reader's hypothesis on the story. Nice job! My mind runs in circles waiting for your next update.......... Oh! An I recomend the story, the Segull's laugh. It's very good but only comes in Icelandic w/ english subtitles. ^.^0 yeah. Please tell me what you think of it and I'll check in later.
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From ANON - MewMew2 on October 18, 2006
MMMMrrrrrrrooooooooooooororoororororroowwwwwwwwwwwwww. =^^= Thank you for yet another wonderful chapter. I think that you're an exelenct autor and should be reconized. If some sort of contest were to be going on about the most creative fan fics of yu-gi-oh! involving fantasy; I would nominate you. Please keep up the good work and thanks again!!
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From ANON - Velvetina on October 16, 2006
Hey, I am ~so~ sorry that I haven't been reviewing recently but I have been pretty seriously ill and moving, even to the computer, was just not an option. **Pout** Apparently being a wombat doesn't save me from sickness.

However, now I am up again (sorta) what a kickass couple of chapters to come back to. Seriously dude its amazing. I loved the torture, though poor Ahmose...at least he's managed to get back at Pegasus and Seto in a truely evil manner. Gods I love him when he goes into AE Magic mode, though how much is Anubis gonna kick his ass?

As for Ryou in general O.o WUDFIHFPEIJAGOIHCFEWPJ! Holy shit, that was one pissed genie. What the heck is Marik gonna do now? Are they gonna get him back or take a holiday to the land of the dead (unlikely but I never know with you).

I really, really wanna know what happens next now I'm all caught up. Mainly how is Yami going to react to Ahmose's sacrifice? Will Malik find out about Bakura and Marik? What are they going to do with their new genies? And how much Tex Mex is Ahmose gonna eat whilst trying to deal with it all?

**Laugh** I'm happy to be back.
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From ANON - ChibiRinni on October 16, 2006
O.O..... **speachless.... pulls out a piece of paper** Ways to kill an Author or Two: #1. Gut them, #2... **She glares at the authors** HOW COULD YOU!!! BRING HIM BACK ELSE THIS LIST IS FINISHED AND ALL OF US READERS TRY OUT EACH ONE!! CURSE YOU!! **cries and continues the list.... turns around with a smile** ^__^ Great chapter though. I could just see Malik wearing a yellow one like that too! The small scene with him and Bakura was touching. Great chapter and hurry on with more. **evil angry glint returns** I'll kill you... >[

~ChibiRinni ^.^... >[
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From ANON - jeda on October 16, 2006
*carving ryou's tombstone and crying hysterycally* this is 4 my baby ryou. we loved him so. *plays "pearls" by Sade and crys even more* this chapter... I KNEW THIS WAS THE CHAPTER!! *WAILS*....wait a minute... wait wait wait wait. did u say ryou WAS dead? wat the fuck? u wanna tell me i've been crying ova nothing?!! o well who cares this chapter was soooooo good and the thought of ryou looking like freddy kruger gave birth 2 him gives me a reason to not be able 2 sleep 2nite. SCARY MUCH!? YES!! i love malik's entry into the story though. that was funny. you always kno how 2 make their entrances so funny. and yami...omg that mofo just stays funny especially his comment at the end... and at the worst tyme 2!! but i feel soooo sorry 4 marik. the poor man. 4 a second tyme 2. it's just soo sad. u made me go from being mad happy that that bitch "new york" was not picked (AGAIN!!! HA!) in Flavor of love to being upset that ryou's gone and mariks sad and cryng. but u made me madd happy again when those asswipes pegasus and seto got there shit real good.i've been waiting 4 TOO LONG! it's about fucking tyme. i love ahmose. with his sexy ass.he gave it 2 them good. but now i think he got Anubis pissed again. how's the crew gonna get ryou back? THEY BETTER GET HIM BACK CUZ I KNO YOU'RE GONNA WANNA PROLONG THE TOTURE AND SAY 'WE AIN'T GETTIN HIM BACK'. MEANIE. LOL. anyway must sleep scholl tomorrow. peace out!!

Much Luv From NYC~.~.~.~.~.~.~.~.~.~
lil mIss drAMa QUEEN
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From ANON - jess on October 15, 2006
ryou noooooooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!! that last scene was really cool but the description of ryou was pretty nasty. don't make him gone for good. have anubis give him life again for sacrificing himself in order to protect everyone else or something. love ur fics so update soon.
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From ANON - MewMew2 on October 14, 2006
Miao. Nice job. I enjoyed your previous fic, although you WERE pretty mean to Ahmose. NE ways, I congradulate you for writing so far a very 'together' sequel. From my experince, it becomes a real 'brain sore' shall we say. Thank you for your hard work and please continue to work hard!
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From ANON - jeda on October 07, 2006
YEAH those suggestions i made 4 ahmose didn't fit his style at all. he he. may be grey's anatomy ( McSteamy can get ANYONE addicted to that show) or Law $ Order SVU. any way this chapter made me cry because Ryou, my baby, bakura's baby, marik's baby, everyone's baby... IS DYING!! i was like NOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!! i had 2 grab baby wolf cub bakura for comfort and he was so upset that he didn't scratch me when i hugged him half 2 death. but then agian i think he's still tipsy from last tyme after drinking HALF OF THE WINE IN THE WINE CABINET!!! somehow he knows how to get 2 it without me looking. o and when marik got caught... that was like "OoOOooOoOo U GONNA GET YOUR'S FROM YO MAN!! YOU BETTA PACK YO THINGS MAD QUICK!! i swear i heard dave chappelle say in the background " U GOT CAUGHT BITCH!!" it was so grimy 2 ryou. the poor thing. he got served big tyme. is malik ever gonna find out? if he does........ o man ........ all hell will break loose and the gates of heaven will open. when's he coming to the palace of doom anyway ( my new name for seto and pegasus' place). o man ryou's dying... I NEW U WERE GONNA PULL THAT ON HIM U JUST NEVER TORTURE THE BOY ENOUGH AND I KNOW U LAUGHIN. i can see u laughin. lol. u so bad.lol. now i gotta make funeral arrangement's for the boy (depending on whether or not u will have mercy on him 2 live and by some miracle he's saved. will u save him?? will you? please? i luv him. very much. EVEN THOUGH HE'S GETTING ON MY GOD DANM NERVES IN 'SLAVE OF DESTRUCTION') toodles!!** ( eww i never say that... until now of course.)

Much Luv From NYC~.~.~.~.~.~.~
lil mIss drAMa QUEEN .... who is still recovering from the news about ryou

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From ANON - ChibiRinni on October 07, 2006
^_^ THIS IZ AWESOME!! I'm really enjoying myself with this story! I only hope Ryou doesn't die again. It killed me to see it happen once, don't do it again!!! ^-^ An I think Ahmose is taking it better than I thought he would.... then again, we didn't see the rape. You had me all sad through this chappy though cuz of Ryou "not loving" Marik! SHAME ON YOU!! (ok, not really XD) Well, hope to see a new chapter soon! Keep up the good work, ok? ^.^ BYEE!!

~ChibiRinni ^.~
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From ANON - Velvetina on October 01, 2006
Dang with the Anubis thing **Sigh** Well it was a nice idea. I throughly enjoyed this chapter. It was highly entertaining. Like Marik and co I had difficulty not laughing at some of the things I just knew I shouldn't laugh at. Mainly Bakura of course...bless him. I also had to laugh at the image of of Ahmose hanging in a tree...though with what happened next I almost wish I hadn't. I know Ahmose is doing this to protect Yami, and I can understand that he loves him dearly but still...when Yami finds out I can't help but wonder what his reaction will be. **Sigh** I guess I'm just going to have to wait.

But at least Bakura managed to take us a step closer to recgonizing Ryou's bottle. Yay for clothes and bottle corrolation, it rules. Though I wonder how many times he's going to get his mouth washed out because he forgets not to curse!

Eh, tell Mikado that I shall happily stay a wombat for his amusement if he can convince that yami of his (Brother in this fic though!) to get rid of my migrane. Its splitting my head in two.

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