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By : KimyouTeki
  • From ANON - Anon on December 14, 2009
    I'm glad my review got you back into updating on this site. Thanks for the adknowlegement. I really enjoyed the Ryou/Jono scene. Nicely detail and sexy as heck. I hope you put more scenes like that into this story. Keep on writing ;) I added this story under recoomended reading under my profile too :)
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  • From Maxi1234 on December 12, 2009
    You know, this story really is awesome. I love a dominant Ryou, and Bakura still thinks he can beat Ryou if he wants too… oh, Bakura. And the bit about Malik and Mariku was adorable. I hope they come back to the story soon. Though, entering Sakuma in there kinda threw me off. Hm… I actually hope for thiefshipping in the end, but… whatever you planned is probably good. Oh wel,, continue this soon, please!
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 12, 2009
    I'm so glad you're updating this wonderful story again. I left a more detailed review on your ff.net version, under JiangShi. Keep on writing!
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  • From hsosborne on August 23, 2007
    Omg the getting knocked over by the car and then bitch slapping the girl was hilarius. Just the situation would be kinda funny, then you add in who it is.
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  • From Rosebud on August 12, 2007
    YAY! Awesome chapter! It's been a while ne? Lucky me, I just logged on and your story was the first one on the page!!!
    Poor Bakura, masturbating in bed with Ryou right there lol. I'm sure it's going to be a while before they hook up...your still planning for them to get together, right? I can't wait to see what happens with Jou and Ryou! Hehe, PLEASE update this soon. I think of this story from time to time and I'm glad that you're still working on it! Keep up the good work!
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  • From hsosborne on May 23, 2007
    OMG this is great, I can't wait til the next chapter! When you do add to this, do you think that you could send me an email with the web address to let me know? the email is PotionsPet@tidni.com I also plan on reading Baku, Ra, to Ringu: UnCut on this site as well so could you do it for that one too? *chibi-puppy eyes*
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  • From Jenivi7 on April 02, 2007
    I'm still reading, really! and still loving the story :D Poor doctor! *wonders if Joey really has a yami or if that's just his psychosis going to a new level* *gets a slight brain cramp cause it could go either way (a testiment to your good writing)* *scolds self for trying to guess the story and not being patient and waiting for an update*

    though i do wonder how the dead doctor is gonna affect the joey/seto dynamic :p

    hehe and even if it doesn't seem it, I am really interested in the ryou/bakura part too! Seto's just my favorite character in case you couldn't tell. *glomps teh Seto*

    Whee! can't wait until the next update :D I wants to see what happens!
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  • From Rosebud on March 26, 2007
    Wow so Jou has a Yami, how awesome is that! I don't think I've ever read anything like this before and to tell you the truth, I like it a lot! Great Job, you do good to keep the story interesting! I hope that Jou didn't kill the doctor though. I mean she seems like a bitch, but OMG...him killing someone will change everything. o.0 what if he goes after Seto!!! ;o;

    Run away Seto...

    Damn, Ryou's a bit of a slut now, isn't he? But wtf is he doing wandering the streets looking for sex when he has Bakura at home!!! What's wrong with you Ryou????

    Well, I hope that you can get the next chapter up soon, I'm highly anticipating what's going to happen next! Keep up the good work!

    ~Later
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  • From dragonlady222 on March 25, 2007
    Good chapter. Too bad Ryou doesn't realise everything he needs and wants is at home.
    I hope He didn't actually kill her, although if she betrayed their confindentiality she probably deserves it.
    Kaiba may not have really known anything and jou thought he did because of his own guilt. I wonder how his Yami will get him out of this.
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  • From Rosebud on March 24, 2007
    Wow, I think Bakura's getting a little tired of his Hikari being a pain in the ass; especially with that last line. I've noticed the subtle changes in him since the first chapter and even though his desire for pain in continuous, his tolerance for it seems to be slipping. I wonder how much more Bakura's going to be able to take, before he hits Ryou back. It'll be interesting to see.

    I really felt bad for Bakura too. Here he had a chance to Fuck two hot Egyptians and he turned them down. Ah, but on the same note I guess it's cute -how loyal he is to Ryou! Grrr...Ryou give Bakura some love...please!!!! He needs it!

    As far as Jou goes, lets me tell you I was freaking out when Mokuba invited him over to the mansion. Though I was glad that nothing bad happened...Well except for Seto being a cold hearted bastard, but there's nothing new there.

    I see Jou taking on more serious undertones now. It's really hard to peg what he'll do next because he seems to be all over the place mentally; but it makes for more surprises.

    I wonder what he's going to do to the good Doctor????

    Anyway, keep it up and I'm looking forward to reading more!

    ~Later

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  • From dragonlady222 on March 24, 2007
    Poor Jouno, I wonder if the doctor did betray him or if it is just his overactive imagination.
    I feel bad for Bakura, no one should have to take that kind of abuse. I hope he can shake some sense into Ryou soon.
    Good chapter.
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  • From dragonlady222 on March 24, 2007
    Good chapter. Jouno is going to get revenge on Kaiba somehow. I'm glad Ryou let Bakura out. This is really good.
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  • From dragonlady222 on March 24, 2007
    I hope someone can help Jouno and Ryou. Poor Bakura needs to quit playing this game before it turns deadly.
    Good chapter.
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  • From KrystalChronicals on March 24, 2007
    Cant wait for more ^.^
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  • From Rosebud on March 23, 2007
    Sorry I didn't review sooner, but I've got a horrible cold and every time I sit down in front of the computer, I feel like my skull is going to crack open... Anyway, despite the pain my need to read this story got the best of me and here I am, ready to review LOL!

    First off, when I read that Marik and Malik were going to be in the story I nearly jumped out of my seat! I love the Egyptian psycho's and I can't wait to see what happens between them and Bakura!!!! Oooooh, maybe Ryou will get jealous...or maybe not. He doesn't seem to want a relationship with Bakura, at least not a sexual one... I do hope that changes, though.

    So, wow...Jou's a genius then!!!! o.0 And now he's on some insane quest to take down Kaiba Corp? Talk about doing a one-eight personality wise. But you know, I'm not sure I can see him going through with it, at least not all the way. He's too obsessed with the CEO to destroy him...I think???

    Anyway, Great chapter and as always, I'm looking forward to reading more.

    BTW, I think that it's an awesome idea if/when you ever get around to writing that story about Ryou. I know I would love to know all the stuff that he did, and what made him change so drastically.

    Until next time!
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