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Reviews for Leave Me Alone: The Seto Kaiba Story

By : kaibastalker
  • From ANON - LadyVirgo1956 on November 19, 2006
    I do not like Pegasus. If you want to know how much I dislike him read my story Night of the Vampires. Yugi is so sickenly sweet in this it makes my teeth hurt and I hope in your version Pegusus gets his butt kicked but good not by Yugi but by Seto. Update soon.
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  • From ANON - Millie Ishtar Motou on November 19, 2006
    *grin* I like where this going...

    Bakura: that's a first...

    Marik: *snicker*

    Freddie: Hey Millie...can I please go kill people now

    Okay fine..if you must...Mr.Sharp and Pointy, Venom let's ride!

    BEWD a.k.a Venom: ^___^

    BEWD a.k.a Spike: zzzzzZZZZzzzz

    BEWD a.k.a Fang: *chasing butterflies*

    hee hee...

    awwwww....
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  • From ANON - Danni on November 15, 2006
    WOW! This is hilarious! The chapters are a bit short and the humor is a bit dry though. But keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - LadyVirgo1956 on November 15, 2006
    I hate a tease. Oh well when it comes to writting a good story im just as bad. You have got to put either Seto and Jou together or Seto and Ryou/Bakura. Please not Yugi/Yami and Seto. To me they are not a good match. Update soon.
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  • From ANON - Clarity on November 14, 2006
    It's an interesting story you got going there. I like the humor. I think the first chapter was the absolute best when his boyfriend suddenly went scitzo on him. ;)

    The only thing I didn't care for are those chapters you wrote that had little to no change, whatsoever. Like, the helicopter scene. You don't want to repeat the exact same plot that any fan all ready read in the manga. It's just boring. You got to add atleast a little 'something' for change. Like.....instead of the guard aiming a gun because Pegasus ordered him to, you could have had the guards get flirty and try and make some kind of sex offer. Then when Kaiba rudely refused, they could have gotten in such a jealous stink that one aimed a gun at him, while the other told him to blow him away. See? That would have good, too. ;)

    Of course....that's just an example. You see my point, anyway.

    But, other than that.....I like it, so far. I just hope I can find your fic again the next time you update. This websight is so unorganized compared to ff.net. ;p

    Clarity

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  • From ANON - LadyVirgo1956 on November 12, 2006
    Yea Seto won. *LadyVirgo1956 is doing the happy dance.* Seto will get Mokuba back. Just dont let Pegasus trap him inside a card. Ryou and Bakura will be a match for Seto hope he can keep up with them. *snickers* Great chapter update soon.
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  • From ANON - LadyVirgo1956 on November 08, 2006
    Seto is very protective of his brother. I hope in your story Seto does beat Yugi. If you're not going to put Seto/Jou together I hope Bakura is in this formula. Seto dueling under Pegasus's rules this should be interesting. Update soon.
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  • From ANON - LadyVirgo1956 on November 05, 2006
    No Seto/Jou *sobs* I'll still read *sob* Update soon T_T Good chapter.
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  • From ANON - LadyVirgo1956 on November 01, 2006
    The chapters are short and I hope they are longer in the future. I hope that you evevtually pair Seto and Jou together. As for Honnda and Anzu they are idiots. Ryou's not to be trusted. Yugi is so dense here it is really funny I wonder what he gave Seto. Update soon.
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  • From ANON - LadyVirgo1956 on October 29, 2006
    I understand I havent read too many of the manga *sigh* but I am still enjoying this. I do like Kaiba and Jounochi/Joey. I would love to see the direction you're going to take this in though. Update soon. Note Kaiba is smart flying a helicopter is nothing to him.
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  • From ANON - LadyVirgo1956 on October 23, 2006
    It looks to me like you are following the show with your on little twist i love it. Yugi can be a pain. whats next. Updare soon.
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  • From ANON - Drachenaugen on October 20, 2006
    My, my...interesting. I must say, no wonder Seto left Yugi, I've always pictured him as 'too' good a guy, to the point where it's a bother *sighs* And Kaiba-sweetie? Por Seto -_-

    Well, let's see where this 'alter parody version' of your's goes, I'll be waiting for next chapter so keep the good stuff coming ;3
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  • From ANON - LadyVirgo91656 on October 20, 2006
    Interesting to say the least. I would like to see where you are going with this. So update soon.
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