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By : LeilaLogan
  • From dragonlady222 on February 18, 2007
    Great chapter. They made a pretty good team too bad he got them like that. Yami got his powers back without giving up his soul. I think he will be okay because he got them back out of love for others something he did not have before.
    I know he'll get Aknukanon and kill him or weaken him enough to get the others out. I hope he doesn't kill him yet because Yuro still needs to be punished.
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  • From ANON - lokivsanubis on February 18, 2007
    Hi hi, its me again and i must say these cliffy's are making it hard to get by. I wanna know what happens so hurry and review.
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  • From DragonSpeaker on February 18, 2007
    Wooo hoo! Thats so cool ( guess i was partially right with the love/power thing) anywho, great chapter! and i hope you feel better!

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  • From catti on February 17, 2007
    I will not blame your sickness for leaving this in a cliff hanger position...now I have to sit and wait for another F%$$king week...DAMN your sickness for doing this...I think that you owe us...maybe a mid-week update would save you from bitter reviews...yes thats it...so a Wednesday update yes...thats it...Wednesday....no Saturday...just Wednesday...EVIL CLIFF HANGERS...EVIL...catti
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  • From Keara on February 17, 2007

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  • From ANON - Koorime13 on February 11, 2007
    Ello!!!!! ^.^ Nyuu
    Gomen nasai Gomen nasai Gomen nasai!!!!!
    It's been so long, ne!!! I've missed u and ur story soo much and a lot has happened... took me about a day to catch up^^ Been so busy lately.... and still am ^_^; but managed to quickly read da past 5(?) chapters I've missed to review. I still love your work!! And u're still a meany to end it in a cliffy xDD. Ma ikka, that should be sum punishment, ne.
    Take lots of care!!! And keep up da kreat work!!!

    Ja ne
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  • From DragonSpeaker on February 11, 2007
    Thanks for the update! It was another awsome chapter! It almost sounds to me like Yami could use his love for his sister as a power or something (Harry Potter like i know, but thats just the first thought that came to my head) oh well, my nerdy self is getting a bit out of line. Can't wait for the next update!
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  • From wintermoon on February 11, 2007
    Well, I can't say that I'm really surprised...but I would have loved to have been proven wrong! Oh well, guess I'll just have to wait till next Saturday to see what happens. But, as promised, I have made all the necessary preparations and begun my pilgrimage to the Moondalian shrine.

    (comes to cliff)

    damn...this wasn't on the map...
    hmmm...what to do now...

    Hey, it's only fair after all the cliffies you've left us with!!

    Though I could plan my journey a bit better if you'd tell how many chaps are left. Also note: the better the ending the better the offering will be:)




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  • From sinistersinner on February 11, 2007
    Malik rocks in this story!!! Eh...just had to say that to start off. So only three more chapters? I feel late and really bad for not reviewing the other chapters. However, I will be the good little reviewer you so like as of last chapter.

    Anyways, my ninja monkeys will not be leaving the battle anytime soon.. Even though he didn't really 'hurt' Kumiko, he probably scared her for life. Poor thing, I'll be sure to give them all cookies later. They always heal all my worries. ^-^ The only way he can save himself is by giving Kumiko back to Yami, leaving Yami and Yuugi to their happy sex filled lives, and giving Anesta a room filled with very shiney and pointy objects. Only then will I THINK about it. By the way, I'm very glad Yuugi got his powers back. He just seems better when he is his full angel self. Jou, of course, is very protective. It's funny how it annoys Yami.I was also wondering, will Bakura be in the story? It has nothing to do with whether I read the story or not, I just love Bakura!

    Now, my ninja need their leader. I await the next chapter. I, of course, enjoyed this one as much as the others. Until next time...-walks off mumbling evil things about what she'll do to Aky when you're done with him before running back- Oh! And thank you so very much for it not being Anzu. I hate her like the plague. -shivers and rushes off-

    -Transversal (Anesta K.)
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  • From dragonlady222 on February 11, 2007
    Great chapter. I do hope Yami will be careful but I'm not counting on it. No since Kumiko is there and caged.
    I think if he goes after Yuugi or Kumiko Yami will find his inner strength and whip his butt.

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  • From catti on February 10, 2007
    Everybody who loves cliffies, give us a whoop, whoop....listens...nothing but crickets chirping...hmmmm...well that tells ya how we feel about cliffies....laughs hysterically....WHAT...It was just a guess...geeze rip my head off and feed it to Bakura why dont ya...smirks....on second thought why dont you give him my whole
    body...YUMMY!!!!....catti
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  • From sinistersinner on February 08, 2007
    -sighs- I finally got smyself to make an account on this thing so I can review stories. Anyways, I love this story until the bitter end! It's origional and well written. It keeps me on my toes and dying while I wait the six days for the next chapter. Now that I'm able to, I'll be a good little reader and review every chapter. Altough, I don't know how many are left, but better late then never I suppose.

    Now, as for this chapter in particular, I'm sending my whole army of banana eating ninja monkeys after that stupid deamon!! Believe me, they're strong. As a wild guess, the three other Angels are Jou, Ryou, and Malik. Or, if it's strange, Mokuba. I wouldn't doubt that at all though. I agree with previous reviews, PLEASE! ANYONE BUT ANZU!! -begs-

    Now...to command my army...-trails off-

    -Transversal (Anesta k.)
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  • From BrokenAngel on February 06, 2007
    Awww, so cute. i loved it! update soon.
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  • From wintermoon on February 04, 2007
    Well, you've requested reviews so here you go: great story-love it-can't wait to see what happens next!! Poor Kumiko....I hope they save her next chap (though you'll probably have them formulate a plan, start on the journey, and then leave us a cliffhanger so that we can spend yet another six days wondering if they actually do save her and exactly how they do it-because of course, something will happen to mess up the plan). Or, I could be wrong. I guess I'll read it and find out. Also, I'm with Catti-please not Anzu!!

    As for my lack of reviews...in my defense, my computer crashed big time and it's taken over a month to get everything working properly again. Now that I'm up and running, I'll try to be a faithfull little reviewer...(begins preparations to worship at moondalian's shrine)...maybe that's why you update every saturday... :)
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  • From DragonSpeaker on February 04, 2007
    Very good! Cant wait for the next update!

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