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Reviews for He Among Us Without Sin

By : hatochiisai
  • From ANON - Anon on December 28, 2008
    I love your story! You're a great writer. Umm...I was just wondering...I don't mean to bug you about it...but I was wondering if you're ever going to continue your story Slave of Destructon? It's really great, so I hope you do.
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  • From YamiKuro on December 16, 2008
    Holy shizzle biscuits!

    I liked this chapter....alot.

    Love,
    Kuro

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  • From Roxas13 on December 06, 2008
    Seto is too much of a bastard... I hope Yami fucks him 10ways to nothing with a mile long jaggered edge rusty old sword
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  • From MishikoShinsei on December 05, 2008
    Being a die hard prideshipper, it's VERY hard to watch any version of Seto treating any version of Yami so badly. T_T

    That said, please be sure to punish that fucker for every vicious thing that he's done to Yami and Ahmose. In all honesty, I don't even care if you torture him, but I would REALLY like for him to die. Seriously.

    Thanks again for continuing this story.

    'Ko
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  • From ANON - lilly on December 04, 2008
    POOR YAMI AND AHMOSE! CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER! PLEASE MAKE MORE CHAPTERS!!!!!
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  • From hsosborne on October 22, 2008
    haha, bloated, somehow I don't think I've ever seen him described in that way before now.
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  • From ANON - The Dark Angel on October 19, 2008
    YAY YOURE NOT DEAD!!! i was beginning to worry...
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  • From Mystralwind on October 18, 2008
    That was an endearing tale. lol Ok, so now have you decided what you will do with Malik since he was to originally be with Baku?? LOL

    Gotta do something with the guy, and Ry needs to be a human again. Surly someone in Vatican city can cancel a curse. That is a priest spell.

    Although, he's tougher this way. lolz

    Oi, Yami and the 'all powerful sorcerer' are in so much hot water, and Seto, such anevil bastard. lolz
    I can't believe you're at 28 chapters already.

    See ya on DA
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  • From smalvina on October 11, 2008
    poor Mikado.
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  • From YamiKuro on August 16, 2008
    0.o

    Holy.

    Crap.

    Baskets.

    Poor Ahmose...and Yami....SO SAD!!
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  • From kenshinjunkie03 on August 10, 2008
    wow, you guys get pretty darn dark there, don't you? and the 14 lashes are so from ahmose inarus, isn't it? well, all i can do is look foward to the happy ending, so i shall torture myself with the angst you guys pile on^_^V lol
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  • From zombiebait86 on August 06, 2008
    man sucks to be Yami and Ahmose!....**looks for first aid kit and the rape hot line number**
    J-chan
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  • From Calcifer on August 03, 2008
    Poor Yami and Ahmose... *sniffle* Seto's such a jerk.

    I noticed you couldn't help giving Ahmose his 14 lashes even though this world is AU. Creative, because it fits.

    Keep up the good work!

    ~Angel
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  • From ANON - The Dark Angel on August 02, 2008
    *knawing on the monitor, trying to get to Seto* I... shall... kill... YOU!!!
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  • From smalvina on August 01, 2008
    how can you be so cruel? Poor Ahmose. STOP HURTING HIM!!!!!!! please
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