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Reviews for Hold On

By : LeilaLogan
  • From ANON - Sarah Costa on March 11, 2007
    Wow!!!
    Great Story and a great work.
    *claps*
    I love it. Yugi and Yami are so cute together. ^____^
    Keep up the great work.
    Bye
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  • From wintermoon on March 10, 2007
    After being gone on vacation, I have come back and immediately read (and now am reviewing) the last chap...yay!! Finally, Yoru is dead!! He soooo deserved to die...though I was kinda hoping for a good lemon at the end. I'm glad to see that you've started to post the sequel-which I'll be sure to read after I submit this....

    ....and suddenly, there appeared before me a doorway bathed in light-so bright that it was as if looking upon the sun itself. I could not see beyond the doorway-in truth I could barely see anything-but I trusted in my goddess, said a prayer and stepped through. Though my eyes were closed, I could feel the rays of light warm my skin-the touch of my goddess assuring me that all was well... When I opened my eyes, I was on the other side, and the doorway behind me slowly dimmed, fading away. I looked around in awe: I was in a place of true beauty. A picturesque place where a creek carried the clearest of water downstream, a place of beautiful shade trees and singing birds. In front of me was a path leading up the hillside and I followed it, my footsteps becoming quicker until I was almost running...and then I was there. The sacred Shrine of Moondalian-the place to where the faithful make their pilgrimage and offer up their thanks and gratitude for all that she has given to us. The one place that we feel closest to her. I approached the shrine and began walking up the steps, awed by all that I saw. The shrine was made of white marble, streaked with black. Along the walkway were statues of Yami and Yuugi in various poses...I continued walking and finally arrived at the alter. I knelt before it and offered all that I could to my goddess, all that I-one small follower-had to give: my thanks and adoration-my appreciation for all the Yami and Yugi goodness that she had given to me and for all that she had yet to give. My heart was overflowing with emotion and I offered it up to her, hoping that it would be enough...

    Well, there you go-now I just need to wait and see what the goddess will choose to do...and maybe you'll call back those evil men that keep watching me... :)
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  • From ANON - lokivsanubis on March 06, 2007
    I'm so happy and yes bring on the Cliffy's I'll be back and waiting for the sequel. HAHAHAHA!! Wait the sequel is the week away. CRIES SEE YOU THEN.
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  • From tavia454 on March 03, 2007
    Yep, it's me again. Your gonna get sick of hearing from me eventually. But I guess that I'll tell you again that I am so sad to see this story go! Wah! Thank god your doing a sequal! Well, I'm off to do what ever it is that I do when I'm not on here looking for stories. Later
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  • From dragonlady222 on March 03, 2007
    Great ending. Most of the loose ends are wrapped up and now Yami is rich on his own.
    I'm glad Yoru is dead. He deserved that and so much more.
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  • From ANON - catti on March 03, 2007
    Okay that was a lame ending...so now I am so waiting for a sequel to make up for it..we want more lemons...laughs...so will sit here patiently waiting for the sequel and more lemons...catti
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  • From ANON - lokivsanubis on February 25, 2007
    Bring on the sequel!! I applaud you for this great fanfic and for the end of cliffies for now but i will await their return. I really like this story. And wanna see it continue. it really is great. I'll be here next weekend to read the end. Bye for now.
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  • From DragonSpeaker on February 25, 2007
    Nice update! I'm not sure on any ideas for the (possibility) of the next one, mainly cause i've also been caught in a writers block. Oh well. Anywho, can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From dragonlady222 on February 25, 2007
    Good chapter. Yeah, I know how he dies doesn't mean I don't want to see it though.
    I can't wait for the epilogue.
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  • From wintermoon on February 24, 2007
    LOOK!! LOOK!! I reviewed the minute after I read it!! *is on hands and knees and looks up with eyes full of sorrow* Please do not abandon or try to harm me!! *looks around to see if anyone is trying to carry out the "dark plans" mentioned by the sacred goddess* I hereby vow to redeem myself by reading the epilogue and reviewing the minute after I read it....I will pray that it is enough to appease you!

    Ooooh! Having your insides eat you alive-what a painful way to go! I almost wish that Yami had let it happen, *almost* (he certainly deserved it). Though it was nice that his human side won out....either way he died, and that's good enough for me!!

    Writer's block?!? WTF? You're not allowed to have writer's block!! What am I going to do??? NOOOOO!

    I will have faith in the goddess, I will have faith in the goddess, I will have faith in the goddess.... *sniffs* Please don't fail me oh great one....my Saturdays will never be the same without you...
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  • From tavia454 on February 24, 2007
    No,no,no! No writers block! You can't do that! I love your writing too much for you to get writers block! And your right, it was a cliffie, but it still wasn't as bad as the one that you did 2 chappies before. I will not allow you to have writers block. *runs to corner of room crying loudly* Okay, I'm better now, Please continue?!
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  • From ANON - catti-dono on February 24, 2007
    Cries...only one more chapter?....sobs....writers block sucks....have had it and the only thing that worked for me was to actually step away from writing for a while...do something else completely....I know some people actually go and write for different anime...JadeHeart flips back and forth from Gravitation and FAKE....catti
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  • From wintermoon on February 22, 2007
    I'm sorry to hear that you're not feeling well-hope you get to feeling better soon! I know, I'm a little late-I actually read this chap on Sunday and am just now getting around to reviewing it, but better late than never (it's been a pretty hectic week). Again-well done! Regarding the journey to the shrine: I think that eventually a magical doorway will appear that will lead directly to the shrine (so that I'm not wandering around aimlessly) at which time I will use it and upon arrival, will proceed to worship accordingly. Until then, I'll just look forward to the next chap!
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  • From tavia454 on February 22, 2007
    Even though you didn't leave this one at a cliffie, you are still the queen of them! I am loving this story! Please continue?
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  • From ANON - Arghyarr on February 21, 2007
    very nice, good work :D
    keep it up
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