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Reviews for 101 Puppies

By : Hideki LaShae
  • From melodyz07 on July 05, 2007
    Yay! what good story! I like it very much. I have discovered and read the entire 33 chapters in only 2 days. I love the evolution of the relation between Seto and Jou. Can't wait to see what will happen next to our favourite couple. The idea of the potion is really great^^. And By the way, I loved the half-lemon that happened in a couple of chapters ago. It was hot. And poor Jou! he hurts himself because of that. Really cute^^
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  • From ANON - lokivsanubis on July 03, 2007
    I love it!! update again soon!
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  • From ANON - Draggy2 on June 28, 2007
    Chapter2

    Okay.... Jou as a random person invades seto's office but he's pretty okay with it and is chummy enough with jou to ask his prescription even though they aren't even technically "friends"? AND got all threatening about jou's safety. Like, possessive (this really led me to believe there was more than what was happening going on between the two).

    And is it me or are seto's dreams leaning dangerously towards itemizing jou ... not loving him. Like the orange thing, that was awesome, why nodody's done that... I don't know. But then the collar and barking.... unhealthy dreams (which could be just him being cocky superior but he's... not. He's not in your story so it's sorta creepy.)

    I like the breakfast, that was cute.



    Chapter three

    Why is his name kakashi... randomly japanese. An old man no less so yes that's he's a perfectly english speaking japanese. (my beef is the character name)

    Anyway, I hope the information Jou is imparting in seto's dreams are not accurate and is just his imagination.

    There seems to be no development between the characters since the first chapter in which you neglected important information to understand there was character development. Ie, it's just them bouncing off of one another (if they are noth together) without linking any actions or self's.
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  • From ANON - Draggy2 on June 28, 2007
    Just read chapter one: I like it but....

    You set up the chapter without telling us who this "he" is being obviously vague. I assume then that by the telling of the drink strategy this character is random and inadvertently sets up our couple. (I first assumed it was one of the two... but then the drink strategy blew that assumption.)

    Then you have Jou randomly at Seto's house waiting on him in good terms (yes, obviously not much strife between the two disregarding pet names). And I do say randomly, no hints are left for the reader to follow, no logic is explained in random character thought. They are just..... together getting along.... randomly.

    I really enjoyed this line: “I told you… I was wearing them, and I fell down the stairs…” Really well done.

    The tea part was really obvious... but WHY jou wants seto to love him to this desperate bid (in which he believes seto already cares somewhat for him... I suppose because Jou's allowed in his presence right?)

    I did not like how Jou knew what his prescription was off the top of his head ("Oh, that prescription I know I'm not gonna be able to use, yeah I memorized it" though this is because I wear glasses and don't recall my prescription... and I actually get new pairs so it was self-based and based on the fact that Jou isn't the most ..... number retaining character)


    So I like it,but a few things I wanted to point out.
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  • From ANON - broken_dreams on June 26, 2007
    eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee tjhis is getting so cute!!!!

    poor jou lol but that was really funny
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  • From ANON - Daragon on June 24, 2007
    FIANNLY! *passes out* It took me three days to fianlly get threw all the chapters! Hell- I even sped-read two of them! I love this story, or else I wouldn't have bothered with it, and its ADDICTING! So please post soon, because I want to see what Seto does to tell his Puppy that he loves him! *sighs contently*

    Update soon, please!
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  • From ANON - DaUglyChibi on June 24, 2007
    Again I must complement you on you simply brilliant work. Every chapter is full of personality, originality, and style, every paragraph taking me on a new adventure. I always await updates on your work here, with every group of chapters you post my heart swells. I can't help but thank you for your contribution to the world. You've given out a valuable gift for the world to share, and what an amazing gift it is. I absolutely adore your writing, as always.~
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  • From ArtemisSensei on June 23, 2007
    Weeee!!! Uke Seto! Uke Seto! I love uke Seto! There's just not enough of uke Seto with Seme Joey out there. But obviously, like me, you realize Joey is capable of being one sexy ass seme when people let him. =)

    Anywho's, I love this story. I'm so happy when you update. ^_^
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  • From ANON - digiditz on June 20, 2007
    Damn you! Write more! I demand it!

    If you can't tell I really enjoyed your story. ;P
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  • From ANON - lokivsanubis on June 10, 2007
    i love it update soon.
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  • From ANON - Jeda on June 03, 2007
    This story is really good. i like how u put the dreams and everything so they seem more like dreams and less like some mediocre dream that states the obvious. i also like the fact that u don't make the characters too OOC. you're really good at this and i really enjoyed this story. i'm not really one to read a seto/jou fic. i'm more of a ryou/bakura person, but this story is an exception. u actually got me pulled in2 the story. i really like it. how many tymes have i said that? lol. i can't wait till the next chappie.

    Much Luv From Nyc~.~.~.~.~.~


    lil mIss drAMa QUEEN






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  • From ANON - ele on June 02, 2007
    this rocks! i love it! one question though- do you plan on putting a lemon in here? 'cause that would be hot! but even without one, this fic is brilliant. :D
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  • From sweetciel on May 29, 2007
    Who would have thought that it would take kaiba this long to recognize what his heart it telling him? I rather like is long journey into self discovery. Excellent fic ^-^
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  • From ANON - DaUglyChibi on May 28, 2007
    Wow, this story is amazing! If it was a book I'd use the expression 'I couldn't put it down!' I love your writing style, and plan on reading more of your work! ((Tomorrow. It's about 3 in the morning here.)) I laughed, cried, and completely enjoyed this work of art. Simply wonderful, I don't know what else to say. It was spectacular, I hope you update soon. ~
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  • From sweetciel on May 14, 2007
    That cinderella story was just AMAZING! I LOVED your rendition of it. All the other chapters were awesome too! You are a great writer ^_^ More please
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