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Reviews for Hell's Cradle - The First Trimester

By : MizumiBlu
  • From ANON - Samantha Kaiba on November 14, 2006
    Those chapters were great and I love how Jou just seems to be acting as if nothing is wrong and Kaiba is wishing that none of it was happening I love how you have everything worked out. You have to update soon...:-)
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  • From ANON - girlo on November 13, 2006
    Poor little Seto. I totally understand where he's coming from, being a pregnant male myself and all... glad to see you're still alive, now sleep or study or whatever and i will paciently wait for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Shadow2007 on November 13, 2006
    Seto... wanted... an.. ABORTION! WHAT THE HELL IMMA KILL HIM *Grabs Rusty Spork*.... wait a sec AFTER THE BABY IS BORN YOU DIE SETO! RAWR! >D This story is so FREAKIN AWESOME :D! Hahahahahhaha Joey is like high w/o the drugs:P. Rings out of a vending machine tck! how cheap!
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  • From ANON - paranoidcharlotte on November 13, 2006
    WHOOT! You updated! :) Hehe I found it really cute that they were wearing rings from a gumball machine. The description of the rings sounds like the ones they wear in Sims 2 for marriage. Hehe I'm so obsessed with this pairing I create Seto and Jounouchi sims.... then I make them get married and use a cheat to get Seto pregnant from Jounouchi :) Poor little Seto, nobodies treating him seriously. I hate it when people treat me like I'm a child and having a tantrum.
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  • From ANON - Terrie1958 on November 13, 2006
    We have waited WAY too long for these updates xD But I love the plot twists that you're laying down! I'll talk to you on AIM as usual.

    Yes, LittleKuriboh IS the best. xD

    "Welcome to Kentuckyfriedmcburgerking where all our meat is freshly slaughtered!"
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  • From ANON - LadyVirgo1956 on November 13, 2006
    How can I put this awesome chapter. I feel kinda sorry for Seto at this point and that doctor is and ass Mokuba and Jou had a right to know about the baby after all they are family. Rings from a bubble gum machine got to love Jou and his inventiness. Jous right on one point though Seto does need help and support through this. Love it cant wait to see what happens next.
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  • From ANON - LadyVirgo1956 on November 13, 2006
    Oh Jou is so wicked both him and Mokuba. Seto had better think of something fast. Jou isn't going to let him out of his sight. Call in the calvary.
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  • From ANON - Mishiko Shinsei on November 04, 2006
    Poor Seto! He might have had a chance to deal with things more rationally if not for that BASTARD Gozaboro. Please don't leave us hanging here long. I need to know what happens with Katsu and Seto!
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  • From ANON - Shadow2007 on October 21, 2006
    *begin rant* NUUUU SETO YOU WILL NOT KILL THAT BABEH! *Glares* JOEY TIE HIS BISH ASS UP! O.o' SETO YOU WOMAN GET THE FAK OVER IT! *end rant* WooOOOO you updated! :D yayayay Cant wait for the next chappy! >:D and i will send you the pic If i can ever get my lazy friend to draw it T-T (Shes good at that kind of stuff, i suck... bad... im talkin stickfigures with cloths here!) Can't WAIT to see your drawings though!
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  • From ANON - Samantha Kaiba on October 21, 2006
    Joey seems so happy, poor seto...he just doesnt want to be laughed at....come on Joey, he him out....make sure that you have that child....:-) Update soon
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  • From ANON - Super_Uke_Seto on October 21, 2006
    An abortion how ironic. I'm doing a report on that subject. update soon
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  • From ANON - paranoidcharlotte on October 21, 2006
    OOOOOO that's interesting from the lemon in the first fic I thought Seto was a virgin......... oh I like an abused Seto I guess I just like him in distrss teehee. Oh poor little Seto but it's obvious he's gonna keep it ..... otherwise you wouldn't have promised 3 fics for the trimesters! Wow Jou was really accepting of the fact that he was pregnant I expected him to be a bit like WTF!?!?! You do realize your a man!!! I guess he was ready for it cause of the preg test but still. I can't wait for the others reaction you have to include Jou's dad and mums reactions in it to. Is Jou gonna somehow find out about how Gozaburo abused our poor Seto?
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  • From ANON - Drachenaugen on October 20, 2006
    Nooooooo! *hold up ‘love your baby’ banner* Jou has to get that ridiculous crazy idea out of Seto’s head! No abortion damn it! My, you really have made Seto go hysterical lol, but it’s ok, I know you’re now cruel enough to kill the baby (kawai, I can only imagine how cute he/she will look). I loooved Jou’s reaction, and how he’s already planning on how he’ll treat a boy or a girl. I can’t decide which I’d rather myself, the idea of their baby is just to cute!

    (“I’M SHITTING A BABY OUT OF MY GAH-DAMN ASSHOLE, YOU SON OF A BITCH!”)
    *That* was just RICH! ROTFL

    So on one side we have Yami Marik who was a loony from the start, and the we have his host who is a guy who turned loony…hmmmm, NOT a good combo *shivers* And poor woman! Sure she was a bit annoying but it would have been easier just to pay for the apartment than killing her in such a gruesome manner :S I don’t understand loony guys (though they sure are fun to read). And Oji is some type of ghost minion? Interesting twist.
    And the thing about ‘The Priest’ and ‘millennium rod’ had me thinking of a Mc Donald’s happy meal toy. What do they take our cute brunet for?! Win all the toys in the meal and use them to make this huge interactive game? The idea made me laugh like mad :)

    Great job, can’t wait for more so please keep the good stuff coming!

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  • From ANON - girlo on October 20, 2006
    You know, I totally understand both Jou and Setos points of veiw. I mean, wanting the kid and not wanting it. And I really hate those other guys. She was offering them the apartment, they didn't have to kill her... Anyway, let's hope Jou convinces Seto to keep the baby, or else I don't really know where the plot would go.
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  • From ANON - clumsykitty on October 20, 2006
    AAAAAAAAAAAAAhhhhhhhhhh!!!!

    no, no, no, no an abortion!!!!!!!!

    please don't kill the puppy's baby


    T_T

    oh my... somebody kill Malik....


    I love you the way you write, you're amazing!!!

    n_n

    and that makes me shine
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