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By : hatochiisai

From ANON - jeda on September 29, 2006
MAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAN i can't wait 2 c wat happens to seto and pegasus at the end of the story. i swear their getting on my nerves! that scene with bakura being summoned to the castle was just so fuckin rich. i luv the way u incoporate humor into a story even though the situations that the characters are in are very tight and very bad. y did that sound as if i was analyzing a paper? o well. i'm just happy this week is FINALLY OVA. i had so much work 2 do! thankfully wolf cub bakura was there 2 keep me company and 4 me 2 snuggle...although i do have a lot of bite and scratch marks on my arm. the little bastard. i'm gonna miss him. question. is baby lion marik ever gonna show up again? i miss him as much as ryou does. i feel sorry 4 ahmose in this chapter though. the poor thing. he was so humiliated and seto was such a little shit. u know wat ahmose needes? some ice cream. and nachos. bad mix i know but he needs some type of comport food... even though that was a bad mix. maybe a hug can clear that up. And "ring the Alarm" by beyonce. and a new episode of Degrassi. it so goes there. and so does this fic. it goes all the way there i mean it dosen't even stop. i'm starting to sound stupid and random. mayb i should get some sleep. or watch best week ever. or call the psycho ward 2 come take me cuz i'm being dumb now. lemme go find bakura. i'll cuddle him and feel better. *runs off to find bakura messing around in the wine cabinet* o no not again. he's puppy drunk without me.

Much Luv From NYC~.~.~.~.~.~.~.~.~.~
lil mIss drAMa QUEEN

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From ANON - laineyue on September 29, 2006
Torturing ahmose? I believe you started it or perhaps Mally-chan with Yami started it...

I dunno I'm just riding along with the joke I always do that. Sometimes too much for my own liking. �

really pegasus is kinda nice... eheheh I'm a bit more sadistic than he is in this fic. and seto could pass up as one of my pals, if his attitude never change in this fic (as i think he wouldn't).

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From ANON - ChibiRinni on September 29, 2006
LoL, Peggy IS a few cards short of a deck XD I have to say that this is getting really good! I loled so hard when I imagined Bakura nude that I had to stop reading until I caught my breath! XD Then you had soap flying after him! XD I really can't wait for more now. I'm completely hooked! I hope that Ahmose will be ok, he just sold himself to Seto!! I hope they find a way to free Ryou and themselves though. Really great story! XD Update soon. BYEE!!

~ChibiRinni ^.~
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From ANON - laineyue on September 22, 2006
Pegasus seems... *quirks his head* a little nice...

Sorry, sadistic thoughts/ideas. Dang, I sometimes have no control over it. Still loved the sexual torture of Ahmose eheheheh even if the bad guys are winning they managed to tease Ahmose. LOLz

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From ANON - Jeda on September 21, 2006
Hola Chica! Como Estas? Buene. thanx 4 letting me keep wolf cub Bakura 4 a week. he's 1 feisty puppy!! he keep's me up howling ALL nite! BUT HE'S SOOOO CUTE and i need 2 stay up especially wit my homework (teacher's are merciless. bakura, go maul Dr. Nashban. *bakura jumps up and down and runs off 2 do wat he does best...kill people.And steal. heh heh*). so i just cuaght up with reading chapters 4&5 and throughout the whole thing i can c u laughing hysterically just torturing anyone who has a body and knows ryou. u. r. soooooo. evil. me likey! it makes it interesting. i feel sorry 4 marik. with his sexy back(yea!) all cause them other boys don't know how to act(yea!). i also think it's special wat's behind ryou and ahmose's back(that tong idea is just hott)yea. they can turn around and i'll pick up the slack(yea. take um 2 the bridge).their turned into dirty babes. you see those shackles now there slaves. they get whipped if they misbehave. no one's every made them feel this way. you can take it 2 the chrorus ( i love 'sexy back' and 'my love'!!!!!).i wonder wat's gonna happen 2 bakura when he gets 2 the palace.if he does. i kno ur gonna torure him so i can't say he won't end up in the palace of doom! lol! while i'm thinkin i'll go dance wit wolf cub bakura to 'chicken noodle soup'. LET IT RAIN AND CLEAR IT UP!

Much Luv From NYC~.~.~.~.~.~.~
lil mIss drAMa QUEEN
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From ANON - Velvetina on September 21, 2006
**Sigh** Again as in 'The Jungle' you've made me have a strange fondness for Pegasus when I really shouldn't. I don't know what it is about him. I think that its even while he's psychotic and creepy he's also got a softer side running through him...even if it isn't present that often.

Marik just cracks me up. Not matter what he always brings a smile to my face, his attitude is just kickass no matter what situation he's in. Ryou and him are just so cute together I swear I'm gonna get cavities **Grin**

**Cries** Ahmose!! No! Thats so...awful. I actually had to bite my lip so I didn't cry- sad I know but I'm afraid I really get into things I read. Its just knowing his past this is going to be the ultimate torture for him and Seto knows that. Ergh, normally Seto is my favorite but let me at the bastard, I'll kill him for doing that to Ahmose. Well when I'm human, I think I'm still a wombat O.o. Still I do actually hate Seto right now. Just a question...can Anubis interfere at all? I'm just curious as to how much the God can do for his disciple.

As ever a wonderful read that has me on the edge of my seat!
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From ANON - Millie Ishtar Motou on September 21, 2006
And another thing PEGGY TOON HOW COULD YOU!!!??? You're so sweet. I know you're being out of character...you'd much rather do Kemo or Dartz or Lucius Malfoy for that matter XD!!!
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From ANON - Millie Ishtar Motou on September 21, 2006
Are they ever going to get out of there???
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From ANON - ChibiRinni on September 20, 2006
GWADS this iz getting good! I really hope that both Seto and Peggy get what they have comming to them, even though Peggy seems to be acting a little more human (rather than evil) towards the end of the chapter. I only hope nothing too bad happens to everyone! Please update as soon as you can, k? GREAT STORY! BYEE!!

~ChibiRinni ^.~
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From ANON - laineyue on September 19, 2006
(^-^) Even if everything is going to worst it is so much fun. I second the motion of not liking Joey that much (Sorry fot the Wheeler or JoeyXSeto fans out there.)

I like the dedication you right at the end of your story and yeah I do miss him too, even if I didn't watch each and every show of his.

Ok i'll stop disturbing my friends! *smirks* I have taught them well to disturb others anyway so my work is done. *grins* �

Love the fic! �
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From ANON - Velvetina on September 19, 2006
**Looks around** Eep! I'm sorry...**Sniff**

Before I try to placate the sorcerer I'll review. This was an amazing chapter, I was biting my lip the whole way through just hoping things weren't going to get worse for the poor boys but naturally it did. Poor Marik, I just want to hug him. I mean what he had to watch and what was done to him **Shudder** and what is this ultimatly going to do to his relationship with Ryou? I mean its already looking a tad shakey, they both love each other obviously but the circumstances are a tad dire.

And what about Ryou, the sweetest genie ever? He's just got to submit but its so horrible. And he's doing all that work that no matter what he says will eventually tucker him out and...oh the poor guy! And he just knows that the rest of his friends are coming soon **Glances at Ahmose** Oh the torture is so scary, yet delicious.

**Headbutts Ahmose's ankle** I'm sorry! I wouldn't have done it if it wasn't for the morphine honest, but I needed them. I don't need painkillers anymore so I wont do it again. Please I wanna be human again

**Whispers** Actually don't tell him but if someone stole one of my book's I'd be even madder than he was, I got off lightly O.o!

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From ANON - ChibiRinni on September 17, 2006
**pouts** How mean, not likeing Jou enough to give him 2 Seto! **pouts more** but it IS ur story and I can't be one to complain! ^.^;; I can always get my KXJ fix with my own stories XD well, GREAT CHAPTER! Poor Marik! My only concern is how Ryou is going to get out of this! With no help from Yami or Ahmose where can this story go!?? Please pass on the new chappy so I can try and figure it out! XD Great story, great job! Till next time, BYEE!!

~ChibiRinni ^.^
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From ANON - Millie Ishtar Motou on September 17, 2006
*sob* I miss Steve he was soooo awesome, He was my favourite celeb I still can't belive it I keep thinking "He Can't be dead!" But I know he is I just don't want to believe it...R.I.P "Crocodile Hunter Dude" (The nickname I always reverred to as did so many others)

I love this story but you made Peggie Toony Babe Evil How could you?!
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From ANON - Niisan Ryou on September 15, 2006
I love this story!!!!!!!!!!! But I'm curious if the new bottle Ryou is in will affect his attitude as well? I less three evil gothic Ryou. :3 Anyways I'm sure your next chapters would be just as great as any other story that you have created.
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From ANON - Jeda on September 14, 2006
AND THE TORTURING OF RYOU BEGINS!!!! u always have 2 find a way to torture the poor child and i bet it's a breath of fresh air 4 u. AW MAN, I CAN'T GET THE FRIDGE?! can u send me a copy of it? thanx 4 lion cub marik *cuddles him while he's shredding homework*. DAMN IT!! o wait that's from last year. He's lucky it is or he would of got a spanking. *marik growls* he's so cute!! Sadly, it�s only 4 a week. :�( Pegasus is such an asshole I hate him! How dare he slap even touch ryou!! And I wanna find those PI�s so I can send them 2 the shadow realm. neway I just know Pegasus is gonna double cross Seto. I still luv seto even though he�s the bad guy in this fic. I don�t luv him as much as bakura and marik but the luv is still there. Neway I gotta do my homework because it�s piling up on me ALREADY. Yea my schedules gonna take a while for me to get used 2 too but I luv my Fridays. 2 hrs. of school throughout the whole semester cause I only hav 2 classes on fridays. BHSEC students--- GLOAT!! Haha!! Neway I hope your allergies get better I know exactly how you feel. And I hope school goes well 4 u. I can�t wait for tha next chappie! O and ummm� MARIK�S GONNA BE ARRESTED???!!!! WHEN?! WHY!!? I NEED 2 KNOW!! *baby cub marik nods in agreement*

Much Luv From NYC~.~.~.~.~.~.~.~
lil mIss drAMa QUEEN
sorry if the this is 2 long. Since skool started every response has 2 b long.

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