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Reviews for Hell's Cradle - The First Trimester

By : MizumiBlu
  • From ANON - hitori on October 01, 2006
    *holds coffee cup in hand* wow...its like...1:50am *sip* and i am a walking zombie...i'm soooo tired!!! I had to drive all night Mizumi! ALL NIGHT!!! Just to pick up my un-greatful cousin!! Then he had the NERVE to tell me that he wanted to go back home...when I was like 30 miles away from my warm ass bed, i glanced over at him >.> and he was looking at me
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 01, 2006
    oh no!
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  • From ANON - clumsykitty on October 01, 2006
    The truth must be to accepted...

    have to...

    indeed...

    jejeje, well you always find a way to annnoyed me, to make shine and make laugh. Now... ¿Marik? what the...
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  • From ANON - LadyVirgo91656 on October 01, 2006
    Damn! Marik, thats trouble times 10 plus infinty. Mokuba don't you just love him. He can be so cute at times. Well I guess Seto finds out his pregnant in the next chapter. I did see you review thank-you so much. I have only one more chapter to go on my Vampire story and my new one as well. Just need the required reviews. I think you will like 'The Reunion' it is only three chapters and so far positive reponses on it. So Update soon.
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  • From ANON - Shadow2007 on September 29, 2006
    GAh ! OMGAWSH o.o' Update I BEG OF THE!!!! I cant review if you dont update mon ami!
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  • From ANON - Psycho Demon Witch on September 26, 2006
    *giggles* that argument between Seto and Jou was hilarious. I look forward to reading more.
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  • From ANON - paranoidcharlotte on September 26, 2006
    HEHE Seto's all hormonal! HE'S SO CUTE HORMONAL! OOOOOOO is this new student Marik? Does Malik know Marik is back? OOOOOHHHH I can't wait till he finds out he's pregnant I reckon his and Jou's reaction will be HILARIOUS!
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  • From ANON - Annya on September 25, 2006
    continue i like as always your writting. i read your other story start fine, but i like more this one; and this was a funny chapter.I'll wait the next up date.

    Good luck and Bye^^
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 25, 2006
    i love the possessive, dominant jou in your fics. can't wait for more!
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  • From ANON - Shadow2007 on September 24, 2006
    Gah! Sorry i missed the first chapter!!! OmGawsh! This is going to be great! :D It's to early in the story to start one of my rants( But the mystery bastard will die). Seto and Jou's baby will be so ADORABLE! Picture Jou's blond hair and Seto's sapphire blue eyes *Everyones cue to go Awww....* Ahh but I digress ON TO WHAT A NORMAL REVIEW SHOULD CONSIST OF! This story is very well written so far and I love the plot >:D (Seto having mood swings OmG!) Cant WAIT for the next chapter.............. .............. .............. Is it up yet?
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  • From ANON - Drachenaugen on September 24, 2006
    KYAAAAA! To many cute things in this chapter! I’m suffering cuteness overload! Seto hugging his peanut butter jar, playing with the spoon looking down, peeing on himself, so adorable I want to drop! And Jou thinking that Seto is going to the doctor even if it’s screaming and kicking, that was so adorable as well *glomps Mizu for cute writing* I loved this, loved it to bits! And then at the end we get the stalker minion, so exiting *bounces* I want to see what will happen next chapter, I hope they find out soon about ‘mommy’s’ pregnancy because their reactions are going to kill me for sure. Though I am also worried about what will happen because of Seto’s stubbornness to go see the Doc. Great job again, keep the good stuff coming!
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  • From ANON - Samantha Kaiba on September 24, 2006
    Your stories are brillant...Im reading them all...and you have to update soon...I mean the whole peanut butter thing...I was laughing and could sort of picture it....keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - Velvetina on September 24, 2006
    **Snuggles** Nah, you don't suck with updates. You update a lot faster than most. You rule hon... **Grin**

    Hmmm...I'll tell you about the cheesecake when you let me borrow Seto!

    Malik, Malik, Malik! He's the only one who makes sense. Yay, I adore Malik or...waaait if he's gonna be the baddie maybe I won't adore him by the end of this fic. **Giggle** The battle city arc is just going to hell between Malik and Shizuka. I'd better be right now, but I don't think it can be anyone else.



    Gettin Bi Mai:Well since Seto's so miserable without Jou I guess I can forgive him for the pot and I trust you about it, but I shall be keeping a careful eye on the situation...and yes you send me Seto I send you my special cheesecake. But he has to keep the smexy long hair.



    Review: I knew I'd almost forgotten something. Hee. Seto is one scary dude in this chapter, hormone hell or what? I kinda feel sorry for the guy...though maybe more sorry for Jou at this point in time. Seriously he's gonna have a fun few months of mood swings coming up. And the idea of the doctor giving Mokie a 'birds and the bees chat-man style' had me wetting myself with laughter. Excellent chappie!
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 24, 2006
    me- aww *plays nurse* ^_^ you must get better! bedrest! *sighs* T-T we will all await the day that you get better mizumiblu!
    seto- =.= i don't feel good
    mokuba- "." tell me about it
    seto- but i just did
    jou- o.O mmmn, tell me mokie
    mokuba- NO! find out yourself!
    jou- >< *series of beeps*
    me- omg, don't listen to him! YAY you lurves me too! T-T aww get betters yeah? *sends mental luves* ^^
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  • From ANON - clumsykitty on September 24, 2006
    Je je je je je

    n_n

    You did it again! It was so fantastic and hilarious like you said before, but I'm a little concern about the new student... I dunno , maybe my nerves...

    you make shine!!!!
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