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Reviews for He Among Us Without Sin

By : hatochiisai
  • From ANON - The Dark Angel on July 13, 2008
    im baaaaaaaaaaaaack!!! my computer broke, but now i have a new one!! ^-^ yay!! and that meanz i get to read your excellent storiez again! even more yay!!! this chapter was excellent as alwayz and i cant wait for the next installment!! so hurry with it!!
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  • From ANON - malik-kitty on July 05, 2008
    Noo. When are you going to update. I hate falling in love with a fic and then reaching the end going 'OMG what are they going to do?!!' and then find out that it isn't the end of the fic. Please update soon, I'm going to dye of boredom with nothing to read and waiting for this fic to update. I tend to read way too fast and for long hours. I love this story so far and can't wait. Although I wish you had more with Malik in this, he seems like the odd one left out with no lover, plus he's always bored and we have to give him something to do. In the mean time, while I wait for you to update, I'm going to read other stories of yours. You might want to consider putting COMPLETE on the stories that are finished because alot of people I know won't read a story unless it is complete, because it could be discontinued while they are reading it. UPDATE SOON PLEASE!!!!!
    ~Kitty
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  • From kenshinjunkie03 on June 26, 2008
    hey! glad to see y'all again^^ and glad for the bakura/mikado at the end^^ but have you guys ever think about ahmose/ryou? you've paired ryou up with damn near everyone but joey and triston (can we say ew?) so why not ahmose?

    but, back to this story, i really love the bakura/mikado at the end, and i hope everything gets cleared up in the end^^
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  • From smalvina on June 22, 2008
    what a hot ending
    I loved it
    I loved it
    I loved it
    can't wait for more
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  • From YamiKuro on June 19, 2008
    YAY! MORE! I hope someone turns Ryou back soon!

    Kuro
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  • From ANON - katie on June 18, 2008
    vampire sex is so hot. this story is the best please update more i need more. you people are gods of fanfiction.
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  • From Mystralwind on June 16, 2008
    You updated and i almost missed it!!! NOOO

    It was a great chapter. What happens with Marik?? Will he come looking for Ryou? Slaps self* duh, of course he will.

    Who will you set up with Malik/? Otigi?? When??? Malik gets no air time. lol Maybe you couyld 3 way him with one of the other couples,. lol

    Oh well, I seriously look forward to reading updates on this fic. Great job.
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  • From Calcifer on June 15, 2008
    It's nice that Mikado knows his brother is alive... but Ryou's stuck in a stable and Marik is lonely! XD He must be wondering, 'Did Ryou drown in the bath?' Lol. I look forward to your next chapter!

    Keep up the good work!

    ~Angel
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  • From zombiebait86 on June 15, 2008
    WOOT! new chapter ^-^
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  • From MishikoShinsei on June 14, 2008
    I'm still absolutely enamored with this story.

    *kneels down. presents symbolic bowl.*

    Please ma'am. I want some more.

    'Ko
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  • From ANON - Dairyqueen on May 21, 2008
    Okay, I really like this fanfict, it's great and I love your imagination. However I got two things that you two should know

    1. The bible says "Thou shall not give into false testimony against thy neighbor" This simply means that it's a sin to lie against your neighbor or accuse him/her of something you know he didn't do. Lying in itself if not a sin, lying about someone else is though (Also lying for the sake of cruelty is bad also"

    2. Please for the love of god spell check your fanfiction. You two keep spelling 'believe' as 'beleive', and not just once but like four times. That's the only grammatical error I see in your writing though, keep up the good work.
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  • From MishikoShinsei on May 18, 2008
    MUCH happier with this chapter! (Not that the last chapter was poorly written, but it was quite distressing!)

    And you're REALLY making me want to hate Seto, and considering that he's my fave YGO character (pimps her own stories), that's saying A LOT!

    Major kudos to you for the character of Ahmose. He's definately one of my fave OC characters of all time, in any fandom. Thank you for sharing him!

    As usual, I gleefully await the next chapter.

    'Ko
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  • From Mystralwind on May 16, 2008
    Wow, you update?? No one else on this site seems to.. hmmm.. TYVM> It was an excellent chapter. I think your story line is very original and for outside characters they are actually nice to have around. Not at all annoying Marysue's.

    Great piece of work and a real enjoyable piece to read.
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  • From YamiKuro on May 13, 2008
    YAY! Yami got Ahmose back :) I'm glad. And Mer-Ryou is the cutest |D

    I loved it!

    I LOOK FORWARD TO MORE :)

    Kuro
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  • From ANON - kenshinjunkie03 on May 12, 2008
    I don't know how to really start this review, so I guess by saying I've spent the better part of April and May re-reading most of you guys' stories, and you guys got me hooked to Bakura/Mikado^^ That is now my fav otp of yugioh^^ And I love this story a lot, though I feel sorry for Yami and Ahmose;_; I hope everything works out ok in the future, and that Ryou would except his elvin half. And that Seto is stopped^_^V
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