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Reviews for Hold On

By : LeilaLogan
  • From ANON - catti-dono on January 13, 2007
    and that baka catti kind of let it slip in the first chapter review....laughs....oops....my bad....have I told you lately that I love this story?...catti
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  • From ANON - Mystic Dodo on January 13, 2007
    I did review before but just as i clicked the review button to send it the internet died on me.. so i dunno if you did or didn't get it. Anyway, glad Yuugi finally ound out about Yuugi and you KNOW that i adore the fic. YOU HAVE TO UPDATE MORE THAN ONCE A WEEK GODDAMN IT!! It's not FAIR on anyone... *pouts* Speak to ya later
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  • From ANON - kkk12 on January 07, 2007
    hey i'm back sorry it toke so long...~^_^~ Yami is soo catching the love virus ! Come on you two, amit that you two are in love with each other ! Also, damn you F~~~ing Yoru ! i hope you know that if you kill Kumiko you might hurt him but it well bring him closer to Yugi ? And what does that demon lord want with Yami any way ? He has to spill it some day....
    Please write more chaps ! its geting better every word now !
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  • From ANON - Red Draogn of Egypt on January 07, 2007
    *she straps kitty Moondalian to a space ship of the UNSC and has it constanlty go into slipstream with enough speed behind it to have moondalians fur clining to the ship*

    Ok now for Yoru and that dumbass demon *she has Kelly go after Yoru with the same brutality she would against the covenent whil Master Chief goes to the demon world and with the same effetiency they showed already he lays to waste every last one of the demons and kills the demon lord with his own bare hands*

    Nicely done soldier you may go*they bothe return to halo*

    Well you know the routine Moondalian update asap or I'll send the entire spartans on a man hunt for u gtg now JA NE
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  • From ANON - catti-dono on January 06, 2007
    YAH...Im the man!!!errr woman...the plot thickens....*insert evil laugh*....now involving innocent little girls....naughty, naughty....catti
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  • From ANON - dragonlady222 on January 06, 2007
    Good chapter. Now Yoru knows that Yuugi is special. I wonder what he's going to do and how he's going to involve Kumiko? He's really a pain in the rear and needs to suffer.
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 03, 2007
    argh i just got into that...keep posting, its good
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  • From ANON - Koorime13 on January 01, 2007
    *Throws shuriken and kunais at author* >_
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  • From ANON - Red Dragon of Egypt on December 31, 2006
    Oh dont worry Moondalian I wont hurt you except for this *she turns Moondalian into a tiny kitten in a massive techonologically advanced very well done roller coaster and has her ride it a good twenty times( pretty much take Mantu Dueling Dragons and the Haulk double their thrill and then combined then then you got my roller coaster)

    I think that should do for now and the rest is all on Anzu's Yoru's and The ex pharaoh turned demon( I hate saying his name) *she opens a portal and brings out Master Chief of Halo* ok soldier you have your orders I want these three squealing like the pigs they are understand.

    MC: Ma'am Yes Ma'am

    Get to it then *with fervor he does just that breaking and killing Anzu Yoru and aknumkanon several times

    Well that should do for now keep up the superb job and update asap Moond gtg now JA NE
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  • From ANON - Malin on December 31, 2006
    o..kej... maybe that was not the best thing to set the house on fire but what the hell, it can only be better.
    i hope you going to add a lemon later, then it will be more fun to read.
    // update son please!
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  • From ANON - lokvsanubis on December 30, 2006
    i believe i'm new to this story as a reviewer. But all around this story is great. I want to read more and looking past the setting of a house on fire, and killing Yami's mother i can't wait to see more. UPdate soon or i will possitively die from waiting!! :}
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  • From ANON - Vampire_Aireanna on December 30, 2006
    Well that was a great twist. I think you should have it that Yami has yuugi come to stay for a bit and your gets mad and tries to beat Yami but Yuugi steps in. it's just an idea. Well i can't wait to see what happens next. Your doing a great job and i really enjoy reading this story.
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  • From ANON - catti-dono on December 30, 2006
    Naughty...burning Yuugi's house down....Now he will have to live with Yami...*laughs*....OOOO....catti
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  • From ANON - dragonlady222 on December 30, 2006
    Great chapter.
    Yami is so cute when he's flirting. At least, no one blew up the lab during their practical.
    Poor Yuugi what is going to do now? Move in with Yami and Yoru?
    Probably, then he can protect Yami.
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  • From ANON - malin on December 29, 2006
    great story, just keep going. it is very interessting.
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