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Reviews for Lovless

By : Tanaskarel
  • From kiaratatsu on August 19, 2011
    OOOoooo hope to see more of this!
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  • From ANON - anonymia on October 05, 2006
    Your Fanfiction sounds very interesting.
    Please update soon!
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  • From ANON - ChibiRinni on October 02, 2006
    I like this version better than the first. A little crit. You should spell check it a bit and start a new paragraph for who is speaking, it gets a little hard to know who's speaking if you don't. You need to also be careful about your tenses. Is it past or present? There were a few spots that had that issue, and a few words were not right. "felling" and "feeling" is one example. ^.^ I'm not trying to flame, just letting you know some mistakes. Anyway, the story is good and I would like to see the next chapter soon. ^_^ Making it longer is a good idea too, like you said you would at the end of the chapter. Until next time. Byee!

    ~ChibiRinni ^.~
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