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Reviews for Leave Me Alone: The Seto Kaiba Story

By : kaibastalker
  • From ANON - The One and ONLY MIM on January 07, 2007
    *keeps running* YOO MILLLLIIEE!!! WWAIIITT UP!! *blinks* What the fuck? Why the hell am I reviewing my own story?

    Millie: I have no idea...

    Bakura:....If you check it's not by "Kaibastalker" It's by...

    Saskuke: KREAUGERSTALKER!! *giggles* WAIT UP FWEDDIEEEE!!!!!!!

    Freddie: *runs*

    Shall we get out of here?

    Millie, Marik and Bakura: *nod before turning away on their heels*

    Millie...how come your not mad at me...for nicking your time spot?

    Millie: I'm not because I don't think it's your fault...*looks at you suspicously* Is it?

    *shakes head before sweatdropping* NO NO NO I swear

    Millie: *smirks* Good xx Now let's get out of here *they all leave*

    *Meanwhile*

    Sasuke: FWEEEDDIIEEE COOOMEEE BBBAAAACCCKKK!!!

    Freddie: AGGGGHHHHHHHHHH!!!!
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  • From ANON - LadyVirgo1956 on January 06, 2007
    I loved the scene between Seto and Bakura. A promise between two friends soon to be lovers I hope when you get your inspiration back. I'm sad that this is the last chapter for awhile T_T so come back soon with another chapter. In the meantime keep writting. Bye for now.
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  • From ANON - Vantri on January 06, 2007
    *Goes through the door*
    *Eating on choclate*

    Here Gumman, here's your choclate.. *gives Gumman her choclate*
    Dont forget to share with Keyhala. She might want some xD

    *Puts down milk*
    Thanks for watching E&I and Rebellion for me..

    Time to review this now..

    Bakura rememberd his past.. That can't be easy.. Such Horrible memories...

    And Kaiba, what a nice guy, making such a promise.. I bet Bakura is happy to "have" Kaiba ^^

    And blushing so much and so easy, I never knew he could do that... That's kinda cute xD

    *Takes a sip of milk from a glas*
    Well... I have nothing more... I have decided to live here so you can't run away xD
    So.. Bye or something then xD
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  • From ANON - Vantri on January 06, 2007
    The Mob is gone... I guess waving with a sword and two guns really scares people...

    Whatever, they're gone... Time to review xD

    That Unicorn brat is annoying, she always make's things harder for Kaiba then they really are...
    And Bakura was a sneaky one wraping himself around Kaiba... hahaha xD

    Bakura really want some action here it seems ^^

    To bad you are going to put this on hold, I will miss it..

    Can I leave my guns and my sword here while I go and buy some milk?
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  • From ANON - Crimson2006 on January 05, 2007
    YAY! I was so happy to read that Bakura and Seto had a little moment there. Can't wait to read the next chapter and you should try watching the show on Youtube.com They don't have every episode but they have quite a few.
    I hope that you can get inspired soon! Keep up the good work, but don't stress yourself out. If you need to take a break then I understand. ^^
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  • From ANON - Crimson2006 on January 05, 2007
    lol unicorn auctioned them!!!

    Ah, I'm so sorry to hear that your having trouble with this story. I get like that too sometimes when I write...
    I hope that you can find inspiration soon. Good luck!
    BTW, great chapter!
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  • From ANON - Crimson2006 on January 05, 2007
    YAY! I came to check for updates and you did 3 chapters!!!!
    I'm so happy! ^^
    This chapter was really good. I like how you made Isis against Yami/Yugi! And I'm highly anticipating Malik entering
    the story!

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  • From ANON - LadyVirgo1956 on January 05, 2007
    I will miss this story. I hope you can continue it. Why don't you take up my story challenge with Bakura/Seth/Seto until you can restart this one back up. It could be very good in the hands of the right person. I enjoyed this chapter as well unicorn is such a brat and Bakura being in the tournament should be interesting. Update soon.
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  • From ANON - Sasuke and Freddie The lovebumkins on January 05, 2007
    Oh Wow nice chappie...*giggles* Stop that Freddie..

    Freddie: Meow!

    Millie: Okay where the fuck am I this time? *looks at sign* OH NO!! OH NO!! NOOOO!!!!

    We're in fairy land ^^ hee hee

    Millie: MARIKK!!!! BAKUURRA????

    *Marik and Bakura are singing the F-U-N song while dancing in a feild of flowrs*

    Millie: OKAY THAT IT IS!!! *sings the fun song and dances in a feild of flowers*

    .......

    ..............That's all folks......


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  • From ANON - Marik Ishtar and Co. on January 04, 2007
    *forces Millie to drink* Here you go Mind slave!!

    Millie: WTF???? Marik since when did you get to review?

    Since you became my mind slave...

    Millie: Now I'm just scared...am I dead or dreaming?

    Bakura: *smirks* Both

    Millie: *looks at KS* I blame your potion for this...

    *smirks* At least it doesn't give you extra private parts Mind Slave! *shudders*

    Freddie: *sings* I'm a barbie girl in a barbie world imagination It's your world's creation ^^

    Sasuke: Love the Story Yankiedoo so...update soon...

    Millie: I'm going to die again and try to wake up normally *dies of the Barbie Song*
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  • From ANON - LadyVirgo1956 on January 04, 2007
    I am going to miss this story. I liked Battle City. With a long story it is hard to keep up the inspiration, you'll get it back when you least expect it. There are other areas and universes you can write for. Just have patience with youselve and just pace yourself a little. Now the review great chapter I loved the fact that Isis doesn't like the Pharoah and blames him for what is happening to her brother. Unicorn is such a brat selling such valuable cards like the god cards. Update soon.
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  • From ANON - Vantri on January 04, 2007
    *snumbles in* Woah, there are many people standing right here... I wonder what they want... *scratches head*

    Oh... I leave that for the moment.. Time ro review ^^

    So this was also a Isis chapter. More about that godcards and she even had one. (I knew that but acts suprised xD)
    Kaiba is suprised alot nowdays, he must think of his health and dont be suprised alot xD

    Luckily he have Bakura to take care of him ^^

    So this is the last chapter for now?... That's sad..
    We hope you find the inspiration soon again ^^

    I think this mob is because you're not going to write for a while.. I think they are mad ^^'
    Whata..... I can't get out, they have blocked the door... *bangs door* IDIOTS.....

    I'm stuck here then ^^'

    Bye *waves*
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  • From ANON - Shadow Mistress on January 03, 2007
    Whee more chapters! Hilarious as always and I love how Bakura was making Seto blush some more. *smirks* I'm liking this story and how it follows the story with some fun-filled twists. Til the next time then. See ya. ^_~
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  • From ANON - LadyVirgo1956 on January 02, 2007
    Talk about going in the opposite direction of the show. I never read the magna but this is getting interesting. I always thought that Isis liked the Pharoah, and the three cards where split between Seto, Yugi, and Marik. Update soon want to know where you are taking this.
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  • From ANON - Vantri on January 02, 2007
    *scratches Head* Damn tree that appears out of nowere... *Chops the tree down*
    Much Better *big smile*

    Oh... Review time!!
    This chapter was interessting. And Kaiba were blacked out for a long time, and he doesn't belive in rebirth and such...
    He must belive in that kinda stuffs xD
    He were interessted when they said about the gods, nothing else excepted from Kaiba... Only power xD

    I guess it's my time to leave..
    *ties red bandana around his forhead* Farwell folks..
    *swings his red cape and walks away*
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