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Reviews for He Among Us Without Sin

By : hatochiisai
  • From ANON - Jeda on April 25, 2007
    o man that chapter was good. i really want 2 kno y ryou won't talk about his heritage. y does he hate it so much.it's not that bad. HE SHOULD EMBRACE IT!! elves r cool. well at least I think elves r cool. mayb it's cuz he's been told since he was little that elves were bad pero he shouldn't think that jus becuz they told him that. and wat did he mean when he was talking 2 marik about choosing between tha thing he luvs and the one he luvs. now i kno he's gonna stay wit marik no matter wat. he better. *cracks knuckles* and u kno until i almost got to the end of the chappie, i wanted 2 rip off pegesus' heart pero now, i sorta lik him. sorta. i can't wait till the next chappie when he and dartz interview yami. IT'S GONNA B SOO FUNNY!!! omg i'm already jittering wit excitement!!

    Much Luv From NYC~.~.~.~.~.~
    lil mIss drAMa QUEEN
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  • From ANON - lokivsanubis on April 17, 2007
    (Mob slowly puts down pitchforks and flaming torches and their leader steps forward) Ah, Yamis alive... We can all go home now. (Pitchforks disappear and calm loving fans return).

    I'm so happy Yami's not dead. I mean i would have died if he was dead, he's so funny. I'm also loved how you has Ashmose stare at his pillow and seemingly 'talking' to himself in front of Dartz and Peg"ass"us. Man he's such an up tight jerk. Anyway... The Marik and Ryou shopping was cute. Hope you update soon, but should anyone else have a sudden slip (torches ready the be lit).

    Update soon!
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  • From ANON - Jeda on April 17, 2007
    YAY yami's back!!!!....well sorta.now all ahmose has to do is 2 get yami a new body and BAM he's back. AND MARIK WENT SHOPPING!!! this is a happy day and i seriously don't feel like myself rite now. i hate the flu. the vatican suck ass and i luv the way yami can still b a pain in the ass even after he's dead. any way i don't have the energy 2 leave a long review cuz i really don't feel good, but i jus wanted to say that i really liked this chappie and that i can't wait 4 tha next one.

    Much Luv From NYC~.~.~.~.~.~.~
    lil mIss drAMa QUEEN
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  • From ANON - Chibigeemu on April 17, 2007
    It's nice to see Ahmose make a fool out of himself once in awhile. XD Marik and Ryou are so cute too!
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  • From blacktail on April 17, 2007
    yaey! yami is back (jumping up and down).
    not nice to run after someone els. bad yami
    good work
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  • From yunasgrace on April 17, 2007
    i LOVED chapter 11. im soo glad that this chapter was soo funny coz lately there has been quite a lot of doom and gloom ^^
    i cant wait to see what else Yami will do now that hes a ghost... Ahmose really will get sent to the room with soft walls in the end, will he also get one of the special jackets that do up at the back? XDDD
    i think out of courtesy Pegasus should let Ahmose keep the pillow coz it really looks like hes become attatched to it XDD

    cant wait for another chapter, love all your stories soo keep on writing them ^^ (thats an order XD)
    yunasgrace
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  • From ANON - lonelydove on April 16, 2007
    Just finished reading the first couple of chapters. Really love it so far.
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  • From setoswifey on April 16, 2007
    That was awesome. Ahmose talking to Yami reminded me of the movie "drop dead Fred" I dont know if that's where you got the idea from but it was great!
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  • From ANON - The Dark Angel on April 16, 2007
    thank u for not completely killing Yami... i was seriously about to cry... and tell Ahmose i said "Welcome to the Dark Side!!!" which the Dark Side being insanity... i have paperz to PROVE im crazy... seriously... not kidding... *manical laughter*... i should really write that book report now... i dont want to though... T-T will u do it for me? Mythology by Edith Hamilton?
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  • From setoswifey on April 09, 2007
    You killed off yami?! *throws plastic sunkist bottle* This is not cool!!!! Please tell me he's in a coma or something...great chapter otherwise.
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  • From ANON - miku on April 09, 2007
    *cries* Yami can't die! Noooo! What a mean, mean point to leave the story at. But you write it so well. I look forward to reading the next chapter. ^_^ xxx
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  • From ANON - The Dark Angel on April 09, 2007
    ... NOOOOOOOO!!!!!! HOW COULD U?????? WHAT DID YAMI EVER DO TO YOU????? plz tell me he returnz from the dead!! if he dont, Hato, as much as i heart u, i may be forced to kill u... T-T ima cry forever now... first Ahmose almost diez, now Yami really diez... T-T noooooooooo...

    The Dark Angel
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  • From ANON - Jeda on April 09, 2007
    OMG!! u r so evil. i jus finished reading full moon and i was all happy cuz no one died. NOW I GO BACK TO THIS AND GUESS WAT....SOME1 EFFING DIES!!! YAMI OF ALL PEOPLE!! DOSHITE!!! why do u do this. now needed my kleenex for this one RIGHT WHEN I WAS ABOUT TO PUT EM AWAY!! man that was so sad. i wasn't expecting that. did i ever tell u that seto was a bubble blowing bastard? well, if i didn't tell u be4, now u know. he's a bubble blowing bastard (try saying that 10 tymes really fast).an i don't think i like the people in tha vatican either. no not at all.now who's gonna be the comic relief/nymphomaniac in the story? o man i can't wait 2 c wat you're gonna do in tha next chappie. cuz i jus KNOW ahomose is not about 2 let his man go like that. all hell's breaking loose next chappie i jus know it.

    Much Luv From NYC~.~.~.~.~.~
    lil mIss drAMa QUEEN
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  • From ANON - devil child on April 08, 2007
    NOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!! You killed Yami!!!!! *cries*
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  • From ANON - Zaile on April 08, 2007
    I'm gonna CRRRYYYYYYYY!!!!
    YAMI!!!!!! how sad *sniff* I can't wait for next chapter please don't let things finnish like this!
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