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By : hatochiisai
  • From ANON - Limpet666 on February 04, 2007
    Oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooh!!! Ryou is REALLY annoying me now! *huff* I'm beginning to think Marik was right for leaving him, even if he was egged on my that mean ol' Constantine. I know it's not really Ryou's fault, but you'd think he'd have a little bit more control! *huff*

    XD I just love how calm Yami is about it all, though. And I can believe they clipped his wings! That's so cruel!!

    ¬¬ Something bad needs to happen to Dartz...something very bad...

    *Whines* I wanna know what's happening with Seto! Oh, and Pegasus! Pegasus needs some luff too...even if he was a complete a-hole in the prequel.

    Post quickly! I've been checking every day for about a week for the next update T.T it's so addictive, damn you!
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  • From Andyouthinkimcrazy on January 22, 2007
    XO I really don't like the events of this chapter at all! XO There are so many characters I have to refrain from kicking! Especially Marik, I think he needs to be kicked the hardest right now, then Dartz...

    T_T Now they have Yami! Seto should have just gone with Yami's plan... but now they have to find some other way to get them back! Stupid Dartz! *grumble*

    I think I'm just going to cry and go read 'Tales of Arabian Nights' ... maybe that will make me happier...
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  • From Andyouthinkimcrazy on January 13, 2007
    *trying desperately not to kill Dartz* I really want to stab him in the face..! Why don't they ever seem capable of taking 'no' for an answer!? WHY!?
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  • From ANON - yunasgrace on January 13, 2007
    firstly i wanted to say that i really missed your updates over the christmas holidays (im kinda glad there over so now we can have more updates ^^). while reading this chapter i had trouble concentrating on the chapter itself, i read the part about Dartz wanting Bakura to see a shrink and i coudnt stp picturing it on my head XD. i just know by the end of it the psychaitrist(i should get points for trying to spell the word XD)is gonna need more help than whats actually possible ^^.

    hope you enjoyed you christmas holidays and i cant wait for another chappie *smiles sweetly*
    yunasgrace
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  • From ANON - A: on January 13, 2007
    GAH! When will Pegsy be back?! T_T I almost miss Pegsy. As much as he was EEVIIIL in the beginning of the Jungle, he got lovable towards the end...it was such a cute pairing. T_T I wonder where Pegsy is though? He's way better than Dartz...but I have a feeling that Dartz is more powerful? ...Come on Pegsy, be the man! (Albeit a fruity - tip-toed-magenta-suit-wearing fruity man, but hey...XD) and smack Dartz with your billionaire gloves and buy/take Ryou and Marik back!! GOOO MORE PEGSY/RYOU!

    ...You got me into this pairing!! Not my fault!!

    I love the idea of Tuc and Nod as paternal and maternal gauardians for Ryou. ^^
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  • From ANON - carol2flute on December 30, 2006
    well i feel terrible for not reviewing a lot. i love ur stories and ur writing is excellent. i log online every week just to check if you updated ur story. you are very good at the characters, and i see that you don't follow the Mary Sue. WONDERFUL! i can't wait for the next update. i hope it goes better with the writing. by the way, is Yami going to be caught with a tracking device, like he planned? Or Seto going to have to lock him up. i wouldn't put it past Yami if he did it by himself without Seto's help. he is stubborn. that's probably why Yami is one of my favorite characters. But i'm starting to like Ryou in this story. He is gaining courage and drifting slightly from his innocent rabbit side, but he still has a long way to go. i can't wait to see what ryou comes out looking like after this transformation. i bet i won't be surprised with ur writing skills.
    keep up the good work, I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - RaveEchidna on December 28, 2006
    Noo bad Dartz but I still dont hate him I just hope he sees what he is doing is wrong. And well I still dont like the dark lion. Tuck and Nod are too damned cute and I love how they've be come Ryou's parents.
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  • From ANON - A: on December 27, 2006
    'Nod! We're rabbits! And he's... well... he's... MOSTLY human!!!' Tuc whined. 'And he's like... FIFTY times our size!!!'
    Oh, I like this line. XD XD Thats' so cute. I can totally see Tuc spazzing going "but..but...but...HE'S SO BIG!!!!!" i LOVED THAT LINE. it was way too adorable.

    Poor Ryou, but I'm glad that Tuc and Nod are taking care of him. Where is Petgasus, anyway? Do they know tat he used to belong to Pegasus? If they don't, it'd be awesome if Pegasus just 'came in' to 'enjoy' himself and saw Ryou through those pane glass windows...or 2 way mirrors or something...Iono, Dartz is pretty powerful, but Pegasus was pretty awesome in teh last fic...T_T I want Pegsy back!!! I want Pegsy to help Ryou again!!!! T_T ...Someone needs to kick Dartz in the groin...


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  • From ANON - A: on December 27, 2006
    'Nod! We're rabbits! And he's... well... he's... MOSTLY human!!!' Tuc whined. 'And he's like... FIFTY times our size!!!'
    Oh, I like this line. XD XD Thats' so cute. I can totally see Tuc spazzing going "but..but...but...HE'S SO BIG!!!!!>
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  • From MenacingK on December 27, 2006
    More rabbit? I can't wait to see how he is now. I keep feeling like things are hopeless for them. This chapter is wonderful and I can't wait for more!
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  • From ANON - Limpet666 on December 27, 2006
    Woo!! A new chapter for christmas, that was the best present ever!! Oo well, it would have been if it didn't make me angry and want to kill Dartz for being so mean to...well...all the hybrids XD That bastard!! *huff* He's worse than Pegasus was!! It's weird, Pegasus and Dartz would be one of my favourite pairings (If I ever saw someone that had done a ff of it) but when I read this, or it's prequal I cant help really hating them XD I really wanted to kill Pegasus in Jungle, and he's my favourite YGO bishie XD You just write so damn well and convincingly, you should run for president...of...something Oo

    Poor Ryou, he doesnt get a break, but maybe those new rabbit genes might make him less naive. I'm SO glad he's finally twigged that Dartz is a bad guy XD that bunny really frustrates me sometimes.

    Something bad should happen to Rafel...something really bad...*ponders*

    *glompage* I love your ff's! Please keep writing!!!
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  • From ANON - yunasgrace on December 26, 2006
    i really do love your story and this is nothing against yur story but even i have to admit that ryou is getting too whiney, i dont see why dartz is trying so hard. and i dont really understan whats tuc's problem coz hes bsically been raising Ryou anyway so officially becoming his parent wont change much.
    i loved the part where Bakura was hearing Spunky talk XD
    now everyone officially thinks hes lost the plot... maybe Rafel hit bakura on the head a few to many times ^^

    cant wait for another chappie
    yunasgrace
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  • From ANON - demonchilde4 on December 26, 2006
    awwwww poor things! poor ryou. poor marik. dartz is an ass. wtf is he doing hurting bakura?! :'( :cuddles bakura::poor baby
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  • From ANON - e.t.c. on December 26, 2006
    MERRY CHRISTMAS!
    The story's going along great! :D
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  • From ANON - e.t.c. on December 26, 2006
    MERRY CHRISTMAS!
    The story's going along great! :D
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