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  • From ANON - Vampire_Aireanna on December 29, 2006
    I really enjoy reading your story you really need to write more cause i'm dying to see what else happens.
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  • From ANON - dragonlady222 on December 23, 2006
    Great chapter. Yami is starting to open up for Yuugi, that's good.
    I bet Kumiko is realising more than Yami thinks.
    Poor guys haven't even kissed yet and the rumors are flying.
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  • From ANON - catti-dono on December 23, 2006
    *Skips into the review room*....Ah...no Yuugi topping?...sighs, okay...I will abid by your wishes...*wipes tear away*....Man that is so unfair!!..Im now legal in my country, damn....love this story by the way...it has a nice flow...poor Yami always getting the bad fathers and dead mothers, whats up with that? and Yuugi with no parents...Geeze...Did you say Anzu bashing?...Oh goody....*runs to closet, flings open door, and grabs a metal baseball bat*....LET THE BASHING BEGIN!!!....catti...(moony, have a great christmas and new year)(you are updating on new years right?, right?)
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  • From ANON - Koorime13 on December 20, 2006
    Yami-kun kawaii, ne!! Gods, I had to laugh so hard thinking back at the times when I got tipsy -^__^- I too laughed at almost everything around me... hahahaha!! Hihihihi!! *Sigh* Such guud times!! Just a few more days to that dreadfull day called x-mas -_- and then... Booze!! Gonna get tipsy again woohoot... you too?
    And that part too where Kumiko-chan thought Yami wuz gonna fall for the whole pouting thing going on^^ I already imagined her laughing evily ^__^ This wuz absolutely the best chapter so far^^ Hope it gets better with Yuugi knowing wut's going on. Keep up da gr8 work!! Ja ne
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  • From ANON - Red Dragon of Egypt on December 17, 2006
    *she pulls on a rope and brings out all her heavy arsenal*ok folks we got the rocket launchers on the left gernade launches on the right and thn we got your usual proximity mines remote mines timed mine and regular gernades oh and my two personal favs the Super Dragon and the Nbombs observe *she tosses an Nbomb at Yoru and creates a massive black dome distorying his nerve system and making it very hard for him to see.*

    Now comes the super dragon*she first launches a few gernade rounds then switches over to rapid fire then she dives into her other arsenal and surounds him on all sides by mines then backs away and launches the rocket and gernade launches sending back explosions from the mines.L*

    Well that was fun care to join me Moondalian and dont worry about him dieing like I said with my immortal gems in him we can kill as much as we want and he still will come back anyways ready and waiting if not willingly for more death and pain woot.

    Well keep up the great work and update asap gtg now JA NE
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  • From ANON - dragonlady222 on December 17, 2006
    Maybe she'll see a little of what Yami is trying to protect her from now. Yuro so needs to die expecially since he's trheatening Yami's reason for living and staying sane.
    The demon is probably laughing his ass off at Yoru. He's probably angry too because he is not succeeding in what he's supposed to do.
    I'm sure Yuugi will be there to help them.
    Great chapter.
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  • From ANON - catti-dono on December 16, 2006
    Poor Yami...not use to stories where he gets the crap beaten out of him and takes it...sheesh....talking about out of character...Seems like its role reversal...Yuugi being the stronger....hmmmm...interesting....might like that flavor....makes you wonder whose the seme and whose the uke in this story...*laughs brazenly*...Geeze whats with the club allowing you to buy alcohol at age 16 and where were they when I was 16...damn...always having to have an older sibling buy booze was expensive....*love your world*...cant wait for next week...three good things...lemon ending of one story, christmas and an update on this story...*pumps fist into air*....catti...PS another thing that I really like about your stories...hardly any Anzu...*smirks*....catti
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  • From ANON - Mystic Dodo on December 16, 2006
    GUESS WHO AGAIN!! I didn't know you posted this on here too!!

    Well, you know what i think about this fic! Ja ne xxx
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  • From ANON - Red Dragon of Egypt on December 11, 2006
    Hmm that wasnt so bad and dont worry I wont kill you *points to the bound Anzu and Yoru* just them *she grabs a rocket launcher and auto targets Anzu* say hello to my fiery friends Anzu *she launches one and and then another at Yoru to begin a new session of endless painful torture* nd dont worry they bothe have immortal gems in them so I can blast them to kingdome come from now till doomsday and they will stil unfortunately come back *holds out an AR assult rifle*care to join me I'm sure you can use the practice for the next time you want to bash a character.


    Well keep up the superb job and update asap and if that bastard touches my Yami again hes getting a heavy dose of Nbomb exlposions of that I can promise well JA NE
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  • From ANON - kkk12 on December 10, 2006
    Poor Yami, his father is sooo crule !!!! I wonder what Yami and Yugi r going 2 do..... oh and kep on writing !!! still watching and reading !!!
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  • From ANON - Koorime13 on December 09, 2006
    O_O... okaaay... So maybe I didn't notice the smilies on their hands? ^^; *shrugs* Did I mention I haven't seen every episode yet? So I might have missed that part^^ Only got interested in the series during the last season and watched a few episodes here and there during that whole Marik/Malik thing going on. Anywhoz... been a fun chappy again. So emotional and all *sniffs* You should let Mi-chan get beat more often^^; Hahahahahahhahahaha I like to "revel in his pain" (grammar?) Mom says I'm such a sadist :P Yeah, so... lookin forward to da next chappy!!!
    Ja ne

    (ps: In da fist review for Don't let go I put Jonen... I meant to put Shonen ^^;)
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  • From ANON - dragonlady222 on December 09, 2006
    Poor Yami, his life is hell. Kumiko is very oblivious to all that is going on. Of course, Yami is going to great lengths to keep her from knowing.
    I'm really shocked that Yoru let him out of the house but I'm glad he did.
    He is so going to pay for everything he's done.
    Good chapter.
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  • From ANON - Sansi on December 09, 2006
    I can't believe those two bastards. I bet Yami will return the "favour" someday!
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  • From ANON - catti-dono on December 09, 2006
    Giggles..cant help it, I like to guess..Poor Yami getting the crap beat out of him, bad Moond, bad...doing that to poor Yami...*Reaches for the calendar, damn six more days until an update...BUMMER...(by the way, I believe I am going to enjoy this story very much) catti
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  • From ANON - Red Dragon of Egypt on December 05, 2006
    *keeps an automatic gun fixxed on Anzu*now I have a new target to play with along with Yuro oh*she attaches a rocket to Yuro's back nd launches it sending him back to her owner*there you go hes all yours and dont worry the gems still inside so when hes blasted to smitherense at your feet he'll come back so when your not using Anzu let me know I'll set the gun off huh poor things but I'm a tad confused as to what Yugi means by breaking these rules but knowing you I'll find out soon enough.

    Aqua: of course oh and when you do have the go ahead to hurt Anzu mind letting me have a go first

    Of course Aqua after all its been days since you feasted on a human so shes' perfect (you may have heard of Aqua from ZephyrGem24 in her various YGO stories here as well as FF.net and he like Yami is very much so in love with Yugi and will tear to shreds any who hurt him literally well keep up the superb job and update asap gtg now JA NE)
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