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Reviews for Between Here and There

By : WotanAnubis
  • From ANON - Linkin-Phoenix on April 27, 2007
    Whoa, intense, I enjoyed that immensely. The whole Master/Pet idea revolving around the Harpies & Mai is quite original. Mai/Anzu, not original, but the blend is right, fire and water make for an interesting combination (In the metaphsyical sense if you follow me.)

    I do have.. a few reservations though.

    Mai & Anzu moving in together... hm, I like it, but it... it seems, contrived for lack of a better word. It has no flow to it within the paramitars of the story. I would have kept them apart, it makes it more... unusual.

    Introducing Ishizu, this... I have to say, i don't like. I'm sorry if that insults you, I just don't. I think the story would be better if the central characters were just Anzu, Mai & The Harpies. Hey, it's your story I'm just stating an opinion. I will say though I'm slightly predujiced, I'm not a big Isis fan. Serenity, Anzu, Mai, they're my favourite girls in YGO (Anzu in particular.)

    I can understand how you feel, being a writer on FF.net myself I've had occasion to want to throw it in. My interest started waining a while ago as well, then I found the Manga and DAMN does it kick ass compared to that stupid excuse for a dub.

    Anyway, I enjoyed your story, I won't say please continue, all I will say is that, if you choose to update, I'll keep my eye out.

    Later,
    Linkin-Phoenix
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  • From ANON - Revan on April 20, 2007
    I really need to travel outside of your Game section more often. Can not belive I missed this one. Fantastic work.
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  • From ANON - sean moses on April 13, 2007
    Hey you should have them upgrade there subscriptions, so that you can have them do more
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  • From ANON - Tia on February 25, 2007
    This story is great I wish I'd found it sooner hope for an update

    The Sexy Slave Tia
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  • From Bishonen on February 18, 2007
    Wow that chapter was great I hope that I was'nt one of the reviewer's that aws whiny and got on your nerves but i rerally look forward to an update this is a great story and there are not enough yuri on this site.

    With Love;Imasuky Lomae
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  • From Bishonen on February 18, 2007
    Are you ever goin to update this because I really liked it I can understand if youu have other things to do with your life but still a least letting us know that you arent going to work on this any more would at least be nice

    With love;Imasuky Lomae
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  • From ANON - Nirvana-X on February 17, 2007
    Im guessing this storys dead then huh? Stop checking back everyday? Ok, bye.
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  • From babyslave on January 27, 2007
    Oh my god i love this please tell me there will be more.
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  • From ANON - Nirvana on November 20, 2006
    DONT STOP! YOUR THE ONLY REAL FRIEND I GOT! ummm...i mean... hehehe
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  • From ANON - smile-hatred on November 04, 2006
    hey you contion that cool man keep going

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  • From ANON - Jewel of Egypt on November 03, 2006
    OoO Wow, that was a damn good chapter. Heh, I guess we all figured Tea would have a palace with fairy-type monsters, along with a Black Magician Girl or two. ^__^; Keep up th good work!
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  • From ANON - Shadow on November 03, 2006
    Well... This is a drag....This story is going on unfinished. I hate you all!
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  • From ANON - Nirvana on October 23, 2006
    Oh, and i bet your wondering "Wheres Duck_Hunter and The_Rock?" well i got them out of the house by throwing a bunch of there magazines in a random truck. Hopefully they'le be gone for a few days...hopefully...
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  • From ANON - Nirvana on October 23, 2006
    FINALLY! ...i mean... AWWWWWW THATS SOOO CUTE! It was worth the wait!
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  • From Bishonen on October 22, 2006
    Omg that was fucking great I'm so gald i chaecked that was the best chapter yet just wish youd use Mystical Elf

    With Love; Imasuky Lomae
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