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Reviews for Night of the Vampires

By : UrsurlaFretz

From ANON - cirquegirl999 on September 24, 2006
CLIFF-HANGER!!!! Oh well that's what we deal with in reward for getting the new chapters so quick. Poor Bakura and Marik, getting raped, I really like this side b/c usually it's Yami and Seto who are the nice ones or usually nicer than B & M, but in this one you made it the other way around, I love it! By the way, does the fact that their families are gone, going to mean that they won't remember them? Is it going to be a complete personality change? Anyway answer if you can or leave me in suspense, just keep updating! Love the chapter, can't wait for the next as usual, please update soon, bye bye!
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From ANON - Jeda on September 24, 2006
*sniffs* whats that smell? *sniffs again* smells like a cliffie *sniffs more* AND A MAJOR FIGHT NEXT CHAPTER!! WOOOOOOHOOOOO!!!!! BRING IT ON BABY!!! LLLLLLLLLLLETS GET READY 2 RUMBLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLE!!!!

Much Luv From NYC~.~.~.~.~.~.~
lil mIss drAMa QUEEN
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From ANON - Millie Ishtar Motou on September 24, 2006
*smirks* Hey boys look....She's trying to cahllenge you...

Mr. Sharp and Pointy: *yawns* She's either another Psycho or just stupid....

Marik: *laughs* Probably just stupid...

You know this author updates reguarly and all we do is to threaten her

Bakura: *shock and horror* You not getting a consience are you Mills?

*Shock and Horror* NEVER!!!!

Bakura: *relaxes* Okay..that's good

Well then...let's get drunk!!

Marik: Are you Satan wouldn't mind?

Nawww He's my Daddy Of course he won't mind ^___^

I'M A LITTLE PHAROAH NAKED AND HOT...BEND ME OVER AND DO ME UP THE ASS

Bakura: I'M A TOMB ROBBER, I'M GONNA STEAL YOUR GOLD!!! I'M OUT TO GET CHA AND THEN I'M GOONA KILL YA!!!

Marik: Assassin here, I have a large knife...I have a penis and Oh look it's Bakura's!! *sucks*

*is too drunk to notice* Update or get drunk LOLOLOLOLOL!!! *hic*

MAN LET'S HAVE MORE BEER!!!!
WEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!

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From ANON - Millie Ishtar Motou on September 24, 2006
*grin* Why thank you *bows*

Now then...Marik? Bakura?? Are you two making out again?

Marik: busy...fucking...calll....later

*shakes head* Honestly I swear you go at it more than Yugi and Yami do..and that's saying something

Bakura: *smirk* We beat the Phraoah and his tri haired freak for a hikari at EVERYTHING!!

HELL YEA!!!

talking of hikari's where are Malik and Ryou?

Marik: together...*snicker*

Oh okay...fair enough...*yawn* I'm Tired...

Satan: You think you can rule Here??

*smirk* We already are...now then....DADDY!!!???

Satan: Angel Toon??

Bakura: Pegasus...This is a nice surprise....So Millie is the daughter of Satan who is Pegasus...this is nice...

*hugs* Love you Daddy xxx

Satan: love you too...keep up the good work Angel Toon

^___^ we'll do...Come on boys let's go tell that author to update or she shall face the Trio Of Death and Satan PLUS The Dragons Of Hell...Venom Spike and Fang (The Three Blue Eyes White Dragons)
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From ANON - Jeda on September 24, 2006
ooooooooo a cliffie! that's evil. seto seems like a seriuos asshole in this fic.is there a specific reason why cuz i really wanna punch him out. wow this tyme you updated so fast head literally spinned. i MEAN LITERALLY. ne way i must sleep. i've been up 4 tha past 24hours and thats just not healthy.

Much Luv From Nyc~.~.~.~.~.~.~.~
lil mIss drAMa QUEEN
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From ANON - cirquegirl999 on September 24, 2006
Well that's a shame, Marik was an idiot so they're vampires now!lol I'm joking, the sotry wouldn't be half as fun without his crazy antics! Very good chappie, can't wait for the next.
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From ANON - Jeda on September 23, 2006
lol i hav a wierd feeling that you're trying to kill off all the annoying or unimportant people. i really like this fic and i can't wait to see what happens the day after the rituals and feedings are finished

Much Luv From NYC~.~.~.~.~
lil mIss drAMa QUEEN
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From ANON - Shinigami24 on September 23, 2006
WTF?! WHY does the vampires have to KILL their relatives?! It's NOT right! There's always the possiblity that they will MISS someone and that person will come after them for revenge! Hello-DOES the words vampire hunters mean anything to you?!
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From ANON - Millie Ishtar Motou on September 23, 2006
????: I like her...*smirks* But she will still die...

????: *grabs her from the back*

*kicks the guy in the nuts* DON'T MESS WITH ME FUCKER!!

????: *flips out Pen Knife* This will teach you Bitch...

*Grabs the knife and turns it on the other guy not rolling on the fall* YOU WERE SAYING BASTARD???

????: Hey take it easy...I'm Marik...and that...is Bakura

Bakura: Welcome to the team *grin*

I'm Millie Ishtar Motou...no way related to the dick of a Pharoah...

Bakura and Marik: *lughs* You're one of a kind Ishtar Motou

*End Flashback*

*Gonzubura is being hung up by nails in his ears while having dartz thrown at him*

*Anzu is being ertenally burned* There see we ARE bounty hunters
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From ANON - cirquegirl999 on September 23, 2006
Oh you evil creature, you're killing off eberyone's family! lmao! YAY! The family for some reason always gets in the way when dealing with those couples, though I wonder if the boys will feel the same when they realized what they did and how sadistic their masters are? Ohhh, I just love it when S,Y,B & M are jerks, it makes them so much more fun. Anyways another great chapter and a timely update, thank you thank you thank you! Can't wait for the next chapter!
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From ANON - Millie Ishtar Motou on September 23, 2006
*smirks* Boys...Anzu and Gonzubura have been chosen to die...by LadyVirgo Shall we accept

Mariik and Bakura: *nod*

It is settled...they will die...and when the fuck did I get so formal?

Bakura: *grin* You're always formal...cut it out...

You're right...Come on then let's cut these mutherfuckers up!!

Marik: That's the Millie we know and love

^__^

Gonzubura: Where the fuck am I? Why is it so cold?

I'm not cold...You cold Bakura...Marik?

Marik: I'm not cold

Bakura: Me neither

Anzu: Aggghhhh Who are you

The Trio of Death: Your worst nightmare!!

Gonzubura: I'm going to kill you!

The Trio of Death: *laugh insanely*

That's rich coming from a Mortal who shall be eternally punished...by the time we've even started with you...you'll be begging to die...but we'll never kill you...just eternally punished!!

Anzu: What about me?? *fear* What are you going to do to me?? *fear*

Marik: I can smell her fear...It smells so good...

*worried look* Whatever you do...don't eat her

Marik and Bakura: *pout* And Why not?

AwwwwWWWwww You look so cute when you pout..*hugs*

Marik: Millie...I swear if we wearn't a Trio I'd kill you...

Bakura: Yeah me too

You know we'd just end up liking each other...I mean that is how we met afterall...in that Dark Ally...

Bakura and Marik: *grin* Yeah...

Anyway..I wouldn't advise eating Anzu...She's not very good for you..she'll taste bitter and sweet..ewwwwwwwWWwwww

Marik and Bakura: EwwwwWWWwwww

*Flash Back*

*is pissed off about something* Grrrrr...I'm going to kill that brat....*growls* I wish I had friends that understood me...and my temper and shit...Grrr...I'm talking to myself BUT I DON'T CARE BECAUSE I'M MILLIE ISHTAR MOTOU AND I'VE JUST WALKED INTO AN ALLEY!!!

?????: Hey look fresh blood...*smirk*

?????: *grins* This Bitch is going down...

*Stops is not scared* OKAY YOU FREAKS OF DARKNESS SHOW YOURSELVES...I'M NOT SCARED OF ANYTHING...IN FACT I'M PISSED OFF...SO YOU WILL DIE!!!

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From ANON - Anon on September 23, 2006
hmn thanks for the asprin ^^ *takes it* much better! yay update! ^_^ it's all starting to make sense! bwahahaa.
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From ANON - cirquegirl999 on September 22, 2006
Great chapter! I love how quickly you update, and tell the story from different angles but still keep it all together, keep up the good work and I can't wait to read the next chappie!
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From ANON - Millie Ishtar Motou on September 22, 2006
It's a bloody good thing that you didn't challenge me...*smirk* Marik, Bakura and I are your bounty hounters...you wouldn't want to upset us now...would you..hmm? Now As the New Underworld Lords...Yes I am a Lord..I may be female...However I prefer to be a be a Lord as well...Anyway...We will need people to send to torture Now update and send us a sacrifice...possibly someone with a lot of life and Back Chat...Someone that You have a grudge against..come on now...We don't believe It's a Sin to want someone dead...

Marik: Millie's Right...Send us someone and we'll be Psychotically happy

Bakura: On The Seven Hells of Anubis...We'll be Verrrry happy

There you see...now who do you want dead?? Anzu perhaps??? Or maybe someone more original...We're awaiting Your Call...
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From ANON - lexen on September 22, 2006
Nice and dark really I didn't expect it to be this dark but I have only one thing to say... wow a great story and please update soon ^_^
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