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By : LeilaLogan
  • From ANON - dragonlady222 on December 03, 2006
    Poor Yami, I wonder why they treat him so bad. Except of course for evil Tea. Now Yuugi is going to suffer.
    Poor boy, he's either an angel come to help Yami or a dead soul come back for a special mission to help Yami. Great chapter.
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  • From ANON - dragonlady222 on December 03, 2006
    I love this story. I hope he can hold his own with his sister's help.
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  • From ANON - catti-dono on December 02, 2006
    AHHH...Yuugi as an angel...ooopppss...was I suppose to type that? catti
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  • From ANON - kkk12 on December 02, 2006
    that good so far. please write more chaps. i wonder what that demon wants with Yami and what is Yuugi's secret?
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  • From ANON - Koorime13 on December 02, 2006
    O_O where's the alibi? You skipped years T_T I was so lookin' forward to those years... hahaha I'ts still a nice chappy ^__^ So kawaii!!! And from the fix I've read almost everyone hates Anzu O_o Why? I find her completely normal -next to her friendship-obsession thing- and a guud friend. Oh well... that's just my oppinion. Can't wait for the next chappy though!! Keep up the gr8 work.
    Ja ne
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  • From ANON - Koorime13 on December 01, 2006
    Another splendid fic^^ I'm so curious now as to what'll happen next. And I love the way you make your readers feel like you know everything that's going to happen and that everything is pretty much logic!! I mean, what'll the alibi be? I'd have no idea as to how Yoru'll get his butt out of the gutter he's in. And that makes it so interesting ^_~ Gah! better stop my ramblings^^ Keep up the great work!!!
    Ja ne
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  • From ANON - Sansi on November 26, 2006
    Everyone who hates the guy raises their hand *thousands of people just do that* Though so!

    Well, I'm really curious about your new story. Love Yami's sister. I always saw him as the big brother type!
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  • From ANON - Red Dragon of Egypt on November 26, 2006
    Seriously at this rate Yami's mothers going to get tired of working for you if you keep poisoning or snapping her neck or in other words killing her off even a cartoon character can only take so much and as for Yoru I'll take care of that oh and dont worry*shows her a dark gem*this is an immortal gem anytime i use it on someone they come back renewed and refreshed for more slaughter but they still feel the pain of having been killed previously.



    *She walks over to Yoru and shoves said gem into his forhead*now let the fun begin tch you thought that demon was scary wait till you meet Aqua

    Yoru: Whoes Aqua

    HES aqua*points behind her to a tall dragon with cerise like eyes and sharp and deadly demonice features* hes Yami's half brother(not for real hes an OC from Zephyrs making)ok Aqua you know what to do have fun

    Aqua: Oh I will *he pounces on Yoru who starts screaming only to have it cut off as Aqua bites down on his neck drinking his blood but not to the point of killing him he then waits tillt he blood is restored then he grabs Yoru with his tail and sends him flying into the air to land on his claw with said claws imbeded into his back.

    Finally after getting bored with the same thing Aqua rips a whole through Yoru and devours his heart then the rest of him then leaves his corpse to wrot if not his soul since its stuck there till he gets revived.*

    Beautiful work Aqua Yoru messed with the wrong crowd if you ask me tch demons after all do come in various shapes sizes ferocity and power. well keep up the superb job Moondalian and update asap or else and no cliffies like in Don't Let Go if you cliffie your going to get it.
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  • From ANON - catti-dono on November 25, 2006
    Okay...you are sooo evil...laughs...poor Yami...but its interesting since stories always center around Yuugi being the abused and mistroddened soul...but you made it a twist and had it as Yami...It will be fun to see how you work this out...*sits looking at the calendar...KAMI is it Saturday yet?*...catti
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