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Reviews for Hell's Cradle - The First Trimester

By : MizumiBlu
  • From ANON - hitori on October 20, 2006
    O.O OMG!!! i didn't think Seto would go all insane about this!!! TT.TT and poor Jou! this is soooo much drama!! but i guess if i had the same past and and was a guy AND was having a baby....i would be doin' the same thing.

    LMAO!! hahahahaha, funny joke! i laughed and it was...6:29 in the morning. dude! my high school football cousin was having an arguement, while sitting on the pourch, in front of MY house(i have no odea how they got there)...and yes his girlfriend is a bitch (in my opinion) and she was saying that he didn't love her and he replied-

    Look woman! Your picture is in my wallet and I'm sitting on it! if thats not love then i don't know what is!!!

    in the background you can hear laughing and then a thump...cause i fell, in my fit of laughter, LMAO! i think what he said, was quoted from sombody...i can't remember..anywayz! ttyl!!

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  • From on October 20, 2006
    Poor set-chan!!! *huggles him* He just needs some looovee ^^
    As always, keep up the good work. And dont start the game till I get back, okay? Im not even sure the code is valid anymore. So I need to be on when you sign up so if the codes wrong I can just buy you a new one. See you Sunday!
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  • From ANON - Velvetina on October 20, 2006
    **Glomps** I returned Seto in Getting Bi Mai right? Hee, feeling much better now.

    Oh my word is Seto throwing something of a hissy fit but I think we all know that Jou will pursuade Seto not to have an abortion, I'm just interested to see how he goes about it because I think its gonna take a lot of fast talking. As for Gozaburo we'll all go back in time and give him a good bashing before he dies, how dare he touch Seto like that?! Bastard.

    Heh wonderful chapter as all your writing is!

    Velvetina xx
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  • From ANON - LadyVirgo91656 on October 20, 2006
    Seto better not do it. I know he feels uncomfortable about the situation and it is his choice but Jou would feel so hurt. Someone needs to let him know there are other options. 1) He can continue both work and school until he starts to show. 2) With work he can do a lot of it from home and delegate the rest hell even Mokuba could help. 3) As for school it depends on where in the school year he is at. There is always home study. 4) Another option, this is where Seto got to swallow his pride. Just let everyone know. It's going to come out eventually anyhow. Seto going balistic is so typical Seto. Only looking at the situation from one side and not looking at it from both sides. Granted he is in shock but to make rash decisions could end up hurting a lot of people. Bad Marik, bad Malik. They can be so much fun. A one-shot for me huh. You know who I like *snickers*. You take care. Talk later. As always. Update soon.
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 20, 2006
    me- *crying with mokuba* T_______T
    seto- YOU HEARD WHAT I SAID!!
    jou- *literally ties seto to an anchor* there now ya can't move ^_^ *in sing song voice* i'm gonna be a daddy, I'm gonna be a daddy
    seto- *pouts* ....this is going to suck....i want icecream with peperchinies
    me- OO me too!
    seto- o.O
    me- i wan't icecream, minus the peperchini's
    seto- ....okay
    jou- *still singin* OH YEAH >W< cha ching baby! oh yeah! *victory dance*
    me- *gives seto icecream* ^-^ there you go.
    jou- oh yeah! i can't wait to rub it in otogi's face! xDD nehehhehehe
    me/seto- baka inu
    jou- ne?
    me- *ninja* okay......
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  • From ANON - Drachenaugen on October 10, 2006
    First of all, sorry for the delay in the review dear. I’ve been very busy with a deadline, and after that I was left exhausted (there wasn’t much difference between me and a vegetable yesterday) so even if I did read the chapter before, if I had posted a review then, it would have been rushed and sucked big time, and that wouldn’t be fair to you after all the effort you put in you’re updates.

    Ok, now on to the review. I must say Mizu, you really outdid yourself with this one. Seto’s reaction was SO believable! Sure, first he was ‘am I being punked?’ and all that (which truly was hilarious, paying the producer to not bother him is soooo Kaiba, money makes the world go around), but then he got the sad and shocked, ‘oh noes! I’m going to be a freak’ *hugs Seto* It’s just the perfect change of reactions Mizu. And I’m sure that, sooner or later, someone (either Moki, Jou or mother Miki (I haven’t forgotten about her, lol)) will make Seto realize the good part of being pregnant (even if he is a guy :P) if he doesn’t realize it on his own. Now I can’t wait to see how the ‘daddy’ will react, I’m sure he won’t start crying like ‘mom’ :) I also wonder how the gang will react when the find out, cause sooner or later they’ll find out no matter what.

    I liked Haruko-sensei more than a bit. She’s pretty cool. Mura-sensei is also good, but the lady has something that just clicks.

    Also, don’t worry about little time for feedbacks, you took the time to update and that’s more than enough. Though I would like at least a hint about my Yami Marik and children question at some point, that is, if it’s not to much trouble *puppy eyes* (something like ‘yeah, you’ll find out, don’t get your panties in a knot’ or ‘it’ll be a cold say in hell before I tell you anything’). Also, it is the Yami right?

    Anyway, got to go continue with my thesis. Great job and keep the good stuff coming please!

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  • From ANON - girlo on October 09, 2006
    Poor Seto, he will be a freak, and people will point and laugh and that crazy egyptian is still after him and all sorts of bad stuff can happen, and....and.... I can't wait to read more!
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  • From on October 09, 2006
    hello anessa here. the punk'd part was just hilarious!!!!!!!!!!!! OMG I was if I was white, I bet my face would be red all over! nyways, yeah...it's great but I like seto's reaction VERY well, it's not sappy at all. just really surprised and it seems like he really doesn't want the child. I hope u update sooner than later!
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  • From ANON - paranoidcharlotte on October 09, 2006
    Hehe I loved his reaction BRAVO *claps* I love it the way he was like "ASHTON FUCKING KUTCHER!" I also love the idea of him paying Ashton off hehe! AAWWW don't be sad little Seto (little Seto curled up in a ball so cute!) I want to know how Jou's going to react DAMNIT!
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  • From ANON - Shadow2007 on October 08, 2006
    OMGAWSH! :D That was so AWESOME so many sciency words and junk :P. and that Punked thing was awesome i laffed my ass off :P Im trying to get my friend to draw the babeh it will be so ADORABLE o.o' anyway cant wait till your next update! :D
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  • From ANON - clumsykitty on October 08, 2006
    T_T

    Seto suffering!!!!! Why?

    Well, I like the way that the doctors conviced him. *giggles*

    It's gonna be a girl or a boy? With blue eyes or hazel eyes?

    n_n

    You know how much make shine !!!!!!!1
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  • From ANON - Samantha Kaiba on October 08, 2006
    I cant wait for you to update...I want to know how Joey will take the news and I feel sorry for Seto....being told you're having a baby and all...
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 08, 2006
    me- omg, omg omg omg omg omg omg
    seto- TT-TT XD
    jou- eh? angel?
    seto- *would have done a happy dance if not been pregnant* .....jou..
    jou- eh? what is it!
    seto- you'll find out in the next chapter
    jou- >< >< >< >< >< awww you would do that to me wouldn't you!?
    me- *shrugs* update mizumi! *heats and huggles*
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  • From ANON - Usagi-chan on October 08, 2006
    That is horrible!!! What's Jou going to say!?!?!? Please Update this fine piece of work, this is one of the most interesting stories I've read.
    ~Usagi-chan
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  • From ANON - hitori on October 08, 2006
    AAAAWWWWW!!! BABY! BABY! BABY! BABY! ^-^ ah-hahahahahaha!

    anywayz, THIS ONE WAS EVEN FUNNIER!! LMAO! dude, the punk'd joke was hilarious!! it was all quiet in my house, and, mom was watching Opera and then she heard a miniacle laughing coming from my room...she said that she thought i was dieing at first...but i was..crying and laughing at the same time, and it felt damn good!

    man, i'm a little upset that my review was cut off, oh well...i was just rambling anyway, if you ask me...it was a REALLY REALLY REALLY long review...i don't even know what i was thinking.

    anywayz! i don't have any short stories to tell you..life is kinda a drag right now, but until next time! ^_~
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