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Reviews for Some Kind of Monster

By : KimyouTeki
  • From Rosebud on March 22, 2007
    YAY, for long reviews...because this one is probably going to be longer then the last lol!
    And YAY for Seto!!! Because, well...because next to Bakura he's my favorite Yu-gi-oh character! So, on with the review...

    The first thing that came to mind for this chapter was, WOW, it rocked!!! I felt like I'd gone on a rollercoaster; one minute I was laughing and the next I was shocked.

    At the beginning I really felt sorry for Bakura; even though it was cute too, how distraught he was about Ryou not giving him enough love. And seriously, I almost fell out of my chair laughing when I read the whole "mushi mushi" thing. God, I'm still cracking up about it while I'm trying to type.

    5 minutes and quite a few laughs’ later...ok, I’m alright now ^^;

    o.0 Anyway!!! I LOVE how you portrayed Yami; I can just picture him saying that stuff. Though; I actually think that all your characters have an intriguing amount of depth to them, and it really makes the story more palpable.

    But... then...suddenly, the story got all dark and serious -which is ok because I absolutely LOVE dark and serious fan fiction- and I was freaking out when Bakura passed/blacked out! And I was like OMG! Bad, Bad Ryou for hurting my precious Bakura...uh, I mean for hurting your Yami! I think Kura might be getting in over his head. Just exactly what the hell was Ryou doing all that time he was gone? And I was so sure you were going to have him throttle that doctor!

    All I can say in regards to Jou, is that he is really fucked up! But I like that you give your characters darker personalities. BTW… was that Seto at the end of the chapter...me thinks it was!!! XD

    Looking forward to reading the next chapter and writing another long review!

    Oh, yeah...I just went to your homepage and I realized that your the Author of 'Baku, Ra, to Ringu: Uncut' -I'm such a dork for not realizing it sooner- ^^;
    Anyway, I love that story and I'm still trying to read through it. So many chapters, but its so good too!

    ~Later
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  • From Jenivi7 on March 21, 2007
    so good! creepy but in a good way :p i love the way Ryou shifts so suddenly from violence to sweetness and i can't wait to see what happens with Jouno, if he ever acts on his obsession with Seto (mmmm Seto) and exactly what kind of impression he makes being slightly psychotic and all! yay psychotic Jou! what a fun way to warp the character :D
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  • From dragonlady222 on March 21, 2007
    Bakura is really sacrificing himself to help Ryou's pain. I wonder how long he will take it. Good chapter.
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  • From dragonlady222 on March 21, 2007
    Good chapter. I'm glad you posted this here too.
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  • From dragonlady222 on March 21, 2007
    Good chapter. I wonder what happened to Ryou. I know I read this on ff.net?
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  • From Rosebud on March 21, 2007
    LOL, I couldn't help but laugh at some of the similarities there were in the story to things I actually do. Like when Jou went back to turn up the stereo so he could hear it in the bathroom… I’m the same way; I always play my music way too loud. You can even hear it all the way down stairs...it’s a miracle that the neighbor’s don't complain. ^^; And I love to listen to Metallica when I can't sleep, so yeah, I had to laugh about that as well.

    So, it was too bad that Kaiba Corp wasn't hiring... I want to see Seto lol. But are you planning on introducing him anytime soon??? *crosses fingers* And Bakura, he sure loves pain, what a sadist, but that’s one of the reasons why I love his character! ;p You know, I feel that your doing an awesome job at keeping him character, even though its not exactly the cliché role that most people give him. It does well for the story and I love the dark undertones that you got going. I also agree with what you said at the beginning, Ryou does appeal to me as one of those silent yet deadly types, who keeps a lot to himself…giving a bright smile to the world, but then thinking something else completely different on the inside.

    o.0 I think this review is getting to be awfully long, so I better warp things up
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  • From honZeldaFitz on March 20, 2007
    Another great chapter. I like that you're taking your time with this, giving us little bits at a time to flesh out the characters. This chapter left me even more curious as to where this is going. It seems that both Ryou and Jou are coming apart. Thanks for updating so quickly. I enjoyed it.
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  • From Rosebud on March 20, 2007
    Interesting chapter, I liked it a lot.
    Can't wait to read more!
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  • From honZeldaFitz on March 19, 2007
    Definitely post more. I wonder what's up with Ryou. You had me until the end. That's fitting that Bakura is really the one in control. I love these two.
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  • From Jenivi7 on March 19, 2007
    ooo creepy Ryou is awesome :D i definately think you should post more, i'm really curious to see where this one goes.
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  • From Rosebud on March 19, 2007
    Wow. This is extremely good. I really enjoyed reading the roles in reverse. It's not often that Ryou is portrayed as the violent one. Psychotic? Yes. Just out right violent? No. But as a result I find in very palpable and am highly anticipating reading the next chapter. Nice job and Update soon please!

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