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Reviews for He Among Us Without Sin

By : hatochiisai
  • From ANON - lokivsanubis on March 11, 2007
    I wanna hear more about the dress thing, sounds like a fun story. The love potion thing was very very interesting. But i wanna see Malik not trying to kill people or being an ass whole again. And i really want to see some Ryou on Marik action like soon. I'll be so happy when you review again and stop with the teasing and give us a kiss between Ryou and Marik already so Ryou can run around screaming he's sinning and needs to be punished. UPdate soon!
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  • From loveofgleek on March 07, 2007
    I love this fic, i'm surprised you haven't got more reviews, because your writings great and so imaginative. Anyway, love the little bit with Yami and Ahmose, that was so funny, please update soon, can't wait to read it.
    Rae
    -X-
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  • From ANON - Blackdragon on March 06, 2007
    Yeay!! He did not die!! He did not die!! (jumping up and down)
    He he, Yami is sneaky, love potion... Good Work!
    update soon!
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  • From ANON - Chibigeemu on March 05, 2007
    I wanna see Yami do his little trick, that's gotta be one hell of a joke! Yay they all met!
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  • From ANON - meijimistress on March 05, 2007
    oh i am so sorry to not review as often as i should. i really do love all of your stories and i will review from now on after every update just please dont kill anyone off. i love them all. your stories are always the best.
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  • From setoswifey on March 05, 2007
    Is Wicca a real religion? If it is then what is it exactly?
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  • From ANON - Drago on March 05, 2007
    Great chapter! I can't wait to see what part Seto plays in this story! Although I bet he ends up being a bad guy.... Oh well....
    Keep up the good work!
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  • From setoswifey on February 27, 2007
    Please dont kill Ahmose!!! This is sooooo addicting I could kill myself! (not literally). I cant wait to read more of this. It's about time they crossed paths.
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  • From ANON - punk_llama on February 27, 2007
    Finally! everyone meets! and you cant kill Ahmose.... youd have like, a billion crazy people on your ass for it.
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  • From ANON - Sairene on February 27, 2007
    I don't thin you will kill off your creation just for reviews. So far the story is interesting. I like the way you are blending chacaters together and throwing out the rules on religon with Ahmose and Yami. I kinda like Malik being an ass. It amuses me to a point. I am waiting for him to get his ass beat.
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  • From ANON - TheBlackCatsLuck on February 27, 2007
    Love the story. One thing that amuses me is the conversation between you two as you write left in the story. I'm guessing it was written via roleplay or something. XD Since the random OOC comments are littered through the story. Why is that?
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  • From ANON - meijimistress on February 26, 2007
    oh my god please update. you cant kill anyone off pleeeeeease. i love all of your stories. please update soon.
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  • From ANON - chibigeemu on February 26, 2007
    O_O That was the worse cliffhanger! He can't die ;-; So I leave a review! Damn update soon, that chapter was so good.
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  • From ANON - Drago on February 26, 2007
    Ahhh! No! Don't kill Him!!!! Please I love this story I reviewed! Please keep writing!
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  • From ANON - devil child on February 26, 2007
    'Explain! What is love!?' he peeped in command. 'I demand to know!', that was my favorite line.Also DON'T LET AHMOSE DIE!!!! Great story, please update soon.
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