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Reviews for He Among Us Without Sin

By : hatochiisai
  • From arianauchiha23451 on August 15, 2013
    that was very awesome..... I love all your stories that you have written so far... now I am on to read the sequel.... keep up the good work
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  • From nejihater5000 on November 10, 2010
    This story is awesome!!! I love the work you did with this!!!

    By the way, if you like this type of stuff, check out my story, "Castlevania: Dracula's Laments." It's nowhere NEAR as good as this, but still....
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 14, 2010
    Ummm... Needs more Bakura.
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  • From ANON - hitachiintwinlover on October 11, 2010
    ssssssssssoooooooo...can i rate this story a 5 like 50000000000 times?? HAHAHA! the plotline was awesomely original, and the characters were consistant despite the length of the story. there was true character growth and a dose of reality in the amount of time passage, not one of those "and then a miracle occurred and three weeks later, he completed a task that most complete in three years!" now that this story is over i'm not sure what i'm going to do!! AHAHAHA!!! definitely one i looked forward to reading every time!! so the "cast the first stone" is a sequel to this?? because what is going to happen to those in the crystal??? or will they just remain there??? ANYHOO!! ABSOLUTELY LOVE!! thanks so much!!
    ~hitachiintwinlover
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  • From ANON - Velvetina on March 26, 2010
    Ahhh it's been such a long time since I was on AFF and even longer since I've read anything in this fandom but I'm so glad that I came back and stumbled onto your fics again. It's been far too long. I've re-read all of your fics now, apart from the Jungle series which I am saving, and have been having a wonderful time. There's a couple I'm hoping for a sequel one day but I guess I'll have to wait and see.

    I'm enjoying this one so very much, I love the dynamic between Bakura and Mikado that you write and it's always amusing to watch them bicker. I do worry about what Bakura's sire is going to do next but I do know it's going to be kickass. Poor Ryou, he has so many issues and I am assuming that being a werewolf as well now won't help - though maybe it will. Who knows, I guess that is a wait and see sort of thing. I actually feel pretty sorry for Malik who is the loner of this piece so far but I am glad that going back to his village has helped him. I bet Ahmose is going to do something pretty seriously awesome soon and then Yami will screw him silly no matter where they are.

    Also, I know it was a while ago in the fic but that Dartz torture/flirting made me die with laughter. He is a sexy sexy man!
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  • From ANON - Kiki on February 28, 2010
    WOW!!! Thanks for the fast update! I missed Seto from the chapter I can't wait to know what happend with him! Maybe his back to normal? I would miss the evil Kaiba! :D And what about Ahmose? What his up to? Conbtinue!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Yami Bakura Itemri on February 26, 2010
    Hot damn!!! And you cut it off RIGHT there. >.< EVIL!!!
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  • From subaru1999 on February 12, 2010
    Thank you for another wonderful chapter! Poor Ryou is now a werewolf... So does that mean he is not any part human or is it like 1/4 wolf, 1/4 human, and 1/2 elf? I cant wait to see what will happen next!
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  • From xsmallwondersx on February 02, 2010
    >.> So while randomly washing dishes at work I came upon a quandary, what would happen if your characters from this fic meet the characters from the wild?

    J-chan
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  • From MishikoShinsei on January 28, 2010
    Though I love Seto as a character normally, I originally worried that I would hate what you've done with him. Instead, I've found that you have created a truely evil being in his form and I love you for that!

    Ooooo! This is SO yummy! I can't WAIT to see what happens next!!

    'Ko
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  • From ANON - Kiki on January 27, 2010
    Yessssssssssssss! A new chapter! Seto was right, Ahmose was brilliant! And what happend with Seto??? I can't wait for the next chappie! Update soon pls!
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  • From ANON - dark_faery_azaen on December 27, 2009
    Hi. Um, I have read your stories for years, and absolutely love your writing. My favorite pairing is Ahmose/Mikado/Otogi. It give me tummy flutters!! Is there any way you could write a lemon with the three of them sometime? I know I'm reviewing on He Among Us Without Sin, but that was the story I was reading when my wish popped back into my head. It's something I've wanted to read for a long time. So, if there's a way you could, in one of your stories, or even in a stand-alone, which would be like quadruply awesome, I would really appreciate it. Thanks, Happy Holidays, and thanks for all your great writing.
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  • From on November 19, 2009
    From what I read of the first chapter, this is very good and not at all what I was expecting. The only problem I noticed was that Author's Notes were not always marked as separate from the dialogue of the actual story. If I had the attention span, I would probably read more of it. Keep up the good work, and stay literate :)
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  • From subaru1999 on November 14, 2009
    great chapter and amazing story!! i cant wait to see what will happen to ryou!
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  • From ANON - Kiki on November 12, 2009

    Yessss! A new chapter!!! Yami and Ahmose were so cute in this... :) Please next time update sooner! I missed ypour story so much!
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