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By : LeilaLogan
  • From Keara on February 03, 2007
    mm well since Jou hasnt made an appearance in the entire story I'm guessing hes one of them Ryou might be another and the last one either Malik or for an extreamly looooooooooooooooooong shot Seto Kaiba or Mokuba one or the other so got any personal preferences in your punishment cause I can do either one you know*she brings out two doors* the left one is for quick and painless the other slow and painful choice is yours now*brings out every single last one of the covenent armada as well as an army the size of an entire planet of sentinals and unleashes them on Aknukanon.

    Now if you excuse me I gotta demon to slaughter so update asap keep up the superb job and update asap gtg now JA NE


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  • From tavia454 on February 03, 2007
    See told ya I'd review for both. Please continue?
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  • From dragonlady222 on February 03, 2007
    Good chapter. I hope Kumiko will be okay. At least one of the newcomers has to be Jou. Where would Yuugi be without his friends.
    With all the extra power they should be able to save her now. They can all watch Yoru go to hell.
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  • From catti on February 03, 2007
    OH GOD NOT ANZU!!!!!Please nooooooo!!!!!!catti
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  • From dragonlady222 on January 28, 2007
    Good chapter. I figure Yuugi will win because Yami loves him more than he hates Yoru, (that's a lot of love)!
    Now it is clear Aknunkanon just wants Yami for his soul's power not for himself. He doesn't care that yami was his son before. I do love the way he was thinking of new and better ways to torture Yoru, got to give him that.
    Kimiko's subtle insult to Anzu was just great! She really is that dumb.
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  • From DragonSpeaker on January 27, 2007
    soo cool! I can't wait for the next update!
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  • From Keara on January 27, 2007
    I had a feeling it was going to be something along those lines though thats usually the main reason why demon overlords want Yami its because his powers are far superior to that of anyone else's it was the same way in Game of Masques Yugi was a Incubi and Yami was the son of a ruthless business man but unbeknownts to all but the father and the demon overlord within Yami lied a power so great even the demon overlord was impressed.

    Its the same thing now Yami's the son of the demon lord so he holds great power at his disposal and now he wants it back naturally what evil demon WOULDNT want all that power back under his wings again not too suprising there but Yugi dosnt care one bit he loves Yami regardless why else would he give up all that he had for him.

    And for the most part Moon your safe for now but keep that will handy you might need it now would prefer a quick death by fierce but painless poison or something like it or would you want to die slowly just let me know k (jk btw) well gtg now keep up the superb job and update asap JA NE
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  • From catti on January 27, 2007
    laughs...you are so getting into these cliffies...then making you adoring fans, who by the way always review, wait a painstakingly (is that a word?) six days to find out what your twisted little mind has in store for us....evil, evil, evil....catti (dont worry about the reviews, people on this site have a tendency not to review or not to keep up reviewing...go with the hits not the reviews)
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  • From tavia454 on January 27, 2007
    Wow, nice cliffie! I really do love this story. I've been reviewing it on ff.net. Perhaps, I should be reviewing here too? Anyways, please continue, I like your work.
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  • From Keara on January 22, 2007
    YAY I knew once Yami explained he would understand I mean trust was always a big thing with him so for Yugi to show that much devotion to Yami even at the cost of giving up all that he knew all that he was is a true mark of deep heart felt emotion no lies in that kind of thinking so HAH take that Yoru and you to you bastard of a demon lord you lose now no matter what you do there is NO FUCKING WAY you can beat this duo since Yugit just bestowed onto Yami the great gift anyone can be given the innocence of an angel thats bigger then anything *does a victory dance/taunt at Yoru and Pharaoh fucktard*

    Ok I'm done and do update asap and I got my eye on you Moondalian one false move and its to the scariest most deadliest places I can find for example*has moondalian suspended on a bridge over the midguard valley holding a large serpant*

    Other then that keep up the great work and update asap JA NE
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  • From dragonlady222 on January 21, 2007
    Great chapter. I'm glad they more than made up and made Kumiko happy. Yuro will not be happy though. I wonder what the demon will do?
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  • From catti on January 20, 2007
    Finally!!!....SEX!!!!..geeze took you long enough...making us wait 9 Saturdays for a little bit of lemony goodness...laughs....it was totally worth the wait...I like the whole ex-angel story...I was wondering how you would get Yami to have and think having sex with an angel would work...Cardnal sin just popped into my head...laughs....catti (im glad im not the only one who cant stand that prove your age thing, god people why bother about 90% of the writers are under age...geeze)
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  • From Keara on January 15, 2007
    I think the reason why Yugi didnt tell Yami the truth is probably because he was forbidden to in wich I hope Yami understands Yugi would not have withheld such an important detail if he could but knowing "heaven" I'm sure they didnt and dont worry moondalian I'm just going to send you through another trip through slipspace*turns her back to normal*but as a human oh *she hands moondalian sun block 2000k* your going to need that trust me slipspace can get pretty dam hot going at the speed you normally go in it well keep up the great work and update asap oh and by all means enjoy the ride JA NE
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  • From ANON - Dark.Daisuke on January 14, 2007
    Things are starting to make sense!!! I had entertained the idea of Yuugi as an angel, but decided it wasn't going to be that way. You fooled me! I hope this won't hurt the relationship they have going. And what about the devil? Can't wait for more!!!!
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  • From ANON - dragonlady222 on January 14, 2007
    So she's not as oblivious to what is going on around her. I wonder if she realises how much Yami takes to protect her or any part of it.
    Yoru is a truly despicable person. Using his own daughter like that.
    I hope Anzu gets whats coming to her too.
    Yoru is going to cross Aknukadin one time too may and find himself in a living hell.
    I hope yami forgives Yuugi for what he was keeping secret and understands why.
    Good chapter.
    As cliffhangers go this was not too bad.
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