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By : hatochiisai

From ANON - Velvetina on September 14, 2006
**Glares at Ahmose** Mmmpfh!....Mouth is back! Yay. **Pouts** Waaait he took my mouth!

Hehe, why do I have the feeling that the PI's are going to be taking a nice loooong sabbatical after this particular job? I personally may have made a copy of the video/pictures for my own personal enjoyment but oh well.

**Sighs** This isn't right. Why do I find Seto so sexy when he's being evil? WHY?! He's threatening to do all sorts of deliciously bad things to the guys and I'm still drooling. Its not natural, but ever so much fun. Though I ~do~ like the twist of it being Pegasus who is the main magic user so far, I have to admit I expected it to be Seto but I like the fact that its not. Reminds me that I have no idea what you've really been cooking up for this fic.

Oooh, creepy gothic bottle. And poor Ryou is stuck inside **Huggles bottle** It'll be okay sweetie, have faith that you shall be rescued...again! ^__^ Although I do have to say that despite the outfit being far from his original style, my mind says that he looks great. **Wolfish grin**

Oh dear gods, how much of a freak out is Marik going to have this time? That idea kinda scares me. Even more so how is everyone going to react when they find out who the culprits are? O.o

**Looks around then whispers** Payback time! You steal his Tex-Mex, I'll grab the book and then we run! ;-)

**Sneaks up, grabs book, RUNS!!!** BOOYAH!

....yeah the drugs make me do crazy things. It was a fantastic chapter hope to see more soon.
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From ANON - ChibiRinni on September 14, 2006
O.O I liked the first story... and I'm LOVING the Second story! XD My only "complaint" is that Seto iz evil! **pouts** Just make Ryou give him Jounouchi and all shall b well! XD lol, just kidding. I'm a die hard K/J fan, thatz y, but SOMEONE (or 2) had to b the bad guys! Great story so far and can't wait for more! ^__^

~ChibiRinni ^.~
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From ANON - Velvetina on September 11, 2006
**Giggle** We can all spazz about Ahmose together. And he knows he likes it somewhere in the depths of that mind of his. Otherwise he really would ignore us rather than pretend to! I'm so sorry to hear about your friend, that really sucks. I hope she's okay now.

Hahahahahahaha....haha Marik and Bakura had sex. **Grins** Their reaction to that piece of information was just too classic to be true. Especially when followed by that pretty serious chat between Malik and Bakura. Poor Malik is a bit insecure but if he continues on like that too much I have a feeling he's just gonna irritate Bakura, I just hope that he doesn't ask to remember. That would not be a pretty sight. You're not that mean are you? Wait, what am I saying. Of course you are! Lol.

Yay, Ryou had a birthday party. How cute is that? Very cute I say! Even if he didn't want to open the pressies to start with. And on top of that he managed to cover people with glitter. The image of Ahmose covered in glitter with a disgruntled look on his face is one that I shall treasure. Though poor Ryou has got to adjust to the new world he's been brought into, but it has got to be tough. I'm sure he'll get there.

**Snickers** Ha, those PI's got a bit of an eyefull...wait more importantly Ahmose got laid. **Makes banners** Go Yami, convincing him to do it in public. Well I say convincing... And it was very close to being a lemon, both of them wet, Ahmose naked and soapy with his long hair...**Runs away from Ahmose's glare** You know you love it you mad sorcerer!! Nooo, don't take my mouth.

Either way, it was a very fun filled chapter that kept me chuckling all the way through. I cannot wait to see what happens next!

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From MenacingK on September 11, 2006
Ryou is so cute that it's almost scary. The present thing was soooo funny! I can't wait for the next part!
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From ANON - Jeda on September 10, 2006
mayb ryou should get arrested so he can fully understand his rights. o that was mean. Slave of Destructions still got me angry at ryou. i wonder who those P.I's where and who sent them. i have the sudden urge to send them 2 the shadow realm. This chapter scares me because it's like the calming before the storm. I just know that by the 3rd or 4th chapter everythings gonna HAPPEN.I still like it though!! I read your "memorial" to Steve Irwin at the bottom of the chapter. i was REALLY surprised when i heard he died. It was really unfortunate but he died doing what he loved and i guess he was happy. Septembers getting to be a really bad month. school starting, steve irwin and not to mention 9/11 which is tomorrow. neway sorry for the sad flash back. every1 ova here is either really bummed out or really sad. I'm still loving your fic!!! Must sleep schools 2morrow and it's one hell of a day.Oh and PLEASE can i adopt lion cub marik?!!I don't care if he tears up my things he's so cute.if not can i have the magic fridge??

Much Luv From NYC~.~.~.~.~.~
lil mIss drAMa QUEEN
To all the lives that were taken on 9/11~.~.~.~.~ May u rest in peace. u r gone but certainly not 4gotten. U WILL BE MISSED.
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From ANON - Shadow Mistress on September 10, 2006
Oh boy, Seto is plotting w/ Peggy-boy?! Ookay, that's going to be bad, very bad...I can smell it. lol.

It's been a few days since I read it, so forgive me if I don't have much to say. Anyways, Mariku as a lion cub and Bakura as a wolf cub is so kawaii!!! *squeals* ^_^ And yes, teasing Ahmose is so fun, but Ryou has a point, it's not very nice of Mariku after he helped them a great deal. Ah well, and the pillows and everything, it's so nice. Makes you want to have a genie of your own, lol. But yeah, Mariku should really think more before he wishes. Tsk, tsk, tsk. Hope he won't have too much of a change after his memory. Mariku/Ryou-ness rocks! hehe.

Well, til the next chap. See ya. ^_~
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From ANON - Millie Ishtar Motou on September 09, 2006
Yes Indeed..*smirk* PEGASUSSS!!!!! *huggles* MY MASTER!!! OH WONDEROUS LORD!!!!!! *kisses* *nuzzles* You are beautiful and playfully psychotic
My Lord I have missed you..*kisses more* *huggles* Love you

Pegasus:love you too...who are you again?

That's not even funny!!

Pegasus: Sorry Babes *kisses*
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From ANON - Velvetina on September 08, 2006
*Hug* Ooh yay! I'm finally well enough to come back on the 'puter and here is the first chapter of Tales of Arabian Nights, I am a deleriously happy fangirl!

*Rubs forehead* Eh, yeah. Ahmose is just a cool guy *Blush* Ignore my mad spazzes about him...I'm sure I'll settle down eventually...maybe. He's just too cute when he gets tormented. (This chapter had me biting my lip to keep from laughing because it hurts the stitches *Hugs Mally-chan* torment rules) But now I'm looking foward to this fic even ~more~ because of that teasing comment.

Eh, I had to go have an operation because I've got endometriosis, its a pretty unpleasent thing thats kinda hard to explain. That with the combination I loathe hospitals/needles/doctors set me up for a pretty miserable time. I spent most of it dosed up as much as possible on morphine...and dreaming really wierd things about everyones fave bishies, lol. Anyway, you are very right I am kinda glad I didn't see it beforehand because I would have been driven nuts! I still may though if you don't update soon. *Giggle*

I guess I really should review the chapter, ne? It was a very fun jump back into this world. The little reminders of the last story making it feel like we'd never been away. Though I now desperatly want a Baku-pup all of my own...maybe with a muzzle. *Innocent look* And really Ryou has a point, teasing Ahmose is ~not~ nice after he went to lots and lots of extra trouble to help Marik.

Chocolate peel? I rather like the sound of that! Is that a real treatment? I want one. The whole Marik/Ryou interaction was cute in general, they are just so perfect for one another. Though I'm kinda nervous awhat Mariks gonna be like with his memories!

Seto!! *Big eyes* Oh no. I kinda wanna believe he'd gonna be good but I have seen a certain picture of yours which lets me know he's gonna be bad. Darn, I love Seto too. Though he is rather cute when he's evil...and plotting with Pegasus its a comical image whilst still being creepy.

Oops, I seem to have wittered on for ages. Sorry, but can you tell I'm bored?! *Laugh* Either way it was a super chapter.
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From ANON - laineyue on September 05, 2006
one moment. *back off the pc and began shouting OMG in the internet cafe then looks at the crowd's confused look* uh, ok...

WoW also read the ahmose inarus story, so i could totally connect with this one. nice sequel! i know seto from that story but pegasus is another mystery... hmmm...

oh i like asking that question too: Seme or Uke? eheheh got a pretty lot of people disturbed when i explained it. *thinks back the time introducing it to her friends* priceless...

update as soon as u can! �
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From ANON - Jeda on September 02, 2006
WOW!! that ending was so random and funny. o man this the first chapter in the fic and it's already getting juicy. me likey very much.and i c that baby lion cub marik has made his return with the addition off a wolf cub bakura. do u mind if i adopt them 4 a week PLEASE????? this fic is so good it tastes lik chocolate! I LUV CHOCOLATE!!!! as a matter of fact i think i'm gonna go get a hersey bar.

Much Luv From NYC~.~.~.~.~.~
lil mIss drAMa QUEEN
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From MenacingK on September 02, 2006
Yay, sequel!!! And I don't mind if I have to wait for the Yami/Ahmose lemon in one of your own stories. I understand that she might have issues with it. I'm just glad they finally got down to it even it we didn't get to see. And will Malik EVER start to think before he speaks? After the problems that badly worded wishes caused before... I can't wait to see what happens next.
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From ANON - jess on September 01, 2006
NO!!!!! don't let them hurt Ryou. he's too cute to get taken again!!!!!!!!!!! oh well... keep writing.... i'll read it anyways
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From ANON - kenshinjunkie03 (too lazy to log in) on September 01, 2006
it saddens me to know that things will not be well in the future, but i look forward to it none the less. big fan of your work and i hope you update soon.
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