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Reviews for The Night Innocence Died

By : Hideki LaShae
  • From Calcifer on April 18, 2008
    Lol. Talk about awkward... Nothing like walking in on two apparently straight guys who apparently hate each other having sex...

    Keep up the good work!

    ~Angel
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  • From ANON - broken_dreams on June 27, 2007
    OMG THAT ROCKED *laughs* it was so cute

    i like how they weere there u entered the story quit well in the points of few and u showed u had a fairly good matrial of reserch good 4 u

    but next time i sujest that u talk about 3D degree asult or even soem thift 2

    also when ur talking bout body parts if u want the doctors 2 sound perfetional u might wnat 2 look up a few words that describe humen body parts
    like glutiesmaxiumus and for his iner walls u could use

    "he has an batiral infection on the in walls of his glutiesmaxiumus on the nerve endings" oO yeah that might be more doctorish

    and when the detective ta;ks bnout his report u can say

    "you will need to write out ur witness reprt the time and excat location u need 2 sign it and u may have 2 come into cort"

    also when u describe a dream i might wnat to have the meaning behind it as a follow up

    but you have a great story and can't wait 2 read more of it keep up the fantastic work
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  • From dragonlady222 on May 01, 2007
    Good chapter. They finally are really together and telling the world or at least his friends.
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  • From dragonlady222 on May 01, 2007
    Good chapter. I'm glad that the truth is finally coming out for Jounouchi's sake as well as Seto's.
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  • From dragonlady222 on May 01, 2007
    Good chapter. At last the truth is coming out. I'm glad for Jounouchi's sake that it is.
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  • From dragonlady222 on May 01, 2007
    Poor Jounouchi he is confused. I hope this will clear this up a little for him. Good chapter.
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  • From ANON - Karas Kraehe on April 11, 2007
    gasp! is there more?
    that cant be the end yet, it just got even better than it already was!
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  • From dragonlady222 on April 09, 2007
    Can't wait for the next update. It's a great story.
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  • From dragonlady222 on April 09, 2007
    Good chapter. I wish he could realise that Seto was not one of his attackers. Why would Seto mug him for twenty bucks. He obviously doesn't need it and then why would he help him? He's not thinking.
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  • From dragonlady222 on April 09, 2007
    Good chapter. I'm glad Seto is taking care of Katsuya. I wonder if Seto will cinvince himself he is not gay. Somehow I don't think so.
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  • From ANON - Tk on March 25, 2007
    WOW! This story is incredible, please update soon! Poor Jou! *huggles him* I felt so bad for him. I really want to know the whole story about the rape thing so please update soon!
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  • From ANON - tellnoone_noonetells on March 24, 2007
    I...whao....just.....wow....i cant think of a word for it.... ur writing ability is just amaing, your plot is well planned, and i can see it happening with seto and jou with there personalties. and u keep then IC so well that im almost speechless..... Gods, please tell me u up date often!!!!!!!!! U know what, u can just call me ur new number one mindless drone!! Please update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From dragonlady222 on March 24, 2007
    Good chapter. I hope what the doctor said convinced him that Seto didn't rape him. I'm glad they were all caught and confessed.
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  • From dragonlady222 on March 21, 2007
    Poor Joey he thinks Kaiba was one of them and not his saviour. Good chapter.
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  • From cinque on March 18, 2007
    omg, that was soooo good. i really loved it.
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