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Reviews for Hell's Cradle - The First Trimester

By : MizumiBlu
  • From ANON - hitori on September 24, 2006
    LMAO!!! That shit was fucking funny!! All over peanut butter!! ROFLMAO!!!! this is gotta be the funniest chapter you've written so far!!! *gasps for air* on god *gasp* i can't breathe!

    and your comment about laughing in class made my day! seriously. i was at work, and this guy just kept on mean mugging me, and later on in the night he called me a "nigger" and i called him a "bitch" and if he didn't watch it, i'd tie him into a chair and rape his son in front of him...and i don't even know if he has a son...but i was just very....whats a good word..irked?...that he would say some shit like that. i really wanted to take him behind a random building and fuck his world up. just thinking about it puts me in a bad mood. BUT!! you made everything better with that one comment and i thank you!

    OH! and i told Juju what you sayed and she said "fuck yes" heh, i think you might have expanded her ego just a[lot]little bit.

    sooo...Mr. I-want-seto-to-have-my-kid is...Odji, hey? hmm, very interesting *grins* me wanna read more!

    well..nothing interesting[POSITIVELY] has happened to me lately. so no funny story, this time ^_~ ttyl girl
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  • From ANON - jess on September 24, 2006
    yay 4 another chaapter. and yes i'm reading this fic too. update soon and i still can't get over the faact that to kill a kaiba and to keep a katsu became a mpreg fic. it's great anyway so update soon.

    PS: yay 4 jou's angel cause seto in these fics is the bestest and he's so cute. i
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  • From MenacingK on September 24, 2006
    This is one of my favorite series! The stories are all well written and have a perfect blend of angst, humor, action, and sex! Uke!Seto is a major plus too. Please don't wait so long to update this time!
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  • From ANON - girlo on September 24, 2006
    Uh oh..... He'd best be off to see that doctor! Or I'll.... umm... keep reading to find out what he really does.....
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  • From ANON - SilverYaoiHellion on September 24, 2006
    Mood swings, odd food choices, and peeing, lots of peeing; all of these the signs of pregnancy and no one's able to figure it out? Well, I guess that's what he gets for being a man! Please update both of your stories soon!!! When I saw that you updated 'Gettin' Bi Mai' I was over joyed; when I saw you update this awesome story, I almost jumped out of my chair! Please don't wait too long! I know that you aren't going to leave your readers like this, but waiting for so long is so bad for stress levels...
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  • From UrsurlaFretz on September 24, 2006
    Mood swings and cravings you've got to love them. Jou is slowly putting things together. I hope he can figure things out soon and get Seto to the doctor. I hope this new student won't cause trouble for our couple. They just got rid of one pain in the ass they sure as hell don't need another one. I hope you feel better soon. Being sick sucks. Get some rest. I'll be looking for your review to my story which has taken on a life of its own. Originally I had only twelve chapters planned but the way its going I don't know now. So read and enjoy and update as soon as you feel better.
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  • From on September 23, 2006
    Woot!! Finally a update! Ive been waiting on it religiously... I wasnt kidding when I said I had nothing better to do. >
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  • From ANON - Annya on September 22, 2006
    ^_^
    Hi, again!
    i'm glad that you decide toup date the new story.
    good for start. I'll keep reading.:D

    please,up date soon!!!

    Bye,i'll read you later!
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 20, 2006
    me- omg omg omg
    seto- >> shut up, you're making me sick
    me- *holds up chocolate fudge ripple*
    seto- *snatches it* XD
    jou- omg, now i tink i'm gunna be sick, cut down on de chocolate angel
    seto- *around cake* no, baka inu
    jou- =-=
    me- I KNOW SOMETHING YOU DON'T KNOW!
    mokie- i know
    me- don't tell he'll find out!
    seto- o.O
    jou- i'm already gonna kill ya
    me- *eep* you'll find out! mizumiblu you rock mah socks off!
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  • From ANON - SilverYaoiHellion on September 19, 2006
    OH MY GOD!!! The sequel's finally up! I was thinking that you have forgotten about your wonderful story and ditched us; but with the new story plot, well, that makes up for it, for now anyway. I'm so happy you started the new story, I hope you continue it soon, very soon!
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  • From ANON - Drachenaugen on September 19, 2006
    I still love you! *hugs back* I read both your e-mails (found the one I had erased by mistake which still wasn't completely lost) and answered with one of my own. Don't feel bad, no harm done 'we're still cool' X3 *hugs again*
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  • From ANON - girlo on September 19, 2006
    you know, sometimes i just wanna smack some sense into that boy, Kaiba being that boy. Anyways, glad to see you're back
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  • From ANON - Hitori on September 19, 2006
    WOOOOOOOOOTZ! *glomp* sorry, i had to do that. Its a great start and i'm so stoked about reading the rest!

    I really don't know why i named myself O.O heh i guess it was because my very first review, on the last story...*strikes a thinking pose*hmmm..oh well

    lol the most funniest thing happened the other day! and i just have to tell you! ok. i was at a high school football game, i was watching my cousin(he's a senior), with my life long friend judith(i call her juju). the game was goin great, we were cheering and my cuz was kicking ass! then juju wanted somthing to eat and so we walked towards the consestion(sp?) stand. but on our was over there we caught sight of the most hideous thing we've EVER seen.....it was a anorexic/bulimic girl, whos hip bones popped out of her body...its was GROSS! I'm sure juju thought the same thing...but i never thought she would say anything about it!

    so, she sharply took a detour and headed her direction...and i followed behind her, just to be nosey. Juju stopped right in front of her, and looked at the hotdog in her hand and said "you know thats goin' straight to your ass" AND WALKED OFF!!! i had to bite my hand to avoid laughing! IT WAS SOOOO FUNNY!!! but you wanna know whats funnier? The girl threw the hotdog away!! i couln't take it anymore and busted out laughing! The only thing juju did was smirk and continued walking...she's so awsome!

    well i'm gonna read your other story! you'll hear from me there! til' next time! ^-^
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  • From ANON - paranoidcharlotte on September 19, 2006
    Oh I can't wait till Jou and Seto find out Setos pregnant HURRY UP AND UPDATE ooooohhhhh please?? Ohno Mariks back (well I assume it's Marik!) Or maybe it's Malik cause some people call YamiM Malik and some people call him Marik personally I call him Marik and the hikari Malik but enough about me just UPDATE!
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  • From ANON - Velvetina on September 19, 2006
    Yes I did miss you! You were gone far too long for my liking **Hugs** I don't know what you've managed to get yourself into but dang right you're gonna have to give us timely updates of both **cackles**...unless of course there are good reasons.

    Well don't worry about this fic, so far it gets a great bit thumbs up...but more on that in a moment.

    I ended up making my own cheesecake in the end...I lurve cheesecake. Not as much as Seto Kaiba, or Jou, or Tsuzuki, or Watari...or various other bishies that I'm fond of **Laugh** But cheesecake is high on the list...eh moving on!

    Awww thank you, you're popular with me too!

    Now onto the actual review, tis very good. Though poor Seto must be feeling really crappy, and some of his food choices scare me O.o, really dude that will NOT be helping the situation. **Grins**

    Also I'm now wracking my brain to try to figure out who the baddie is. Battle city? Is it one of the main contenders that we saw or was it just some 'nobody' that Kaiba happened to beat on his way to the top? I odn't know! **Whine** I wanna know! Lol

    Update soon...PLEASE! Hee
    xx
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