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Reviews for Warrior of Shadows

By : DragonSpeaker
  • From LunariusKoneko91 on April 28, 2010
    Wow, I like this!! Maybe in one chapter you could show off The Warrior's fighting ablities against an OC or another monster that comes after him...if you want contact me @ coldfire669@gmail.com and we can talk...
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  • From ANON - RayeMoon on December 11, 2007
    Well, I must admit this is...strange, but a most interesting take on the 'yami/hikari' concept. Atemu a duel monster. Did I miss something in reading it, or are the wings just something you came up with, not pertinent to the plot? I still like it. Yami's description sounds wicked hot. Poor Yugi! How could his friends abandon him? Surely they wouldn't actually! Please continue, I want to know all about what you're going to do with a Duel Monster Yami, a lonely and suicidal Yugi, and whatever else you've got cooking up! Jaa.
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  • From MangaForever on October 28, 2007
    me interested
    wen u gonna update
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  • From Naye025 on August 09, 2007
    You've captured me!! And now I want more... plz!! Update soon!!!!!!!! I wish AFF woulda kept the 'favorite fics' thingy so I can add this!!! Oh well, I look forward for the next chapter!


    Ja!
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  • From Sacuna on August 02, 2007
    I really enjoy this story and can't wait for the next chapter. ^_^
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  • From Kerstin on July 12, 2007
    Hey! (No I'm not my sister ;-) I'm writing as Sinful Mercury) I like your story (also I think that the sucidal Yugi was kind of gross cause normally Yugi is so vivid or shy but never this negativ. He is more positive and loves all kinds of life (his own included:) and people.
    I have sooooooooooo many ideas in my head (and mostly I do nothing with them or I help other people (e.g. my sis) by being their creative brain *grin*. I think I could have some Ideas for you too!
    Your warrior is the "namless pharaoh" right? Why not traveling to Egypt? Trying to protect a secret the pharaoh has taken with him into his tomp (maybe the reason why he came back as a card -->to protect the light that shields dark powers (Yugi :) or to protect the part of his soul/ soul mate? or there is an ancient weepon in the tomp . . .?
    If you don't like that than maybe they travel to Egypt because the testament of Yugis grandpa was left there to be given to Yugi when he lives up to the age of . . . (there could be a mystery or an inheritance for him or something like his ancestors are relatet to Egypt nobels . . . something that will change his live and enlarge his need of his companion :)
    Maybe in a museum there will be a exhibition of the things found in Atemus tomp? Memorys? Fears? Pain by seeing things of his past live?
    Yugi could be beaten (know that's not nice but if it helps the story)because he is different from normal so his dark card has to save him. (Yugi could feel protected, get angry or he could fear his new found friend)
    Or Yugi have plans for expansion (biger shop . . .) so he will have much work and stress Atemu could help him (relax?)
    Yugi could come compftable with Atemu and than there will be the others (for holidays? finished studying) so will there be the need of Yugi to have Atemu around? Will the others accept how Yugi has changed?
    That have been some ideas if the right one wasn't in: I'm sorry but I have more:-)
    I hope you will sent the next chapter soon!

    best wishes
    Sinful Mercury


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  • From ANON - SabbieChan on July 07, 2007
    MORE MORE MUST HAVE MORE XD i love this fic can't wait till the next chappie is up
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  • From blacktail on July 03, 2007
    a really great story, it really is. is the romance going to start soon, hope so.
    anyway hope you update soon.
    see you
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  • From dragonlady222 on July 01, 2007
    Good chapter. I was hoping it was him. This is great. I'm glad he finally spoke to Yuugi and told him his name.
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  • From Shuman on July 01, 2007
    Thanx for the update!!!!
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  • From tavia454 on June 30, 2007
    Good chapter! Writer's block is a bitch! I hate it. I could give you one of the plot bunnies that Moondalian saved for me, if you want him?! His name is Hentai. It seems that ever since she saved him, she's had one to many lemons floating around in her head. We'll pass him on to you now. He's driving us nuts!

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    *shhhh. he's sleeping for the moment. Be prepared for all hell breaking loose when he wakes! L8tr!
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  • From ANON - tinkletimekelly on June 30, 2007
    This is good,so far. Please do continue.
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  • From nerosiriusrowan on June 30, 2007
    Luv where the story is going!!!
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  • From ANON - razzle on June 30, 2007
    this so rocks it really good yami as duel monsterand note no guy rite ff cose i didnt think they did?
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  • From ANON - Sethos on June 30, 2007
    This is really good so far,I can't wait to see what happens next! ^^
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