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By : undercoverme
  • From ANON - 1enchantedgirl on June 29, 2014
    I think u did a great job with this. I do wish u had taken a little more time with the ending. I'm very curious as to the new relationships with joey rebecca and becca and how that will affect the wheeler company, as well as how rebecca adjusts to her new body and her mental age. I look forward to reading more of your work. I am a huge fan of your beta's and of course maggiemay. I also came across a storey written by your neice...what a talented gene pool!I know u wrote this a million years ago but I wanted to let u know that your work is still being read.
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 09, 2011
    Ahh oh man oh man oh man. I read Jou Cool a few days back and saw this story on your profile and decided for reading it later. Only I completely forgot about it. Luckily I found it again.
    There's so much awesomeness in it, but I surely don't have to tell ya, probably hundreds of reviewers already did this. So I'll content myself in commenting just one very simple scene: VR Kaiba's clothes changes.
    Okay, I smiled at the boxers; laughed at the dog suit... but the Marilyn dress was too much. I thought I wasn't gonna recover to finish reading it. And it's all your fault that I can now perfectly picture Seto Kaiba in a white dress. As for the... tight outfit... I wish someone had drawn a fanart.
    I don't remember what I said in the review for Jou Cool, but I probably thanked you for an amazing story and a few entertaining hours.
    I'm aware you have yet another story, and I'm looking forward to reading that one too, but maybe tomorrow since I skipped sleeping today reading this one.
    I don't care if you don't even use this website anymore, I just had to tell you all this, somehow. And I should say much more, but I'm too sleepy.
    Thanks!
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  • From on November 29, 2009
    i like it! wished u liked mine uu ^^ mokuba is so cute!
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  • From melodyz07 on July 22, 2007
    Wow! this story was incredible. I love it! Seto was really impressive for all he have done to find Jou. This love between them is so sweet. And when Seto invited Jou to the japanese restaurant and was so happy to have Jou for him again...it was simply so touching. Poor Jou! I'm happy for what happened to his grandfather at the end of the story. He really deserves that. As for the scene with God, it was great and unexpected! I loved this scene^^
    You are very talented. Can't wait for your next puppyshipping story^^
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  • From MystikIvanow on June 25, 2007
    A-ha! I found the end of your little story here. LOL

    And I liked very much how Seto cherished Jou in such incredible way. *winks*

    Good one!!! And I reallywnat to see that little story from Jou you posted the tease...

    Kissus!
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  • From Wicabeth on June 24, 2007
    Mmmm, beautiful, hot lemon there, hon. And the necklace just tugged at my hopeless romantic heartstrings.

    I was dying to see what you planned for this chapter XD
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  • From setoaddict on June 24, 2007
    Great last chapter! The lemon was hott, and I just LOVE they way Becca is punishing him using his body to be with another guy. How ftting, the bastard should suffer. Wonderful story!
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  • From ANON - lokivsanubis on June 24, 2007
    2 great stories in one week... what am i going to do without my boys around? Hurry and get to the other life times... LOL... Can't wait for your next stuff.

    Lokivsanubis
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  • From catti on June 23, 2007
    Domo arigatou for the lemon...and may maggiemay-sama sensai be well...catti
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  • From MishikoShinsei on June 23, 2007
    *sob* *sob* What a fabulous ending! I'm all mushy with love!! It's been a great story overall. A wonderful, emotional, well-written romp. And like I said before, I suck at reviwing, so I apologize for not saying anything until now, but know that you are definately one of my favorite writers and I can't wait to read more of your stories.

    *glomptackles*
    *snugs*
    *prays you are better*
    'Ko
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  • From ANON - rage on June 11, 2007
    i loved that story!!!!!! i really like the way you finished it. GOOD JOB!!!!
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  • From dragonlady222 on May 19, 2007
    Great chapter. Joseph is getting just what he deserves. I couldn't think of a more fitting punishment.
    I hope Maggiemay is feeling better and getting stronger. That must have been one hell of a pneumonia to have to put her on a ventilator. Tell her we love and miss her but we will wait until she is better and stronger. I would rather wait than to see her ill.
    Her health is more important than any story.
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  • From catti on May 19, 2007
    I was kind of hoping for a lemon filler...there was promises of it in the last chapter...Jou getting stronger...a little teaser here and there...but it did not happen...could you do a filler lemon?...Jou and Seto were teasing so much that I thought a lemon would be the next chapter....(get better maggiemay...we love you and will send out good thoughts on your health)...catti
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  • From Wicabeth on May 19, 2007
    !! Maggie didn't tell me she was sick! Bap her one for me (gently though!) Though I noticed she wasn't on as much as usual.. *hugs you both!*

    And, like I said on LD, Joseph got what he deserved *stabs him for good measure though*

    And I'm excited about Jou Cool =D
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  • From catti on May 19, 2007
    OMG!!Maggie...I hope you are okay..Kami..if there is anything you or your family need just email me and I will do everything in my power to help you and yours...damn..now I feel soo guilty because of our differences...but I will igorne it because of this...love you maggiemay...heart felt wishes to you and yours sent out....catti..
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